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Reviews For Seducing Ms Swan
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 03:21 PM · On: An Ending

so powerful...thank you for sharing this truly wonderful story with us, your readers.  cant wait to read more

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Control

It took like six years for Bella to say all this? AND so worth the wait!!! Bella put them boys in their rightful places!!! Bella Badass,it's got ring does it not?

Reviewer: Twilam (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:13 AM · On: An Ending

yup, I cried my eyes our.. and my heart and probably a lot of other stuff.. but I still liked it now be a dear and update ;)

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 07:48 AM · On: An Ending

Ahhhhh *breaths in deep* Ok I will try hard not to go psycho on you but this was a really hard chapter for me to read. Not in the respect that I hate you but I truly feel as conflicted as Bella. I know Edward is sorry but sorry is just not enough. I will anxiously await your next chapters and hope all the sorrow gets resolved...I have faith you will lead us to easier waters. I really am enjoyin your story and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: lexmac (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 05:53 AM · On: An Ending

really liking this story, I hope that you update soon. Looking forward to where you lead this story.

Reviewer: enthralled (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:40 AM · On: An Ending

Lovely and heartbreaking...

Reviewer: Shankill (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:19 AM · On: An Ending

That was brutal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but then again I guess it had to happen...

Great chapter but also awful because os the same reasons.

Please update soon, cause they have a lot of fixing to do...

Reviewer: Reden (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:28 AM · On: An Ending

Great one!!! Though I prefer the Happily-Ever-After thing, I also love to see some effort to the make up. Maybe I just love to see the tortured Edward - delicious agony you know, hehehe *o*

 

Reviewer: LoriRae (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:28 PM · On: An Ending

Very nice transitioning chapter. I agree with Bella that there needs to be more that just an apology. I would like to see more interaction between them as they try to work out their differences and as Edward starts to make ammends. The Starting over if you will. Lots of potential with the set up that you have now without upsetting the masses. :D Thanks for updating. hope to hear from you again soon.

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:24 PM · On: An Ending

i THINK IT WAS A REALLY HARD CHAPTER. YOU'RE RIGHT, IT WOULDN'T HAVE BEEN THE RIGHT THING TO LET THEM JUST GET BACK TOGETHER. BELLA HAD TO DO THIS. THEY NEED TO START OVER NOT JUST PICK UP WHERE THEY LEFT OFF.

GOOD WORK YOU DO..

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Control

I LOVE THE WAY  BELLA AND JACOB HAVE THIS CONNECTION. THEY KNOW EACH OTHER LIKE THEY KNOW THEMSELVES. I REALLY LIKE THAT PART.

I DID ALSO ENJOY THE TENSION BETWEEN EDWARD AND JAKE. LIKE CHILDREN THEY ARE.. LOL

Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:55 PM · On: An Ending

Ok, so I wait for months! MONTHS! to have you update, and you come back with this? I'm so sad. And I shouldnt be sad. It's my birthday. I want sugar and spice and happily ever after. I think that this chapter is good. It clearly outlines what Bella and Edward are feeling. But, please please, dont let it be MONTHS before you update, cuz I want my happy ending.

 

That being said, I enjoyed the chapter, I love your writing style. But if you don't update faster, I will be very very sad.

Reviewer: More Than My Own Life (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:00 PM · On: An Ending

What are you thinking on posting times for the next couple chapters?

 

This was a really sad one to read, but it helps that i know that they just have to end up together. I think that's why I read this type of fanfic--I know that Edward and Bella are meant to be together, so they will be.

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Lucky

Its on Edward. jacob is piss. I'm so happy that Bella is going to be fine. I'm also happy that Esme helped Edward out. He needs all the help. Thanks! I love it all.

Reviewer: katopasna (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 05:48 PM · On: An Ending

Please don't take too long for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 05:32 PM · On: An Ending

“But I just want you to know that, despite everything, I have always had your best interests at heart. Yes, I was wrong- monstrously so- but I never intended to injure you in any way. I was trying to make your life better; I was trying to give you the future that I never had. I wanted to save you from myself, from all that I am, and in trying to do so I just made things worse. I see that now, but at the time I took what I thought was the only solution. I don’t know if I’ll ever be able to earn your love and trust again. I know it won’t be quick or easy, but I love you more than anything in this world and I’ll do whatever it takes to make myself worthy of your forgiveness.”

Asshole. "I want". "I need". "I, I, I, I, I, I, I..." Hello? What about Bella, Edward?

I don't get how readers can be angry at Bella for not jumping back into his arms. "He would do anything for Bella!"

He gave her everything but respect. Everything but trust. Everything but a VOICE in her own life. HER life. HER life, but he thought he had the right to decide how she should live HER life. How arrogant.

"He meant well!" How nice. He left her helpless and alone to face HIS enemy. But he MEANT well. I'm sure that's a comfort to Brady's family.

Hell, Edward didn't even LOOK for her. He tried to run away after ACCIDENTALLY discovering she was in the same town he was. He didn't have the balls to face her until he decided he wanted her back.

Reviewer: twilightfan0223 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 04:42 PM · On: An Ending

Thanks for updating!  It's been a while since I started reading this story but I'm still hooked on it.  I think you did the right thing by making Bella think twice about taking him back.  There's a lot of issues to work through and it wouldn't be right for her to just forget it all. 

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Race Against Time

Wow this was all mind blowing. I hope Bella will be fine. Thanks, I love it.

Reviewer: panda-marnie-um (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 02:45 PM · On: An Ending

it was nice to see Bella grow a backbone. I mean i love the girl but seriously in relationships it's harder to forgive instantaneously. You totally capture this in the chapter. I applaud you for doing what you think is best, i love it!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 01:44 PM · On: WEREWOLVES?!

Gah! Tanya is evil, keep your head up Bella. Oh and I can tell Edward is so jealous, Good! Thanks, I love it.

Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:38 PM · On: An Ending

Oh, and also her "I've think I shouldn't live in the past" or whatever shit she said that makes her justify not being with him because of Brady, that's just a whole crockpot of shit, because moving forward is totally different than "hey let me use ever excuse I can possible think of because I'm lame and don't want to have to think about someone caring about me because I think so lowly of myself."

Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:36 PM · On: An Ending

Meh. Bella's logic is like 1000 and 1 different kinds of flawed. So congratz on making her the least logical "I'm logical" person in ever./I don't really have any sympathy for her and kind of agree that if she's going to "man up" she should at least have the fucking courage to say it not just allude to it.

Reviewer: cuteblondi22 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:29 PM · On: An Ending

WOW!!!!!!!!! that was so intense. i LOVED it! i kept expecting bella to give in and she didn't, which i loved. you are right, if she had given in it would have undermined everything she had said to him in their fight. plus i like edward suffering and thinking it might be over.

 

you are amazing!

Reviewer: 4Eva (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:17 PM · On: An Ending

It's not what I wanted to read, but, after reading it, realize it's what I needed to read.  I'm glad Bella finally put herself first and that you didn't please the "masses."

Okay, so please don't take so long with the next chapter!

Reviewer: mscullen10159 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Innuendo

Love all Twilight fan fics! OMG! Edward is in trouble. He needs to set Tanya straight. Thanks! I love it.

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