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Reviewer: wendygirl47 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Ironic
interesting beginning...hmmm....
Reviewer: wendygirl47 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Arriving
first chapter...good set up
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Finally
Thoroughly enjoyable. Love at first sight for both Edward and Bella. Both couldn't believe their actual feelings for each other. Adored playing "Twister" very seductive. Everything was working out so well until Alice and Jasper with Jacob arrived at the cabin. Made everything confusing between Edward and Bella. Bella's doubts were rising with whether to stay or go. Bella took the coward's way out and decided to leave believing Edward could never want her once they left the cabin. Edward manned up and declared his love for Bella. She admitted she loved him too. Yeah!! They decided to live together in Seattle in his penthouse. Edward framed the Twister mat what a sentimentalist. I agree with Bella that it should be in their bedroom not in the living room. Trying to explain why it was framed would be hard especially when Bella started to blush everyone would guess why it was hanging on the wall. To redecorate his bedroom to have it look exactly like his bedroom at the cabin was so sweet and romantic. Just adore a cheesy Edward. Sweet love making scenes throughout the story. Looking forward to the epilogue.
Reviewer: lilygirl88 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Spark
Emmets blood rush idea had me laughing. It's so funny they both feel the same way but are too scare to admit it but yet are trying to see if they are single without making it obvious.
Reviewer: lilygirl88 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Tour
LOL Omg Edward is such a perv but oh so funny I love this part "Why bother? You can take mine. It’s incredibly comfortable, and I come with it for free. Hell, I’ll even help you break it in. What a bargain!"
Reviewer: TwilightMelissa (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Finally
absoulutely brilliant!
a definitely 10/10 :)
Reviewer: TwilightMelissa (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Finally
absoulutely brilliant!
a definitely 10/10 :)
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Bella's Turn Part II
I am devouring this story way too fast this evening. But it is extremely addictive. Every chapter I think, this is my favourite, only to be out done by the next! Go Bella! is all I gotta say.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Bella's Turn Part I
I think this line sums it up perfectly - "Holy shit, that was insane". Waves of excitement, absolutely delectable. Still savouring the moment..mmmmmmmm.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Intimacy
I can relate to the poking annoyance...that is until you are awake enough figure out what it is that is poking you. I like the honest, sometimes awkward, comical and vulnerable moments described in this story. It definitely adds a richer depth to the sex scenes, which in turn, makes it infinitely more (ehem) enjoyable...
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Acceptance
Really enjoying the little references to the original book, as well as this time referring to the movie, with the line "Hold on tight, spider monkey". Super cute.
And of course I am very much enjoying them getting to know each other better and better each and every time. Yum.
I also liked that Bella's taste of her skin "sung" to him. Nicely done. Very hot.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Coming Clean
I don't see how that water cooled off...that scene was HOT!
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Burning
In heaven right now. Great chapter. Can't type, just want to close my eyes and relive it again.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Lights Out
Ohhh the plot thickens....but I'm like Bella, more kissing!
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Twister
Total butterflies and tummy backflips...Delicious! Very excited for these two!!!!
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Resolution
You can do it Bella!!!!!!
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Humiliation
Heart is racing and my cheeks hurt from smiling so much!!! I think this is my favourite chapter so far, I am sad it has ended. Best hit that "Next" button - YAY!
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Something in Common
Can't stop to review...must read on! LOVING IT!
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 10:51 AM · On: Spark
Okay so this chapter gave me butterflies in my tummy! And I think "fortuitous" is my new favourite word. So romantic it hurts.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 10:41 AM · On: Something Else
You weave little details in so effortlessly, they are little treats hidden in between the lines to enjoy - like Edward entering psychology because he "likes figuring out people's thoughts" - very clever, really nice, very classy.
I like the image of Bella trying to discretely inhale Edward's scent. It conjures up a very real feeling.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Tour
Line like these - "(...)as if she wasn't curently testing my self control" & "Where has the civilized, self-possesed part of my psyche gone?" are sending me over the edge of my seat!
And Bella making jokes about whips and chains and sitting on Edward's bed? I am looking forward to hearing her side of this tour to know what was she thinking!
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Staring
I really like your Edward POV. I like Bella's too, but I must say I look forward to hearing his more. I love him trying to tame his hair, and worry about what to wear. And Bella wearing a blue top..very nice attention to detail.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Good Morning
I liked that "gasp" Edward expelled, can't wait to hear his POV on that matter. And thank god for Alice packing better clothes than a flannel nightgown! Speaking of the little minx, where is she? Why isn't she picking up the phone....naughty little matchmaker that she is...Love her that way.
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:48 AM · On: Bewitched
Oh Bella, Bella, Bella...you silly girl. Of course it makes it intensely more fun this way....
Reviewer: Biker Babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Ironic
Ooooh! So freakin' cute it hurts! I'm having so much fun! I had to take a break from Twilighted for a bit because it was becoming all to overwhelming, and hard to latch on to new Bella's and Edward's. I am glad for the break, and even happier to be back and refreshed for this Bella and Edward. YAY! Ahhh Edward laying up in bed wondering what Bella is up to...does it get any better than that? Sigh....Well, probably, but this is pretty sweet already.
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