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Reviews For The Fiercest Sun
Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2012 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 15

Glad to see the update. I feel for Bella and her sticky situation. Until next time!

Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2012 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 15

Great chapter! Love the story! Update again soon please!! 

Reviewer: rtpobsessed (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2012 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 15

FINALLY! Whew, great chapter!

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2012 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 15

Is this going to be all BPOV? Will there ever be a chance to see into E's mind & heart?

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2012 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 15

Wow, he came for her!!! can't wait to see what happens next !!

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2012 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 15

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2012 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 15

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2012 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 15

Squeee...I hope she tells him about what happened I hope she doesn't brush it off if they want a real relationship beyond sex they need to talk!

Reviewer: Red Koolaid (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2012 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 15

ooh, ooh, ooh, so love this story, and this chapter is exceptional. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Don't keep me waiting too long.

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2012 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 15

:)

Reviewer: gadberry1 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2012 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 15

How kind of the Game of Thrones fellows to sponsor the event. Clever, made me LOL.  Another seething chapter.  I can't see this ending well for B & E, but what an enjoyable ride. Thanks.

Reviewer: Edwards kissoflife (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

really wish you would continue this...would like to see how it works out, and where its headed



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Chapter 15 is in the queue! just a little longer!

Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 14

Hmm something fishy here...

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2012 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 14

I'm totally sucked in! Dying for more.

Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great chapter! Love the story! Update again soon please! 

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 14

Hmm, well the plot thickens.  I don't care what Aro and his family say he is, I really don't trust him.

Will Jasper be able to find more out about what happened between Edward and Victoria?  I hope so, I want to know, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 13

Hmmm, so Emmett hasn't been having an affair, but he has been very distant with Bella, so what has been going on?  Is it a case of just lack of communication and different sexual appetites? 

Bella's goodbye to Edward was so sad and the way he just quietly left whilst she was still talking.  I feel for Edward and I'd  love to know what he's feeling and thinking about all of this.

I can't believe that Bella told Emmett after finding out he's not been having an affair.  Personally, I would have kept my mouth shut, if it was truly over with the other person, lol.  Even when she was speaking with Emmett about wanting to put things right she didn't really believe it herself.  I think in her heart of hearts she realises that no matter what she thinks is the right thing to do, for everyone to be happy she needs to call it a day with Emmett and finish their marriage.  After her experiences with Edward she's never going to be truly happy with Emmett and that will begin to show given time.

Jane x

Reviewer: Chickey (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2012 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 14

Please tell me this will stay as a Bella and Edward story...

Reviewer: marissa64 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2012 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 4

Ok, yeah, love the flirting, but the pressing against the wall? That was hot.

Reviewer: marissa64 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2012 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great story so far - don't want to stop reading. I like hearing Bella's inner argument with herself and Edward is just as delicious as always. Quite the seducer.

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2012 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 14

Huh.  Wonder what Aro's up to?  I loved the note that edward sent with the Picasso.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2012 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 14

why would she take it as a threat??? does he think it's stolen????

Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2012 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 14

WOW, that was interesting.

Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2012 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 14

Ugh, I knew he was going to try to take that. I hope Bella doesn't leave it there for the night.

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