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Reviewer: Milliehud (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Lights Out
AGHH!! YES!!
Reviewer: anwozny (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Lights Out
I had to regsiter just so I could tell you how fucking fantabulous 'right hand, my dick' was. I lol'd so hard!
Reviewer: ImaFampire (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Lights Out
Wonderful story, it's really great. I can't wait to read what happens next. I'm glad Edward and Bella finally got together, well... made a move is more appropriate. Great story, update soon!
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Lights Out
I just finished reading all you;ve written so far, and I love it!! It's awsome. I hate Jacob, but it would be cute to see Edward jealous! Write soon.
ps-I get what you mean with the school thing. Don't they realize the importance of fanfiction? lol
Reviewer: rhepona (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Lights Out
I knew this chapter was going to be good! "Would it be too forward to pretend the spinner read right hand, my dick?" HAhaha I love it! And they don't need Jacob to fix the generator! they'll just have to keep each other warm! I'm sure they can think of something ;)
PS The only part I didn't like, was when the story ended. . .
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Lights Out
yay no generator. now hey have to huddle up to keep warm... and they kissed... AGAIN! ok i am officially in love with this story. this chapter was really funny. oh edwards thoughts... lol.
Reviewer: cole5183 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Lights Out
Please, please, please!! I can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: fanpire-4-life (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Lights Out
GAH!!!!!!!! more!!!! i need a good lemmon right about now
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Lights Out
i love this!!!!! post more, more, more!
Reviewer: mari cullen (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Lights Out
Great chapter! Please update soon!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Lights Out
hehe, cute ending!
Reviewer: mindfreakchick (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Lights Out
dang you and your cliffhangers!! >.> lol
good job... keep up the great work! 0:)
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Lights Out
Go them for all the forwardness. I like it.
Reviewer: addicted_2_twilight (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Lights Out
ahhhhhhhhhhh... your absolutely evil for leaving me at that cliffy lol. I loved this chapter!! And how you included the Jacob/Edward rivalry.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon [:
Reviewer: where9 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Lights Out
Mmm, cool! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: moonlipse (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Lights Out
I'm reviewing! Hurry with the next chapter! You're doing great!!
Reviewer: brooklyn (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Lights Out
LOVE IT! I can't wait for an update!!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Lights Out
Wow, not only did he show some balls by kissing her, but also by telling her how he felt.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Lights Out
I want to play Twister with Edward! This was a hot chapter, and we haven't even gotten to any smut yet! Nice writing. I loved how you took care of the rivalry between the Quileutes and the Cullens. Land disputes are a very logical choice.
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Lights Out
Aww, I really liked this chapter. It was nice to hear about the day from Edward's point of view :-) And I totally kept cracking up when I read about his difficulties, uh, controlling himself during the game of Twister! But I think the sweetest moment came when he confessed his feelings to Bella, that she was "the most everything" he'd ever met.
I'm so looking forward to the update! And it had better be quick...'cause I want to find out what happens next :-)
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Lights Out
Go Bella! I'm glad she took over at the end, that was great. Of course Edward has to not like Jacob, so that could mean he may be out of the picture, especially with Bella's actions at the end of the chapter. Now they'll have to stay pretty close to each other, maybe even play twister again.
Please up date soon, even with school and life
Reviewer: denmother (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Lights Out
Gah. Hot kisses in front of the fire make me need a ciggie!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Lights Out
Great chapter!! I'm glad Jacob's weird behaviour was explained!! Can't wait to read more and see how the generator gets fixed or how they 'generate' their own heat! LOL!
Reviewer: christykq (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Lights Out
Edward is just stalling. What happened between the Cullens and the Blacks? Hmm... could be interesting.
Too bad the electric went out and B+E have to snuggle under blankets in front of the fire. Damn, the hardship they have to endure. LOL! I hope they make the best of it.
Update quickly. Great job. Great Banner too, that's what attracted me to your story at first.
Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Lights Out
YES!!! WOHOOOO!!!!!! *dances around* Now, for the smexing?
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