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Reviewer: pyroprincess89 (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2011 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 6

Wow... I must admit that I started reading it and was like "how am I going to enjoy this, it's written weird" but I do... I enjoy it. It draws you in and I'm not sure if it's the story, the voice, or both but I'm going with both. Good job.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. My writing style differs a lot -- I'm still pretty young and growing as a writer. This is definitely my most eccentric piece on this site. For something a bit less weird, I suggest In Perfect Time. If you want a kind of goofy thing, check out I'd Lie. Thanks so much for the read and review... and for giving me a chance to change your mind!

Reviewer: PunkieMama (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 6

not a lot of reviews.but this storyis good different writing style ill be waiting for more.



Author's Response:

No, I don't have many reviews. Thanks for being one of them! And thanks for continuing to read!

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 6

Interesting life they're living there... if you can call it living... Won't take them long to break and crumble, I guess...

Um - Emmett? Did I miss something? Who's Emmett to them? I think he hasn't been mentioned before...



Author's Response:

Oh shit. Hahaha nice job picking that out. Emmett's the policeman who lives in their apartment building. I gave it away! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: VincentP (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 6

Wow, what a great story.  I love how you are rolling this out, slow but quick.  Quite powerful. I feel the emotion.  I am looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you'rre enjoying it! Thanks so much for the review!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you'rre enjoying it! Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 5

And so they became Bella and Edward...

It's good to see them take care of each other. But why are they left alone, by themselves? That's weird. Not even the living alone part, because the officer checking in on them sounds reasonable enough, but - shouldn't they get some kind of counseling or therapy? I'm probably just getting ahead of myself here, and things like that are to come in the next chapters...

It seems that they are treated rather coldly for two teenagers who just lost everything, but that's probably because it's Bella/Jennifer telling the story, and that's how she felt at the time...



Author's Response:

Keep reading :) I'll answer all your questions eventually!

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 4

Have I mentioned that I'm normally a sappy-romance, UST, fun-stuff kind of girl? I shouldn't be reading your story... but I do, and I can't stop.

I may or may not have shed a tear or two during this chapter, and I'm so scared for them. What's going to happen now? Foster care? Or are they legal yet, and I missed that part somehow? I'd say they're lucky to still have each other, but it definitely doesn't feel like THEY're feeling lucky because of that, so I won't...

You don't have to tell me, and I'll go on reading regardless, but - could you ease my mind a bit? Is there a light, somewhere far away at the end of the tunnel, although the prologue surely didn't seem like it?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing again! If you like fluffy stuff, you should check out my other two stories. This one's mostly going to be angsty as f**k. Anyway, I won't give you a preview, but I will say that the two of them stay together and keep each other alive...

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2011 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh my gosh. This is SO not what I expected. I'm not yet sure if I can handle the drama and the heartbreak, but I'll try, because these first three chapters were exceptionally well written!

And I'm glad that I didn't comment on the name thing in the second chapter (Aiden? Isn't he supposed to be called Edward?) because they probably changed their names in order to not be found... I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

This is the only review I've gotten for this story so far. And it is so encouraging! Thank you so so so much for reading nd leaving such a specific and kind review :)

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