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Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2013 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 28
Poor Emmett. It makes sense that his problems were more deep rooted but his religious upbringing did mask that very well and I think most people, like Bella did, would assume that religion was the cause of Emmett's inability to open up and discuss sexual matters.
I'm glad that Bella's going home with Emmett, she needs time to heal and process everything that's happened and also to see Adam and be his mum, but I hope this isn't the end for her and Edward. As she said being with Edward has changed her and I feel that she'd be sacrificing too much to go back to Emmett and their marriage. Could they get past his initial and Bella's subsequent infidelity without pointing fingers? I couldn't. Emmett was obviously unhappy and missing something with Bella in the first place which is why he ended up in Rosalie's arms.
Jane x
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2013 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 28
Great! The whole plot with the nazi art seemed rather forced, but this is still a good story. I hope you update soon!
Reviewer: I laugh I hope I love (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2013 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 28
I really liked this chapter! It feels like something that has to happen between Bella and Emmett and for some reason a part of me wants to see them try to work it out... I'm looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2013 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 28
:)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2013 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 4
Well, Emmett IS cheating on her... It shows in the way he is being so critical of Bella-not just texts and phone calls
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2013 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 28
holy crow.. I wonder how much Rose knew before Bella.... How will he just leave Rose? Cause Bella sure as hell just cant forget Edward.... Post again soon <3
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2013 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 28
wow very vey nice keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2013 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed the early part of this story when it was exploring Bella's sexuality but now that it has gone to the dogs with all these cloak and gagger art theft nonsense (a quite unbelievable plot twist) and now sexual abuse of Emmet which is very uninteresting and totally off-tangent, I think we have to part ways with me being extremely disappointed. I'll look in once in a while to see if there is some improvement but on the whole I think you wasted a golden opportunity here. In any case, good luck on your next story. Bye-bye!
Reviewer: willowguess (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2013 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 28
arg!!
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2013 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 28
Thanks good chapter
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2013 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 28
Looking forward to more
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2013 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 27
lookingforward to more
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2013 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 27
Thanks good chapter
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2013 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 27
:)
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2013 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 27
Oh my God! Please don't send Edward to prison. I want Bella and Edward to get their happy ever after. It's clear that Bella could never settle for Emmett now, not even to keep the family together for Adam, and anyway you should never stay together just for the kids. I'm wondering what Emmett's going to say about all of this.
Jane x
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2013 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 27
sniffle EDWARD!!!!!! We all want Edward Em can have Rosie... I want Edward!!! I mean ummm Bella needs him..... They cant convict him he was forced... Damn Felix how can teh DA believe someone caught red handed...
Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2013 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 27
soo glad your back! really liked this story of course i want an Edward and Bella HEA please dont make him go to jail he was just a pawn in their evil game
Reviewer: frances fatuma (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2013 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 27
What's going on? One minute I was reading an intense albeit different beautiful love story. Next thing its some sort of action cloak and dagger police robbery of long lost treasures BS story. Its heading to the dogs. You lost me.
Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 26
is this story finished
Reviewer: delirium01 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2013 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 26
Ack. Love your story!! Hope you have time to update soon.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2012 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 26
HOLY HELL!! Way to go Bella!! She may have just saved both of their lives wow oh wow!!!! Can't wait for more... I for one would never ever want to see that place again hahahahah...Post again soon!!!!
Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2012 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 26
OMG please dont tell this is the end!
Reviewer: fleur50 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 26
WOW!
Reviewer: fleur50 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 25
WOW!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 26
looking forward to more
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