Oh geez! What a fabulousl emotional chapter! I kept tearing up this whole chapter...espeally the lullaby part. This angst is killing me like New Moon! lol! Excellent writing...please let them get over themselves soon!!!

I love angry Edward.  This story just keeps getting better

Oh no!  That did not go well at all.  Man, that was painful to watch.  Edward and Bella really need to talk.  Though I don't know how she would do it b/c she has been so hurt, but if only she can let herself listen to what he has to say. 

I cannot wait to read the next chapter!!  Excellent chapter!

All of this is making me wonder how in the world Edward and Bella will get back together, if they even get that far... I really pity Edward. He keeps trying to explain to Bella but she's too stubborn to even consider listening. This was a fabulous chapter and I can't wait for more. Please do update soon!

ahhh! such a great story!!! ahhh please i pray that there is some sort of way that you will have time to update ASAP!!!

good it seems really interesting , how they will try to make it work  and not get caught

AAAAHHH so good, so good.

I wasn't sure about this storyline, so I am only just now checking it out. You're doing a wonderful job with it, and I will be definitely checking for updates.

This chapter is definately the most heart wrenching. I feel Edward's utter depression more than Bella's, but perhaps that's because she's managed to cope slightly better. It's not like she had a choice. Good story, it looks like I have another New Moon-ish angst story to read. I've been reading way too many lately and even when the ending is happy, there's still post-angst syndrom. So now I just have to find a fluffy fic to read right after I read this one. It's really good writing, and I appriciate your perfectionism, I'm the same way sometimes. If it's perfect, I guess it's worth the wait.

Author's Response:

Thankyou very much for this review. Personally, I think that Edward would be more depressed than Bella because not only does he have the capacity for more angst, being 100+ years old, but it was essentially his fault that they ever seperated in the first place. I think that that fact especially would eat away at Edward.

I'm sorry about the angst! There will be *some* fluff in this story. My problem is that even when I write gen!fic I always seem to lean towards the angsty side of things. Also, E/B really isn't my ship I suppose that has a bit to do with it. I'm just trying to realistically write as though the end of New Moon never happened and I think this is how it would have been.

I don't think this story is perfect, nowhere near, but I do like to take my time updating :) Thanks for the support!

I just want to lock Bella and Edward in a room and tell them they can't come out until they make up and play nice. Lovin the story!

great chapter! it's original and yet keeps the essence of the original characteristics of each character that SM created. I look forward to your next update!

Let the seduction begin!! whooo hooo! You have such an amazing talent! I am so glad that you found us and that we found you!

It is such torture knowing how both of them feel, but neither one knowing themselves how the other feels.  It is killer to live through Bella's pain again.  I am reminded of how she felt during New Moon.  It is actually my favorite of the books so far.  Maybe that is why I am so drawn to your story.  It is nice to know that you are taking your time to get every line perfect.  I read so many stories where the authors seem rushed to get them posted.  You can see it in the flow of each sentence.  Your chapters are easy to read because you do take your time.  Thank you for that.