Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 6

Did not see that coming. Loved it

Reviewer: MissJanuary (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 6

Nope, really didn't, but I liked it ;) Kinda looking forward to when Bella drops the I've got a daughter bomb. Think that might be a fun conversation. Thanks for the update. I enjoyed the read.

~MissJanuary

Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 6

That was to funny.  Bella went after what she want though she keep second guessing herself.

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 6

I couldn't  stop reading your story. I found it this morning and can't wait for more!! I love Bella's character. I hope she doesn't back down & shows up for dinner!!!  :)

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 6

Well, that's passion! I'm sure Edward is probably suffering from whiplash, but I don't think he minds!

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 6

The only thing that made me growl in frustratio was getting to the end of this chapter and realizing there isn't anymore to read yet!

I feel bad for Esme and Carlisle, but I do think they did the right thing, to a point.  If Edward was so spoiled and lazy that he kept getting into trouble and didnt' care about his job, the yes, he needed a kick in the pants.  I know making that decision would have been really, really hard.

Edward on the other hand, I can't really get a handle on. It's like he is two people. One is selfish and irresponsible, and the other is polite and hardworking.  One just doesn't seem to jive with the other one for me.

I'm enjoying this though, so I'll be tuning in.

Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2011 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 6

Loved it!! 

Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2011 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 6

love it
just afraid that she will freak once she analyzes what just happened
or he will freak once she finds out that she has a kid

but honestly, i really didnt expect that kind of chemistry to evolve that quickly with them, i wanted him to earn it, he was such a arse with her initially

i am so on board and stapped in for the ride i just dont see it being all sunshine and rainbows, i like a little drama and some awkwardness first than i can relax and enjoy without anticipating the angst

xoxo

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2011 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 6

That HOT HOT kiss was a very nice surprise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Billi (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2011 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 6

BOOOOOOOM CHICKA BOW WOW!!!!!

DAMN.

I wanna be panting and breathless with a bad boy Edward.

Can I be his therapist? or his banker? or his previous lovah, scorned yet still wanting? oh and can I be 25 when I am these things, instead of 50?

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 5

It's funny how Edward didnt tell bella why his parents kicked him out. Grow up some Edward. Loved Bella.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 5

You could get whiplash between the two of them! Mood changes are frequent and causes are unknown to the other. They are both holding back very important personal details. It's not going to be an easy road for these two to get to know each other!

Reviewer: Billi (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 5

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE

That's what I think of this chapter!!!

"Emmett and Rose are good people," Bella agreed.

"Yeah, I can't believe Rosalie agreed to give me the job after I screwed up the interview," Edward muttered.

"Oh no, what did you do?" Bella asked.

"Oh not much," he said with a grin that looked slightly embarrassed. "I just asked to see Mister Hale. Oh, and I called her Blondie."

"Holy shit, and you lived to tell about it? Do you still have your balls?"

 

Rose is such a ball buster! Loved this bit of the chappy.

Reviewer: aborealis7 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 5

Good chapter! Ah, yeah, he's a jerk! He needs to grow up and have consideration for others. I think Bella is pretty astute, she's no fool! His parents have themselves to thank, they raised him ~ however, ultimately he is an adult and should take responsibilty for his own actions, which, lol,is why he is where he is at! ( I'm loving your Bella!)

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 4

Go Bella. Edward needs to be brought down a notch or two.

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 5

Edward totally deserves it-he is kinda missing that sensitivity chip at times. He'll learn...

When is Bella going to mention Hailey to him? He lives in her building and will definitley see her araround., I wonder if little Hailey will charm hard case Edward?

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 4

Ha!  Bella rocks.

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 2

I wanna kick Alice's ass........is that bad?  I like The Bella you've created.

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

Edward is spoiled!  This is just what he needs.........time to be a big boy.

Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 5

He is just getting a good dose of reality check.  If its a shit hole well he live there as just as well!  However, I know eventually he will see the error of his trustward ways the little trustfund baby's well ran dried. 

Reviewer: Canadaci (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 5

He is just getting a good dose of reality check.  If its a shit hole well he live there as just as well!  However, I know eventually he will see the error of his trustward ways the little trustfund baby's well ran dried. 

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 5

Edward will come around..but Alice is still on my nerves!..I hate Jasper!..:(

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 4

Alice is a b(#@h!..lol..How can Jasper tolerate her?...Grrr...Just Grrr!

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 2

Is it bad that I'm more disgusted by Jasper than I am by Edward?!..lol..poor Bella!...I think Edward will be an upgrade..lol

Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 5

I am loving the indecisiveness in both of them- it is so easy to let them have a smooth path.
But staying true to form, you portrayed him as a pretentious, arrogant, self centered prick- that doesn't go away over night- good for you for sticking with it
and your Bella is perfect, she is a hard working single mom juggling a difficult school schedule with studying and work. just because a hot guy turns her insides to mush doesn't mean she instantly evolves into someone she isnt, good for her for calling him on his shitty attitude
as for him dealing with the real world- it is about time, good for Esme and Carlisle for kicking his butt to the curb
i love a strong female character who really is strong inside and out but isnt afraid to stand up for herself

looking forward to more
xoxo

Submit a Review




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.