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Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
I'm thinking there's some weird sort of sex swing in there.
JEEZEEE. Way to leave a cliffie =PI keep hoping that one of them will slip and be like, "I love you...I mean, What?" because someone needs to crack first. I'm hoping it's Edward or maybe both of them at the same time. They just need to know they're thnking the exact same damn things. haha.
Amazing job, as always.
MORE PLEASE!
Reviewer: ShanShan (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
Won't do what?
Evil, cruel cliffhanger!
Loved the chapter though! Spanking. Nice. Spanking is good. :)
Hope RL lets you update again soon!
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
Yeah! An update. Nice chapter!
Reviewer: bellasunderstudy (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
That was great! Lots of stuff going on in this chapter! Sooooo what is behind the mystery door?? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
Hmmm... I wonder what's behind the door?
Awesome update.
Reviewer: NorthernCullen (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
Okay now I'm trying to help things move along, by reviewing! ^^
Still a great, great, great (a little uncreative today) story! And I hope the mess will clear up in the next chapter..that would be nice ^_- If she could just say she loves him already! That would be nice.. a fatastic story though.. ^_^
Reviewer: JAustenlover (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
Bloody Hell! I had a eight paragraph review typed in here and my two puppies just jumped up, hit my laptop keyboard with their paws and the review disappeared into unsent cyberspace! I want to spank BOTH of them!
As always, love your story and your update. I had a feeling this was going to get a bit angsty, especially after all the emotions and activities these two have experienced in such a short time frame.
Now unfortunately I am late to a meeting, but since I am bound and determined to hit the submit key...I will be back with another review (and a trip to the thread) tonight.
Hope your muse sings the lullaby to you over your spring break!
And a cliffie! Oh gosh...I sincerely hope your muse is singing during spring break.
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:56 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
Wow - I got no less than NINE e-mail notifications telling me this new chapter was up...I guess the site knew just how anxious I was for an update, LOL!
Loved it - they really are getting to that point where their gonna be inseparable...if only they would each get up the courage to say something!!! Miscommunication really is the burden of humanity (I know I certainly suffer from it, lol!). Can't wait for the next chapter, to find out just what it is that Bella "won't do", hehehe...I honestly tried to think of what it might be, and failed, so you're just gonna have to let us in on it! Glad to hear you're on spring break and that it may mean more time for writing, yay!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
I love this chapter. I can't see what Edward is hiding behind the door sorry. but I hope they get to the I love yous those are always my favorie parts. I think Edward needs to hurry up and grow some. hes the doctor didn't he say he studied body language. I'm pretty sure he knows How she feels between that and all his experiene with the ladies he knows its different.
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:40 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
WHAT'S BEHIND THE FUCKING MYSTERY DOOOOOOORRRRR?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Reviewer: beautiful_calamity (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
JEEEZE. WAY TO CLIFFHANGER.
Haha, just want to tell you I think you're awesome. I love this story.
Reviewer: Dental Diva (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
I loved this chapter. I love naughty Bella. I know life comes at you fast, but please update soon. We missed you and your fabu story.
Reviewer: MissJadey (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
I have an Specialist/Abstract Mathematics final in two days, and what am I doing? Reading this update. That would be because I just love your fic that much. Between discovering/reading this at a very bad time school-wise and then reading the update now, I'm all set to fail college, but at least I'll be failing with good fic in hand. ^_^
Thank you so very much for updating. You made exam week bearable.
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
Ok, now I'm confused. What's behind taht door that Bella won't do??
Bella really likes to put herself down doesn't she? Isn't that was the affirmation excersise was about? Wow, they really need to talk, it's obvious that they both want to say what they feel, and Bella's mind is only getting worse with doubt the longer they wait. Please let them talk soon! Spill their guts, as it were! Lol!
I really liked that excersise! That's a reall fun idea! And kinky Edward! Mmmm... Lol! Oh, so funny, and weird at the same time!
It's awesome how you've incorperated the Edward vampire tendencies into this chapter! With the neck bitting/nibbling, along with his love for music and composing a song just for Bella! That was sweet!
Hmm.. can't wait to read what's next! Don't make us wait too long, I'm begging you! Please?! :D *bats eyelashes and looks cute*
I Love this story! Don't ever let it end!
Reviewer: greis0221 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
ahh cliffhanger!! lol. Great chapter and thanks for making it super long!! Can't wait for the next chapter to be updated!!!
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 01:22 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
Awwww this chapter was adorable. I'm glad Bella enjoyed those smacks. It's always nice to see an update from you!
Reviewer: katyt22 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
Oh God...more,more, MORE!!!! I want so much to be stuck in a snow storm with Loveward!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
Heavy!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
Heavy!
Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
you are bad!! How could you finish the chapter like that!! I swear you will be the death of me!! (hummmmmmmm... think I heard that somewhere...)
Reviewer: dizzygrl28 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
Do what?! :) Bella is so blind! Edward's practically spelling out that he's falling ing love with her! I'm soooo happy you updated! A great chapter too....
Reviewer: miztrezboo (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Punishments and Salads
omg
the Bella map
with its stars and arrows and highlighted DO NOT MISS THIS sections!
Effing hilarious!
and her sobs.. oh Bella. YOU FOOL HE LURVES YOU!
lovely chapter!
Now whats behind that magic door...
Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Punishments and Salads
Great chapter, can't wait to read more..
Reviewer: coookies_n_cream (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Punishments and Salads
Gahhh!!! How could you leave us here?! Please, please, please update soon. I love this fic so much.
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Punishments and Salads
It was a great chapter. Definantly worth the weight. I think one of them needs to cave soon and say the L word!
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