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Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Twister
*claps happily* Yay finally! I loved the twister bit. Haven't played that in years. Great idea for their choice of game!
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Resolution
Ooo, Bella didn't take much note of Edward's fake dismisal. Well that's good! Can't wait to see how he handles, flirty Bella. lol. Great chapter!
Reviewer: jeanette (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Punishments and Salads
Oooh! What's in the closet? I can't wait!
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Humiliation
Oh dear Bella's going to be having kittens about that hug, I can just tell. Especially about the brotherly pat on the back and platonic smile! *sigh* Oh dear...... lol. Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait to read how things continue. :)
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Something Else
I love Edward's occupation. I hadn't realised at first how well it fitted, but I do now. It's a very clever idea!
Anyway, great chapter! Wish they were longer but I guess I can't complain too much since I don't have to wait for the next one. That much have been completely tormenting! >.<
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Punishments and Salads
Oh, no(Mr. Bill) - not a cliffhanger!
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Tongue Tied
You MUST be a 42 year old novelist in disguise
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Bewitched
lol I love each of their internal ramblings. It's such fun to read! I can't wait to read more and watch them fall for each other. >.< Great chapter! I'm really enjoying the story so far!
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Bella's Turn Part II
We knew Jane Austen was HOT`
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Ironic
Or so he thinks! he he Great chapter! I love their interaction and Edward's facination with Bella. I can't wait to read more! :)
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
Ungh :}
Reviewer: moneyy (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Punishments and Salads
omg keep writing keep writing please
lots of love
moneyy
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Intimacy
Speechless!
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Acceptance
MMMhmmm!
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Coming Clean
witty, funny, sweet.. what's not to like?!
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Burning
Very funny, Edward so original! Jeanna M
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Lights Out
oh, yes yes YES!
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Twister
Yay - kissing and a power failure...
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Resolution
Gawd, too funny
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Humiliation
"My pants no longer fit."
i busted a gut laughing on that understatement.
Jeanna M
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Something in Common
funny, sweet
Jeanna M
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Spark
very witty ! hope a power outtage leads to "shared heat"! Jeanna M
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Something Else
I loved the way she jumped on his bed !
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Tour
This little up and coming infatuation/love is being developed nicely!
Jeanna M.
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Staring
Great chapter. Read your bio -- not too many young people have heard of Kate Bush ! Cloudbusting, Man with the Child in His Eyes, Hounds of Love,
Red Shoes and my personal favorite, Why Should I Love You?
Jeanna M.
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