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Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Coming Clean
lovely chapter. they're so cute together. :)
Reviewer: AmberGlow (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Coming Clean
I really hope he keeps it!!!
Reviewer: Cullenfan (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Coming Clean
This chapter was so adorable. :) I love how sweet the moment in the bath was. It could've gotten dirty but instead it was beautiful. I'm so excited for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Coming Clean
Heheheh. Ok, um, question? How can he fill a tub up without the electric water heater??? Plot flaw or something else? Sorry, I had to ask. More please. :)
Author's Response: I thought about that. But I'm pretty sure that there would still be hot water in the heater. If not...whatever haha
Reviewer: sillyinfatuation (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Coming Clean
okay. im reviewing so i can have more. i love them so much. i love this storyyyyy. ugh. its so different than anyone elses and i like that. :] KEEP IT UP.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen_1901 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Coming Clean
Great story! Update soon please! :D
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Coming Clean
Of course I want to read it. Don't be silly. I love this story so much. I am thrilled you are the #4 fav.
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Coming Clean
I want someone to give me a nice bath too! lol this chapter was so cute and Edward only gets more and more adorable... LOVE IT!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:45 AM · On: Coming Clean
Oh Bella, so silly. I can think of one couple who Edward certainly hopes/wants to play Twister again on that mat. *giggle* The bath was sweet, but Edward may have to come clean about the whole generator/clueless thing. I can't blame him for not wanting to call Jacob, but I think he'd feel even worse if he ends up having a frozen Bella on his hands.
Reviewer: MrsPattinsonheart2 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Coming Clean
ohhh loves it!!!
Reviewer: ieatsourgrapes (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Coming Clean
Omg that chapter was so cute! :)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Coming Clean
I want a jacuzzi tub...
Reviewer: EverlongYou (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Coming Clean
HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER OR I WILL UNLEASH EVIL THINGS ON YOU!
Grrrrrrrr..
(please?)
=)
Reviewer: AmberGlow (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Burning
“No. Don’t be sorry. I’m not, far from it in fact. It’s a good story- losing your virginity to the perfect guy on a Twister mat while being snowed in. It’s quite original.”
LOL
Reviewer: sillyinfatuation (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Burning
i just read all of this and it was absolutely fantastic. you have got to update soon.
Reviewer: SottoVoce (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Burning
OMG I LOVE YOU:
' "Say it," I commanded in a rough voice. "Say it... out loud." '
Never thought to turn that movie line into smutty goodness; it totally made the scene for me having this vivid flashback to RPattz's sexy voice... and then the next line made me laugh. Clever, clever girl!
Reviewer: Nia (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Burning
hot hot hot!!
Reviewer: SexxyVampire (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Burning
What an awesome story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: ilovedwardcullenmost (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Burning
AHHH i just read this whole thing...SO GOOOODDDDD loved it!
Reviewer: count_bessy (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Burning
Eee, I can't believe I haven't read this before! I feel like I just got a present.
I've really only skimmed (I'm terrible and have to make sure that the story isn't going to leave me at a nerve-wracking moment because I have so little tolerance for angst) and I can't wait to go back and read the entire thing in detail now. :)
Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Burning
So i just sat and read your entire story, i loved it! You did a great job with it. I usually don't like the stories where edward is not a vampire, but you did an amazing job still keeping him Edward. Can't wait to read more! :-)
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Burning
Wow! Losing your virginity on a twister mat...not really that romantic...but it sure is priceless! This was a great chapter and very well-written.
Can't wait to see what's in store for Edward and Bella next?!
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Ironic
Awesome story! I'm enjoying it very much!!!!
Reviewer: Mamasebring (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Lights Out
Wow this story is great.
Reviewer: Edward_Torn_Emmett (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Arriving
Great story, Please add more soon. I'm all but dying to find out what's going to happen next with the heart-stopping couple.
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