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Reviewer: zellie (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Lights Out
more!! it makes me almost (big almost) wish that i hadn't found your story till it was completed so that i could have read it straight through--i'm so impatient to know what happens! i guess the anticipation makes it more fun :) great writing as always...loved the 'right hand, my dick' line--so funny. i hate to be greedy but please update soon! it's only the beginning of the semester anyway ;)
Reviewer: jasperhalelover (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Lights Out
omg i am so excited this a great story please please keep writing it is getting hot update as soon as you can please!!!!!!!
Reviewer: cheeseum_ (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Arriving
I really love this story, the situation and your ideas are excellent!
That being said, I have to say I agree with one of the previous commenters, I understand that at the begining you were establishing their characters by posting the two different point of views, but I think the readers understand the characters enough now to start having separate scenes in each chapter. After a while, it does get a bit repetitive but my main problem with the repetition is that I get so worked up to see a new chapter, thinking "yes! the story has updated" and then I find out I've read most of it.
Don't get me wrong, it is your story, I love it and I will most likely continue reading it no matter what you choose to do, because I'm pretty much obsessed with it.
On another note, I have a burning desire to play twister in front of the fire with your Edward now. (sorry about the massive review)
Reviewer: TWILIGHTRULESZ (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Lights Out
this is my favourite story, out of every story i've read, it's even in my favourites! please please please! keep writing, i really wanna know what happens next - i like edward POV the best. PLEASE keep writing.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Lights Out
Well, that was unexpected about Edward's reaction to Jacob! Huh. But that definitely made it more interesting. And yeah, liked the ending. hehe Aggressive Bella, melikes.
Reviewer: fanpire408 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Lights Out
post!really fast! its starting to heat up! i dont like jacob in any fanfic or in the actual series so it all works out! i want edward and bella to get together so post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: twerd (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Lights Out
that was well... FREAKING STEAMING! Man! And so, now i will go back to waiting for another chapter, please don't make me wait for long. please?
Reviewer: fanpire408 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Resolution
haha
just flirt and then mount him
haha
Reviewer: fanpire408 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Humiliation
My favorite line is, "Every kitchen should come with a Bella."
Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Lights Out
Oh my God what a wonderful chapter. I loved how she just grabbed his hair and took control.......update soon thanks
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Lights Out
Awww, blackouts rock :)
Reviewer: kuntrygal (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Lights Out
Loved it! I love reading Edward's pov!
Reviewer: kamce (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Lights Out
I like your story alot, I just kinda wish you didn't do the two different POV thing. I get excited for an update only to see it is the same as the last Chapter, only Bella this time.
We all know they like each other, and their thoughts aren't that different. I just think the story would progress more smoothly if you didn't do it that way.
Reviewer: Princess2000204 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Lights Out
Finally some hot sex by the fire place? Begging with a cherry on top!!!!!
Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Lights Out
Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
Reviewer: AmandaMCullen (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Lights Out
this story just keeps getting better and better:) so good!
Reviewer: Emmybooboo (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Lights Out
I am loving this story, there is nothing more romantic than being snowed in with a warm fire and a lot of passion.
Reviewer: dreamsatnight (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Lights Out
yay for them! (:
Reviewer: emmettsbutterfly (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Lights Out
YAY!!!! I loved the new chapter keep it up!!!(sorry I sound like a really shitty volleyball coach,but i can't wait for more!)
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Lights Out
Yep, if I'd have to make a guess it would be that Edward does not like Jacob!
Wow two chapters since I was last on line. Soooooo, a little snuggling in front of a fire on a cold winters night? Been there done that and that's all I'm sayin about that.
Loved that both Bella and Edward tried to call Alice. Way too cute. And the game of Twister .... who wouldn't jump at the chance to play Twister with a Cullen man?
So much fun to read - Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: Keela Byrne (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Lights Out
I loved it! :D
Reviewer: Feisty (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Lights Out
well isn't this an interesting turn...
Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Tour
All of Edwards internal dialogue cracks me up!
Reviewer: Sparky (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Lights Out
I love it!!! can't wait till you update!!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Lights Out
Where they left off!? That's how we end this chapter, I wanted to hear more about the continuation! J/K not really though. Can't wait for more.
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