omg you cant do that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's so evil. update soon?

AH!!!!!!! OMG!!! POST SOON!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!

Wow, my insides hurt! That was so sad! Love the cliff hanger even if it is going to make us wait on pins and needles. If you would have ended it six words sooner, you might need to look into the witness protection program. JK!! Looking forward to FFFA and the next chapter! Can Jake get run over with a snow plow in his cab on the way back?

Finally someone said the "feared words" almost too late but they are out in the open. Why does it have to take such angst some times to be able to say what we really feel and think?

Bella's insecurities can take anyone out on a fieldtrip and return you so confuse you would think you didn't get there on the first place.

Jacob's feelings are, well crazy in a way understandable and prejudiced. And simply unfair and yes there is jealousy there. But Bella was never meant to be his. Did his showing up help or ruined things? It will depend on Bella's reaction to Edward's words.

the plot thickens!  who needs Jacob when you have a fire and Edward and blankies?  best line: Would it be too forward to pretend the spinner read right hand, my dick? What about left foot, my shoulder?

I was so happy to see a new chapter.  This story is one of my favorites!  But then I was so pissed when I was reading it.  I could not believe Bella's thoughts trailed so far off the deep end.  But then you swing it back around with the 'Because I am in love with you!' cliff hanger and I am sucked in yet again!!!!  Thanks for the update.  Can't wait for the next!

Yay!  They feel it - there were a couple fav lines here #1  - I silently begged my mind not to unleash any naughty librarian fantasies but the best one was "Why didn’t I just start incorporating “thee” and “thou” into our conversations at well? Maybe some Latin?" - good stuff!

OH MY GOD! Please update soon! This is one of the best I've read, and definitely a favorite! I cannot wait to hear what happens next! Thank you for being a great writer! And one who updates quickly! :]

You must hate us!!!! Why the torcher??????

I Love this story! You are an incredibily awesome writer. This is by far the most well written story I have ever come across. You have put so much effort and energy in this story, that in the end it practically bounces off the screen and comes to life. You have done fabulous! Please continue to write!

 

~A~

P.S. I dont think a ten gives what this story acutally deserves!

evilevilevilevilevil!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I freakin HATE cliffhangers!!!  Now I'm gonna be checking every hour for updates!!!!  Hurry up!!  *love ya!*

OMG! This chapter was freaking awesome. I thought it would be Jake at the door, but I didn't think Alice and Jasper would be there too. Alice is one sneaky girl. Setting them up and being there the whole time...she's a genius though. And Bella...UGH...I want to slap some sense into her. I am so glad Edward manned up and told her how he felt before she left.

glad you are finally back! i hadn't thought you would finish this, but glad you are!