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Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2012 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 34- Meanwhile on the Road
I hope they can rescue Renesmee from Caius in time.
Author's Response: It is going to get intense. Keep reading.
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 33- Bet Me
very very nice chapter and i hope she will win. keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Author's Response: Thank you. As we amp up to the climax I hope the tension and peril are coming through. Preview will be sent in PM.
Reviewer: inukaino (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 33- Bet Me
Ummm.... NO RENESMEE!!!!! HOW? WHY? BUT? ugh, I'm spent....
Author's Response: Breathe... in with the good air.... out with the bad.... It is amping up to the climax and it is going to get intense. Stay with me though I promise it will be worth it.
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2012 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 33- Bet Me
Okay sick, sick & wrong. I have a sinking feeling about this whole deal, Nessie's going to be hurt.
Author's Response: She very well might... But she is determined not to fall into Caius' hands. Hope you are still invested...
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2012 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 32- Strategic Summit
I am impressed by this chapter! I was wondering how this would play out. I can't wait to read more. Update soon
Author's Response: Thank you. I post approximately once a week. So stay tuned.
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2012 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 32- Strategic Summit
very very nice i am very curious what will happen next time
keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Author's Response: Thank you. I like to keep you guys on your toes.
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 32- Strategic Summit
God I hope Nessie's plan works.
Author's Response: only time will tell...
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2012 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 31- Rings and Things
mmm i very curius what will happen
keep up the graet work and posy soon
bye bye
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. :)
Reviewer: soccerchick_14 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2012 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 31- Rings and Things
Wow...Leah is such a little selfish brat ! i can't believe she would do that to poor Alice just for her own gain !
Author's Response: Yeah, well Leah is who she is. She is self centered and vain, but she is not evil, and she is getting in over her head.
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2012 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 31- Rings and Things
Such a twist I did not see coming! Oh that stupid leah for being so selfish! I would have loved to have read the advice the girls shared, maybe as an outtake later?
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2012 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 31- Rings and Things
I love all the bounding between everyone. The family's too smart to fall for Leah & Caius trick, I mean come on now, he must really think they're stupid or something.
Author's Response: The danger is amping up...
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2012 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 30- Family Matters
Stupid Sam,anyway!
Author's Response: Yes he is, but not hopeless. Someone needed to kick him in the butt to make him see things as they were.
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2012 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 30- Family Matters
hey
this was very very very good chapter, the speach that Renesmee has given Sam was exactly what he needed and i hope he listen very good and do something about it.
keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Author's Response: Thank you. My mother actually inspired the chapter telling me someone needed to put Sam in his place. Look for the preview in PM.
Reviewer: TheSneakyFox (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 30- Family Matters
I love it and I love Renesmee's rant. It was so beautiful and so passionate. Well done, my dear, well done.
Author's Response: Thank you. She is a firecracker is she not?
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 30- Family Matters
Awww how touching, I'm so glad they see each other for who they really are. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, looking through the eyes of love puts the whole world in a better light. Don't you agree?
Reviewer: mrsckugs (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 30- Family Matters
Yay for nessie!
Author's Response: That's our girl!
Preview will be sent via PM
Reviewer: soccerchick_14 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2012 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 29- Know Your Place
WOW ! i absolutely love this story !! I wonder what emily will think ? Jacob is marrying a former slave. . .i honestly dint think em & sam will take it too well haha:)
PLEASE keep writing! i am in love with this story<3
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I will keep writing. It is a labour of love and I will not give up. I'll send the preview to your PM
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2012 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 29- Know Your Place
I wonder how that will go, the telling of his sister. That could be crazy. Specially if leah is there.
Author's Response: It certainly will not go the way many think it will.... Hmmmm?
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2012 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 29- Know Your Place
this was realy realy nice keep up the fantastic work and post soon
bye bye
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. I really hope you continue to read, review, and enjoy.
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2012 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 29- Know Your Place
I can't wait for the talk with Jake's sister, that should be interesting. :)
Author's Response: Interesting is a good word for it. Thanks for reading Syd. I'll send you the preview.
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2012 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 28- Tentative Steps
I am so glad you updated! I read every chapter and have reviewed every chapter yet my phone doesn't always let the review stay. I love this story. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliments and the support. It has been a true labor of love for me, and I am thrilled that people are enjoying it. I'll send your preview in PM.
Reviewer: happy girl 123 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 28- Tentative Steps
Omg finnaly
Author's Response: They have some growing pains to get through... Things change, as do people. But at least they have found their way back to each other.
Reviewer: happy girl 123 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 26- Declarations and Interruptions
Seriously f -ing hate caius!!!
Author's Response: LOL, just wait... you think you hate him now... (dramatic music swells)
Reviewer: happy girl 123 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 09:15 PM · On: A Precious Gift - Chapter 3
Calm thy self, ti's thee best post today
Author's Response: Oh thank you. I am so glad you are enjoying it.
Reviewer: sam681 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2012 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 28- Tentative Steps
been busy for weeks and missed reading some chapters, finally got caught up. Love this story, just curious, but about how many more chapters will it have?
Author's Response: It is a fairly long story... thinking somwhere around 40=45 chapters.
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