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Reviewer: Suelue123 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
Awesome story, update soon please.
Reviewer: tricomi (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
AMAZING! < applause > Cute, romantic, funny and I can't wait for update!
Reviewer: porche911turbo (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
ohmigosh. this story is just unfuckingbelieveable. you have got to update soon pretty please. im just dying to know what happens next
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
Update quickly!
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
I loved this chapter! Its cute how Edward just wants to make Bella happy and is realizing that he loves her. And the heart with the smiley face was cute but funny...and his explanation was sweet "you make my heart happy." Can't wait to see what happens next with Bella's turn.
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Something in Common
Stop making this so interesting so I can stop procrastinating and get some work done
Just kidding - this is awesome!
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Something Else
I love reading their thoughts and reactions in contrast to what they actually say.
The idea of Edward as a therapist to figure out people's thoughts is really clever
Reviewer: ashtreeh (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
omg please please update:P
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Ironic
Love it!
Reviewer: ashtreeh (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Twister
this is actually really funny:P
Reviewer: 123mef023 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Arriving
Amazing! I started reading last night and already finished the first 20 chapters. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: ashtreeh (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Staring
very sweet :)
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Double Booked
Hilarious
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Intruder
I love the banner
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Arriving
I just picked up this story. Love the beginning, can't wait to see where it goes
Reviewer: Twiclipse (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Humiliation
I loved how you put in the part when she said she wasnt afraid of him and he said, your really shouldn't have said that.
Reviewer: totallyeclipsed (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
Since Edward had enough confidence to become intimate with Bella, I'm sure he can man up enough to discuss (like any adult) his desire to continue their relationship beyond their 'snowed in' circumstances and get her number/email in addition. Given his profession and maturity level, in this story, it only makes sense.
By the way, very nice writing.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
Hot chapter! I love strawberries and whipped cream, now for another reason, haha. Update soon!
Reviewer: VampSK (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
Great chapter, I love it! It was nice to read EPOV during this chapter. I think it's adorable how he is debating "love" and then decides he's going to savor making her happy for now...great read! :-)
Reviewer: Leah_Clearwater (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
Excellent! I'm ready for alice to get involved....I want to know why she isn't answering her phone....
Reviewer: mari cullen (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
Wow! This chapter was so freaking hot!
Edward + strawberries + whipped cream= Mmmm....perfect combination
Reviewer: Jasperholic (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
LOVED LOVED LOVE THIS Update! <3 <3 <3 Cant wait for Part II. Edward was so adorable in this chapter!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
This was fanstatic keep it going but do let them realize that they can't live without one another. More Please Soon !
Reviewer: Kyrene (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
Oh snap, look at what he said in the end. Hm.....This was an awesome chapter. I love playful Edward. He's just too cute. He makes my heart happy too! His moments though when he thought that she'd like Seattle and the fact that snow melts, I love all that. His little inner thoughts. Can't wait for more, Keep Going!!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
IT SHOULD ALWAYS BE BELLA'S TURN...LOL!!! Very nice, I like the way they play back and forth. "Bella Magic" is a line I especially liked!
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