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Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Intimacy
They are too sweet together. I like your Bella's boldness.
Reviewer: Twilightlvr (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Intimacy
Ahhh, Bella's turn was hot and sexy! And Edward was so cute when he asked if she wanted to sleep in his bed. Who the hell would say no to him?! Really liked all of the questions he was asking her. I think he's smitten, trying to get to know her better. Just adorable. Can't wait to read the rest of Bella's turn.
Reviewer: BethanyKnight (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Intimacy
loved it. excited to see what she ahs in store. until next time...
Reviewer: TheLionandTheLambx3 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Intimacy
Phewwww that was Hottttttttt post asap
Reviewer: kimmasen (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Intimacy
I LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Intimacy
I can't wait to see what she does next.
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Intimacy
I like confident Bella! I thought it was hilarious how she sat there and studied Edwards penis and all of that. I was laughing. Penises are funny though, I think everyone can admit that :)
Great chapter though! Looking forward to see how else Bella wears Edward out!
Reviewer: Jamiejo7984 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Intimacy
I really liked Bella thoughts on intamacy. I want to hear Edwards thoughts now on something similar. They both seem so afraid to *really* be honest with each other in their attraction/pull towards each other...that they think they are going to scare the other away. I hope they will be able to really lay things out there before they both leave.
Other than that seriousness...them having sex is HOT!! Though it does NOT help to read it at work. lol
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Intimacy
ooh so good. cant wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Intimacy
Oooh.....more lemony goodness! So...time for them to start talking about what's going to happen 'after'. And wait until Alice gets in the mix (although my bet is that she SOMEHOW already knows...)
Can't wait! More, more, MORE!
Reviewer: Lina (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Intimacy
Wish i could wake up like that every morning....it might just convert me to a morning person lol
Cant wait for the update.
Reviewer: bga1974 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Intimacy
I can't wait to see what else Bella has up her sleeve.
Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Intimacy
Smokin'!! What does our naughty little Bella have in store for Edward today? Can't wait to find out. Update soon please....
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Intimacy
That was awesome,especially to read Bella being in charge. I hope she has something naughty planned for Edward... ummm I just keep wondering when Alice is going to show up and see what has been happening. As if she doesn't know. I love your sneaky Alice. I can't wait till you update. Please do it soon and also I hope you feel better soon. Maybe Edward can swing by and make you some soup..=)
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Intimacy
“You’re looking very serious for someone wearing sweatpants. What are you thinking about?” The serious sweatpants comment? Priceless.
Reviewer: TWILIGHTRULESZ (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Acceptance
yay..... so this means there together right? and hopefully jacob isn't a big part to there story..... edward and bella- made for each other.
Reviewer: alicewhite3 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Acceptance
hahaha! i love it.
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Acceptance
Yay!!! Edward fixed the generator! Awww...and Edward is so sweet! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Acceptance
I loved this sex scene even more than their first time! Very well done...Especially with Edward fixing the generator ;0) lol
Reviewer: MandaKay (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Bewitched
I like your writing. The story line is also very interesting. My only complaint is that by giving us both BPOV and EPOV fully it gets a bit repeatitive. I dunno. Try to give both POVs without completely retelling the story.
Reviewer: Prizz Sweetie (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Acceptance
Aw, I liked how Bella and Edward's relationship has progressed. It's sweet.
Reviewer: Mamasebring (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Acceptance
Cute and HOT i love it
Reviewer: tayz13 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Acceptance
What will Alice say to this? Was this all her idea? Update soon!!!
Reviewer: krissyp8 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Acceptance
Wow. That was hot!
Reviewer: makovitza (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Acceptance
Lol - best awkward conversation ever! Oh, and excellent story overall. Please keep updating!! :-)
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