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Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Decisons
im gonna be honest with you, i started reading this story a long time ago and then i dont know what happened, i think i wasnt able to load the story or what on this site but i yestarday i decided to check it out again where i left off, damn this story is one of my favorites and the lemons are excellent. non stop good lovin to read, the twister matt, the sauna the table just everywhere, anyway love it all and i was kinda pissed when bella dumbed up thats right i said dumbed up and tried to leave, i was like alice bitch slap her please. anyway i was glad that edward finally manned up and said his feelings. the skirtted around it for awhile but im glad theyre getting their chance and plus there is more lovin so that is always a bonus. anyway i cant wait to read what happens next, oh yeah and i loved how u made the whole jake thing play out with him leaving on a good note and congradulating them instead of clinging and being like he was in the twilight saga. anyway great story.
P.S. alice is hilarious in this story "Damn, i'm good....me three!"
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Twister
Twister is always a fun game to play :)
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Humiliation
Every kitchen should come with a Bella. This line needs a small rewrite.....Every kitchen should come with a Edward :)
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 06:42 AM · On: Staring
But ever since I had hit puberty, it was as if there was some sign on my forehead that read: PLEASE SEXUALLY HARASS AND ANNOY ME! ....lol, this was my favorite line from this chapter.
Reviewer: SLauren25 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Arriving
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The best fanfiction story I've ever read, and I couldn't be anymore honest. I adored this story!! Everything was done so perfectly and tastefully! Congratulations on writing such a great story!! It should be published haha
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Arriving
But, people always went on cruises here, right? Why would people want to take a huge boat to this place when they could go to the Caribbean?......I always thought the same thing. I've in AK for four years and Why anyone thought it was a great place for a vacation was mystery to me. I'm some what snowed in for the next day or so and thought your story was fitting :)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Intimacy
MMmmmm yummy.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Acceptance
I love it. Hot lemon.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Coming Clean
sweet.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Burning
They wasted no time at all!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Lights Out
Nice confession, Edward!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Twister
Finally!!! And a perfectly times blackout!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Resolution
One of them needs to take a chance and push thing forward a little bit!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Humiliation
(sigh) So close.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Something in Common
I love reading both POVs. Little do they know they are each thinking the same things ;o)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Spark
I love it. They are both so nervous.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:58 PM · On: Something Else
They already have some intense chemistry!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Tour
I love his thought process. He is precious.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 03:47 PM · On: Staring
This is endearing!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Good Morning
This reminds me of their first real "talking" scene in Biology. They are adjusting to eachother.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Bewitched
I SO like this!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Ironic
He is already drawn to her...
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Double Booked
Cute first meeting. Now they are both trapped there together...
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Intruder
I love the end of this chapter- too funny!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Arriving
Great start. I am intrigued!
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