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Reviewer: luv4jake (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2012 12:13 PM · On: The Story of a Young Girl - Chapter 1

looks promising yet sad but interesting.

Author's Response:

thank you. It is a story that has become quite special to me. I hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2012 06:52 AM · On: A Precious Gift - Chapter 3

lol i know the feeling. After i posted my first lemon, i needed a really cold shower!

 

you did really good for your first try!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I am much more comfortable now and there are many in this story.

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2012 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 15- Considerations and Conditions

I think Jacob should try and free Nessie.



Author's Response:

Do you really think he could be as selfish as he appears in the end of this chapter? He loves her. Have faith in him. Preview will be sent by PM

Reviewer: sam681 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2012 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 15- Considerations and Conditions

amazing, one of my absolute favorite stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am thrilled at the response the stoy has received. Look for the preview in PM

Reviewer: kwendgreat (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2012 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 15- Considerations and Conditions

I love the pace you're taking in tying everything together. I feel Jacob's passion and how it plays well with the crafted plot.

It's inspiring, to be honest. I can't wait to read more chapters :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I like a nice slow burn. I think it makes the steaks higher if you can feel the emotions of the characters.

 

Look in PM for your preview.

Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2012 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 15- Considerations and Conditions

Well... thats certainly something Jacob needs to think about...

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Oh yes. Imagine giving up the person you love to set them free. Can you think only of them? Should you think only of them? Decisions.... Decisions....

 

Look for PM of preview.

Reviewer: MrsJacobBlack0028 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 06:40 PM · On: A Precious Gift - Chapter 3

Amazing. Just amazing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I hope you keep reading and reviewing. I like to answer questions and theories. Please share your thoughts with me.

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 14- Comfort and Consequences

Awww Jacob is so romantic, that's hard to find now days sadly.



Author's Response:

Ain't that the truth. He is trying so hard to make her understand her worth to him. But it is not an easy task. I'll send the preview to you directly.

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 13- A Room at the Inn

I hope the meeting goes well & everything works out.



Author's Response:

yes, and no. there are many obstacles in the path of our lovers.

 

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Wants and Desires

I am all agog as to how this will play out.  I cannot see you making this end badly for our hero or our heroine, so I am interested in the path you'll take to get them to a place where they are unthreatened and happy. :)



Author's Response:

There are many twist and turns yet to come. I will send you a sneak peak in your PM.

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Wants and Desires

I feel trouble coming.

 

Thanks for the comment about my profile, I don't think very many people view it.



Author's Response:

Yeah fasten your seatbelts, we're in for a bumpy ride.

Reviewer: Aerinha (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Slow Punishments

I do not bookmark often, but this story I did! You have a skill as a writer that I am enjoying. I think this would make a good full length book even. You write emotions and sex scenes well, without being in the least distastful. I enjoy all the plays on words from the original Twilight Universe. Make sure you keep your language forms within your univerise, because even the slightest step out causes a reader to jolt out of the story a bit. If there is a next time I will try to point it out. This is a masterful story. ;) And I look forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

thank you so much. i have tried very hard to ensure that the language is consistent, my apologies if I stumble. I am honored by you kind words and hope you continue to read and review.

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Slow Punishments

Wow. That is a definitive declaration there, Jacob!

I feel bad for him, because he is seeing her only as a slave - not able to be his true equal.  But then she never sees herself that way, either, so it works.

 

She seems to gain confidence with sex. It's funny. It's like, when it involves sex, she can say what she wants, but the rest of the time, she's very deflective and reflective, but not communicative of herself.



Author's Response:

She is growing in her self awareness and will continue to do so. There is much adjustment to be made by each to make a go of things. 

 

I'll send your preview in PM

Reviewer: BellaPevensie96 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 11 - Slow Punishments

Love the story! Does he free her and marry her later?



Author's Response:

He does free her... But that is not all there is to it. There are many obstacles fo our lovers to overcome.

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2012 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Slow Punishments

I'm praying  Jacob can find a way to change Nessie's station, can Edward & Bella help in any way?



Author's Response:

He can, and they can. However... freeing ness is not the easiest process for either of them. I will send you a preview of chapter 12 to your PM.

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2012 05:27 PM · On: Home Coming - Chapter 10

Hmm I wonder what Jacob's gonna do now. 



Author's Response:

hmmm ... What would jacob do? LOL

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 09:34 AM · On: Lines Crossed - Chapter 9

Ohhh.... I am so not liking Sam and Emily. Gosh, horrid people.  

Leah is... just acting as a woman of her class and position, I imagine.  Dismissive, but yeah.  

I feel terrible for Jacob and am still wondering where Ness got her mindset. lol  I'd be so tired of that kind of necessary groveling by this time.  



Author's Response:

She was trained as a slave. Her mindset was kind of programmed into her. She has no rank, no station. In this society she is less than a person.

 

but Jacob does not treat her so, and never shall.

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 09:26 PM · On: Lines Crossed - Chapter 9

How is Jacob gonna change Nessie's status, it seems almost impossible.



Author's Response:

In order to free a slave one must petition the king to release her. Sounds easy, right? Not so much. I hope you continue to enjoy, read, and review.

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 01:13 PM · On: Declarations - Chapter 8

Yep, definitely want to know more about Nessie's background.

Cannot abide Emily OR Sam, which is too bad. I enjoy liking Sam.

Why could Jacob not countermand Sam's order to Ness?  I didn't understand that.

 

I would love to have more visuals as to the details of the world in which you have placed us.  Smells, textures, what the kennels are like, what their every day clothing feels like, etc.  it would be nice to feel as if I were there. :)



Author's Response:

Jake could have countermanded Sam;s order, but it would open him up to censure and danger. This is made clear in later chapters.

Other details also imaerge I promise.

 

:)

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 08:42 AM · On: Love Lessons- Chapter 7

Okay, what do the girls do about birth control, as slaves? Or do they worry about it? Is this how more slaves are bred, in Volterra?  I haven't heard mention of it so I wondered (after the thoughts about Jacob and kids and so on...).

Nice compromise with Emmett - I am in hopes that Edward and Bella are okay with Jacob's promise.

Aw, so Ness didn't learn anything new?  That does surprise me, for it sounded as if she thought she had, but Jacob didn't notice? Men! *making a face*

 

 



Author's Response:

lol. slaves are bred with other slaves. But female slaves are innoculated against prgnancy and can only breed after being treated with slave wine which counter acts the birth control. Good questions!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 07:47 AM · On: Journeys begun - Chapter 6

A steed named Rabbit. That killed me. lol And Volvo?  *dies*

It is wise to use an intelligent slave as an informant. ;-)

 

Okay. Kennels. That sounds so horrid, to me, in terms of humanity but for these people, this is the word and I get that.  I see that Nessie is existing between two worlds - she is a slave but is not identifying with them as she used to do (not surprising) but she does not see herself as free, either.  She seems not at all uncomfortable with this, but I wonder if it will grate upon her later.

 

Jacob as a bachelor sounds funny as he is not living, truly, as a bachelor in the way we understand it, I guess.  He has claimed Nessie in front of witnesses but only as a master, not a spouse, so he is free to marry...

 

And I have the feeling that he is going to want the kids and all that eventually. With Nessie. And that might be tricky!

 



Author's Response:

Tricky is definately one word for it. It is the bulk of the story. :)

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 07:08 AM · On: A Calculated Risk - Chapter 5

Nicely played, Mistress Bella. She does understand her friend and I am glad she found a way to ease the situation.

Nessie's utter submission is a gift. Her comprehension of her own sensuality and the ease to which she succumbs to Jacob make it seem as if she has been spending her entire life in preparation for such servitude. Makes me wonder what she did before she was captured! 

 

 



Author's Response:

that will be revealed in later chapters. :) so glad you are enjoyiong it.

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 06:49 AM · On: Captives and Captors - Chapter 4

So do we get to emasculate Jacob for how he has made Nessie feel? PLEASE?

She was very brave to be willing to let herself, in essence, be used as ransom for an evening, poor dear.  I thought it was disgusting, but nicely handled. :)



Author's Response:

Yes we kind of do... wow had not quite thought of it that way.

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 06:33 AM · On: Lessons and Talents -Chapter 2

This very Arabian-nights feel of the story is sweet. I would love to have more information about the society in which it is set.  :)

Renesmee's desire for Jacob is heated but innocent, too, and I like that.  

 



Author's Response:

what would you like to know. I think many things are cleared up as the story progresses, but I am willing to answer any question you have

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2011 06:52 PM · On: Declarations - Chapter 8

I feel bad for them because they have to hide from each other in a way.



Author's Response:

They do in many ways. But there are dangers to them should their true feelings be known. Besides as their affection grows deeper they become more and more comfortable with each other.

 

The story has a slow burn... story wise. ut I promise you a HEA.

 

Thanks you for your reviews and your support I hope you continue to enjoy.

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