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Reviewer: kyndria15221 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2013 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Forever is Our Today

i oved but i hatedit so very much tears but i like how u wrote it 

Reviewer: erenk (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Forever is Our Today

devastatingly Romantic.Romeo and Juliet with a twist



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: erenk (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 - There's No Time for Us

that was a heartbreakingly sweet chapter :)

Reviewer: twiharder2 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2012 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 2 - The Beginning

Bravo!! Very well done... I thoroughly enjoyed this refreshing take on Bella/Jazz!! :)



Author's Response:

wow! thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)

Reviewer: nessie 1 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 1 - There's No Time for Us

that was so good it made my cry at the thort of bella dying and y ius bella dyeing

 



Author's Response:

It made me cry to as I was writing it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :-)

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Forever is Our Today

Gosh, that was sudden. So sad throughout, and very well written.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and for reading my story. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Forever is Our Today

OMG OMG OMG so sad geeze!!!   I never ever expected for this to end without the HEA but I can't complain it was EPIC!!!! Love!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: rc301258 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 5 - It's All Decided for Us

This a very interesting story. I  love the plot line; it's just so thick and very vivid. It's almost like actually being there. Just one question: did you name yourself after Mozart's Requiem or Evanescence's Lacrymosa? It's a great name choice for this piece too. I love everything about this story!!! Please keep writing!!!



Author's Response:

Hi there! Thanks so much for the compliment and review. I plan on posting other Jasper/Bella stories soon so keep an eye out for them. I am a huge fan of both Mozart and Evanescence. Mozart's Requiem Mass is one of my favorites. Considering that most of my stories tend to have lots of angst I figured Lacrimosa, which is latin for "weeping" would be a good pen name.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2011 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 5 - It's All Decided for Us

Oh so far so good I never normally like J and B stories but the way you set up Edward  and gave definition behind his motives and feelings it just wasn't the flux of a simple HUMAN emotion it wasn't really a mate bond they shared and he was just being selfish wanting to keep his singer close..  I love it Post again soon!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving my little Jasper/Bella story a chance. As a native Texan, I can't help but love a fellow Texan. :-)  I plan to post other Jasper/Bella stories and I hope  you will find them as entertaining as well. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: little frog (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 3 - The Pull

Awww. the only problem with J/B stories is the idea that Alice is not in the picture for whatever reason. Seems I'm not as attached to Edward, which is... kind of disturbing...  hmmmm. Anyway, I like where this is going! I favorited this story! Can't wait for more!

Thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for favoriting this story! I agree. It's difficult to write J/B/ stories without leaving out Alice or making her look like the enemy in a story.

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 1 - There's No Time for Us

Summary, please.



Author's Response:

Thanks Camilla. I posted  a summary.

Reviewer: alegranotes (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2011 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 1 - There's No Time for Us

I love this, I can't wait to see what you have planned next :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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