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Reviewer: denmother (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Acceptance
hands down this is my favorite chapter.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Acceptance
Awesomely written. Can't wait to see what you have happen next.
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Acceptance
That was hot and steamy, just how I like it! Great chapter!
Reviewer: TeamJacob (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Acceptance
well i just read that whole thing. Couldnt stop if i wanted to.
(:
and does the original artwork have to be a drawing? or can it be non-twilight related pictures?
Reviewer: jakeward (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Acceptance
Holy Smokin Catfish!!! That was a great chapter! And a big yay to Edward for fixing the generator!
Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Acceptance
Aww, great chapter! I'm so glad that Bella was accepting of Edward's confession. But I think it makes sense--he was so accepting of her, so why shouldn't she do the same for him?
Yay! Edward fixed the generator! As much as I think Jacob's a nice guy, I really didn't want him interfering with Bella and Edward's time together LOL. I'm curious though, will Jacob be making any appearances in later chapters?
I loved the lemon, of course. Very sweet :-)
I hope you can update soon. I love this story!
Reviewer: anwozny (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Acceptance
that was indeed, definitely an orgasm.
sheesh.
Reviewer: NettieMarsh (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Acceptance
lol i knew he would keep it. if it wasnt edward he totally creep me out. im so biased. but man he is too funni tryna act like he was havin hard time wit the generator and bella was so adorable wen she didnt know if she experienced an orgasm or not. oh and "Bella’s clothes were on liquidation. They all had to go." had to be my fave line
but i have to say i loath the line from the movie," hold on tight spider monkey" that line drives me crazy. its so corny. im sorry if you like this line but it just irritates me. please dont hate me for it i beg of. but other than that i loved this entire chapter.
and congrats on moving up the top 10. and how are the tshirts comin along?
Reviewer: fanpire-4-life (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Acceptance
whooo that was fun :)
Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Acceptance
Great chapter, i LOVE this story. please update soon :)
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Acceptance
great story! can you keep them snowed in as long as possible???
Reviewer: offthenet (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Acceptance
After that, I can't believe all the snow outside didn't melt! I'm so glad they didn't have to call Jacob ...
Another great chapter. It's easy to see why you're climbing the ranks. Can't wait for another update!!
Reviewer: pearls8 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Acceptance
ooh they are so damn cutee, i can picture them trudging out it the snow!
I LOVE THIS STORY! can't wait for another update!!!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Acceptance
Great chapter!! I'm glad Edward figured out the generator!! WOOO! Oh and just so you know....if there is a gas hot water heater at the cabin they would have had hot water no matter what-unless of course there was a flood that extinguished the pilot light. I don't know of any gas hot water heaters with a pilot light that don't still work in a power outage. They don't need electricity to run-just gas. So...there you go!!! :)
Reviewer: All4isis (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Good Morning
This is really awesome! I love the idea of Edward and Bella being trapped together. The cabin seems to be big enough that they can have alone time if they want, or they can do a whole myriad of things together. I also liked how both Edward and Bella consider the other one to be the exception to the rule - the one in a million that they could actually want. I can't wait to see how they come to realize that there is potentional for a relationship.
Reviewer: slo13 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Acceptance
Awesome! I loved the "spider monkey" inclusion. Is inclusion a word??? Whatever, keep writing! The story is great!
Reviewer: Mya Jacobs (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Acceptance
Amazing, I need to go take a cold shower now... I love that she had the courage to ask him if she "finished" and that this time he was all the more ready to make sure she knew she did. Also glad Jake hasn't made another appearance, at least not yet. Can't wait for chapter 19. Congrats on climbing up the top 10 you deserve it!!!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Acceptance
How sweet that Bella has enough confidence in Edward to ask him that, and that she doesn't care about his past, something that was bothering him. And Edward trying to play handyman, he was really lucky it was as simple as a plug, lets hope it is.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Acceptance
Hot! Loved it. Update soon!
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Acceptance
Hot! Loved it. Update soon!
Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Acceptance
Wow.... *passes out from nose bleed*
Reviewer: MrsPattinsonheart2 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Acceptance
haha yayyyy!! that was so awesome!! I am so glad that I am not a guy.. i would probably have a boner :P lol
thanks for writing- I love this!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Acceptance
WOW! Way to go Eddie! LOL ;)
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Acceptance
hahaha. That last line was FANTASTIC!! "Alright. That was definitely an orgasm" heheehhe.
I'm really glad that he made it his personal mission to make sure that she knew she had an orgasm =] hehehe.
I'm also pretty thrilled that Edward was able to fix the generator without asking Jake for help!!! hehehe. I was worried that Jake would come and interrupt the love nest.
I'm so happy for you!!!!! You're climbing the most favorited ranks and I can't wait til you're number 1!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!
Reviewer: Syndie (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Acceptance
THX
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