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Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Sweat
Oh for freakin' petes sake!!! I'm guessing it's Jacob at the door...whoever it is, tell them to GO THE F*CK AWAY!
Edward and Bella really, REALLY need to talk about the fact that they DO have a relationship, and what they're going to do about the "after" part of this issue.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Arriving
I hope its not the dog! I only don't mind cliffhangers if you update...soon.
Reviewer: Siren (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Sweat
Its sooo Jacob. I just know it. I hope I know it. HaHa! Cant wait!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Sweat
GOSH ALWAYS WITH THE INTERRUPTIONS AND PROCRASTINATING! excellent chapter!
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Sweat
WILL HE EVER TELL HER? He needs to share the love! Please? Soon?
Reviewer: playinginwater (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Sweat
.......(taking a min for my brain to get out of the gutter) sauna sex was phenomenal. It's almost summer and this story makes me wish for a good snow day. That's hard to do. I don't much like the snow.
betcha it's jake. :)
Reviewer: nerac (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Sweat
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How could you!! LOL
Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Sweat
It's just the ranger telling them they can go home?? Don't know! Thanks for the update to this great story! :)
Reviewer: Joico (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Sweat
UGH!!! lol.....don't wait soo long...not with this cliff hanger...but I am sure we know the angst about to come. Great story!
Reviewer: Defiance (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Sweat
Gahhhhh!!!!! Whoever is knocking on that goddamn door is going to die a slow and grisly death if I get there before the lovebirds do. He was SO CLOSE! SO SO SOOO CLOSE!!
If it's Alice I'm going to dress her in horrible 80s fashion.
If it's Emmett I'm going to take away all his toys and make him do something mind-numbingly boring for weeks on end.
If it's Jacob (and I have a bad feeling he may be coming to check on her) I'm going to lock him in a roomful of vampires.
It so better not be Carlisle and Esme, nothing makes a man shut his feelings up tighter than being around the parentals.
And I doubt it's Rosalie but she can be easily dealt with by chucking her under a car for a few days.
PUHLEASE update soon! *begs*
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Sweat
DAMMIT! Poor Edward is NEVER going to be able to voice his feelings to Bella! You and your damn cliffies!
I love this story, MORE!
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Sweat
I will never think of a sauna the same way. That was seriously hot! Edward getting interrupted at the end...you're too cruel for leaving me hanging! I think its Jake coming to check on Bella because that would probably cause some issues with Edward.
Reviewer: twlightobsessed (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Sweat
I'm hoping it's Jacob come to rescue Bella and cause some drama to the story. Can't wait to see what you have in story for us next. Awesome chapter and story.
Reviewer: momoffour (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Sweat
ARE YOU KIDDING ME???!!! That was SO hot!!! I need a cigarette now. That is what I am talking about...you didn't disappoint after the long wait. Please just forget about real life and write!!! Its JACOB at the door, ready to get them...will he ever tell her???
Reviewer: strike_a_pose (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Sweat
Please say it's not Jacob
Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Sweat
so happy for an update!
poor edward. so close, yet so far...lol
check out my one-shot on FF dot net under same author name. i am turning into a review whore. i totally understand it now!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Sweat
ArrrrgggghhhhH! Jacob??? Did jacob show up? Or the rescuers? I don't want them to leave yet. Don't let them!
Very well written. Loved this chapter, hot and sweaty Edward <swoooooooooon>
Can't wait for more, I hope you update soon!
Reviewer: Myheart (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Sweat
What the freak???? Don't just leave off there! What were you thinking crazy?
I'm betting on Alice or Jacob. :-)
Reviewer: Dazzled2Xtreme (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Sweat
I don't mind the cliff hangers as long as I don't have to suffer long in finding out what happens next. WONDERFUL update THANKS BUNCHES!!
Reviewer: Mellz (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Sweat
Yippy! Im so glad to see an update!!! I am so glad that it was a sauna!! The sauna sex was Hot!! I hope that Jake isnt at the door!!! I am all about Team Edward and Jake just pisses me off! LOL! Or maybe its Alice!
Reviewer: SmugUnicorn (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Sweat
Don't tell me they're going to be recused before he tells her. Damn it!!! Loved the sauna bit, Go Bella!!! Glad to hear you will be updating again soon, can't wait.
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Arriving
wow, this was So Hot!!! Iloved, it worth waiting, bus PLEASE update sooner the next chapter
I barely can wait to see edward telling her about his love, I think it's gonna be so lovely....
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Sweat
I hope it's not the people there to get them out of the snow storm! They need time to tell each other they love one another and figure out what's going to happen when they leave!
Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Sweat
IT'S SANTA!!!! HE COULDN'T FIT IN THE CHIMNEY, SO HE KNOCKED ON THE DOOR AND HE WANTS TO HAVE HOT THREESOME SEX WITH BELLA AND EDWARD!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Sweat
Thanks for the update!! Terrific chapter! OK, Edward, damnit, you guys are getting all kinds ofsexual satisfaction, but you need to get some emotional satisfaction. Out with it--tell her--quit being so f'ing emo!!! Plus, you missed your perfect opportunity--it's probably Jacob at the door, and God knows no one wants him around. Or Alice, which might be even worse in this situation . . . Can't wait for more!! Be kind and update fast!
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