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Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
Well at least ONE of them spoke the truth! )))Bella.Don't leave with Jake!(((
Great chapter! Jeanna M.
Reviewer: greytmari (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
When will the next chapter be out??How could you leave us hanging like this? I have really enjoyed this story and your sriting style is very fun to read as well as very well written!!! Please Please Please do not keep us waiting too long!!!
Marilee in NC
greytmari@yahoo.com
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
Oooh!! I hope she stays!! But even if she leaves, maybe he'll fly to Arizona to get her back :-)
Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
great chapter, i love this story!!!
cant wait for the next chapter:)
Reviewer: Robin Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
No don't stop there!!!! I have spent the last two day reading your amazingly wonderful, and captivating story. Only to be caught with the worst cliffhanger in history!!! Fianlly his cards are on the table, and I can't wait to see how see reacts to them. And with everyone there with them. I was bawling, for my heart was breaking right there along with theirs. Then when Edward blurtted out his true feelings for Bella, my jaw dropped, which by the way I don't EVER remember that happeing in my life. and no I am left wanting, needing, no craving more. I don't know how regurally you post, but I am hoping soon, like by the time I have finished wrighting this very long review. (I know whisfull thinking on my part). Anyway this is great and I am wating on the egde of my set until you post more.
Now your #1 fan,
Robin :)
Reviewer: Southern Vamp (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
Please, don't wait forever on writing the next chapter.
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
hey cool chap awwwww loved the ending so so so much i am glad he told her he loved her =)
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
Ok I'm so glad that this Edward tells her how he feels right away - I hope that she can be as truthful.
I cannot believe how arrogant Jacob is - I'd never leave with someone so controlling that didn't even know me - that is just weird.
Thanks for updating!!! I can't wait to read more
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
Ouch!! Please update soon!! It has been A LONG Time between updates and I love this story!!!!
Reviewer: lilg24 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 04:58 AM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
bri;;iant stuff...cant wait for the update
Reviewer: JaneVolturi (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
OMG!!the end!!!! hahahah..he finally said it =D.cant wait for the next one of course, <3
Reviewer: fr33bird (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
yay!!! phew! so glad he managed to spit it out.
I thought it was going to be a *worse* cliff-hanger with him NOT saying it, so I'm comparatively very relieved. I can get on with my weekend in peace now ;-)
update soon
xxx
Reviewer: jennmo (Anonymous) · Date: June 20, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
you take too long to update, seriously you cant take a month to put up the next chap.
Reviewer: HalTwilighty (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
WHY DID YOU LEAVE ME WITH A CLIFF HANGER?!?!?!?! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
Oh, goody! My darling Jacob didn't ruin everything! *happy sigh*
WRITE AGAIN SOON!
Pleeease? My best Bella impression ...
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Sweat
Sigh ... I was so hoping Jacob wouldn't come into play here, though I was pretty sure he would. Don't get me wrong - I could never choose "Team Edward" or "Team Jacob," because I love them both so much. But man, sometimes I just want Edward and Bella to be happy!!
Well, you've been great so far, so I guess I should stop complaining and just read!
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Acceptance
"Bella’s clothes were on liquidation. They all had to go."
That is one of the corniest but coolest things I have ever read. Right ON!
Reviewer: FayeDeadly (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
Nice way to work Jacob back in.
The intense self-doubt of new love is so believable.
Thanks for finally letting him say, "I'm in love with you."
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Something Else
A library in a cabin ... Hell, a library at all! You know, I was never the girl to dream about getting married; I've always dreamed about the house. And one of it's many features in my fantasies is a library. I've just had to get rid of too many books in my (short-so-far) life to make room for more and I hate it. Argh! So yeah. I'm totally jealous of the fake cabin library. Sigh.
Reviewer: onelilhopeful (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Bewitched
I just read your FFFA entry and it led me here. I'm enjoying this so far - it's really cute!
Reviewer: unouluvme96 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
LOVE IT!!! UPDATE SOON!!
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
so i know you love reviews, and i honestly don't know if i've reviewed at all, but i'm in love with this story. I'm not a real big fan of human stories, but this one is an exception. i look forward to your next post.
Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
omg!!!!!!!!1
that was the best ending i loved
the way you ended in a cliff hanger!!
i want an update ASAP!!!!
i am adicted to this story:):)
please please please do it really soon!!
iwanna see what happens!!!
Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
omg!!!!!!!!1
that was the best ending i loved
the way you ended in a cliff hanger!!
i want an update ASAP!!!!
i am adicted to this story:):)
please please please do it really soon!!
iwanna see what happens!!!
Reviewer: twilighter_87 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Knock, Knock-Who's there?
love ur story... especially I have gotten to like the bella/edward turnovers...
Patiently waiting for more ;)
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