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Reviews For Seducing Ms Swan
Reviewer: Jenna (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2008 07:40 PM · On: Lullabies

I have absolutely fallen in love with this story!  But I'm so frustrated!!  Bella is such an idiot!  (Don't worry - that's not a jab at you - you're writing her exactly as Stephenie would!!)  I love it!!!!

Reviewer: Kate_cullen (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2008 06:55 PM · On: Lullabies

please please please finish it!!!!!! I think this is definately one of my favorites!

Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2008 12:03 PM · On: Lullabies

Please update soon!!!

Reviewer: broadwaydoll98 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2008 09:35 PM · On: Lullabies

eeeek, this story is soo good.

I can't wait to read more about it.  Keep up the good work :] 

Reviewer: colourguardqueen (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2008 07:15 PM · On: Lullabies

wait there has to be more. i need there to be more im like literally crying. please put more up. please?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

 

Reviewer: saram05 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2008 03:35 PM · On: A Meeting

Yesterday several people recommended reading your story and am I glad I listened to their suggestion!  I've only read the first chapter thus far, but I have to comment on how beautifully written this story is.  I am anxious to move on to the next chapter...lucky me, there are 4 more posted!



Author's Response: Thankyou very very much! :)

Reviewer: Missy (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2008 11:09 PM · On: Lullabies

Wow this story has so much emotion you can't help but get swept up in it. I hope they both get through their pig headedness and at least talk to each other.  Update soon, I 'm loving this story.

Reviewer: michelle62092 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2008 02:16 AM · On: A Meeting

this story is amazing so far! PLEASE update soon!:D



Author's Response: Thankyou, I'm trying! :)

Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2008 01:54 PM · On: A Meeting

Excellent story-- love the premise!

 Perhaps Edward needs to pay her a midnight visit?? :)



Author's Response: Ahahahahahahahahaha.rnrnLol, you made me laugh :) rnrnI'm not gonna give any details away just like that, you'll have to bribe me. ;)rnrnthanks for the review! xxx

Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2008 11:38 AM · On: Lullabies

This was so sad. It made me cry. It also makes me want to slap them both!

Reviewer: Starrylove (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2008 01:21 AM · On: A Meeting

Firstly, I want you to know that I registered on this site just to review this story. Secondly, this is just beyond amazing. Especially at the end of chapter 5, it literally ripped my heart. I'm hoping Edward won't give up and they reach some sort of progress because I cannot wait. I understand where Bella is coming from but it frustrates me! I wish they'd get back together, yet I don't want the story to end. You've only written 5 chapters, but I'm already eternally hooked. The sexual tension mixed in with angst is just... amazing. PLEASE update this very soon or I may spontaneously combust :)

-Stella.



Author's Response:

*is floored by your review*

This was one of the nicest reviews I've ever gotten :) I've had this sort of experience with loving fanfics before, so it's amazing to think that something I wrote has inspired somebody else in a similar way! I'm delighted that you like the story so much and hopefully it'll please you to know that we're only about half way through with the story; there are at least another five chapters still to go! Thankyou so much for your comments, I love reading my reviews :)

Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2008 04:00 PM · On: Lullabies

Wonderful, I love your story. More, more please!!

Reviewer: momofab (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2008 01:33 PM · On: A Meeting

Loved it! When is the next chapter!?!?!?

Reviewer: Twilightforeverrrr (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2008 12:30 AM · On: Lullabies

oh, boy.

bella's messing up things!! not that i blame her. edward's being such an ass, if he had only cleared up that stupid misunderstanding in the first place then it would have all been alright.

great chapter, i can't wait for the next one!! update soon, i nearly went crazy waiting for this chapter.

Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2008 10:09 PM · On: Lullabies

Good story so far, very similar to another one I'm reading. Lets get this story going. Bella will never be able to move on until she talks to Edward. Come on..Let's get the true loves going. Update soon please

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2008 06:04 PM · On: Lullabies

I'm so in love with this story. I am always checking to see if you updated. i love the story line, content, legth, characterizations... everything! i look forward to your next update :)

Reviewer: jliane (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2008 05:18 PM · On: Lullabies

oh wow!  i absolutely LOVED this chapter!  i definitely read it while i was at work because i couldn't wait until i got home!  keep up the good work, the suspense is killing me :)

Reviewer: sparkleme (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2008 02:39 PM · On: Lullabies

Wow she's really stupid either that or she enjoys putting herself in emotional pain. You really do a good job at building on Bella's character and I think you've captured her beautifully! Can't wait for more=)

Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2008 12:55 PM · On: Lullabies

AGH!! Why is Bella so pig-headed?!

Reviewer: Nasrino (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2008 12:39 PM · On: Lullabies

:O

 That was shocking..

I feel so sorry for Esme :(

Update soon!

Reviewer: x-stephanie-x (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2008 10:58 AM · On: Lullabies

oh me angry edward!

well done and keep up the awesome work!

i can't wait to read more!

- stephanie x =]

Reviewer: septentrion (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2008 09:01 AM · On: Lullabies

The level of drama in this chapter has left me breathless. I wonder if that incident is bound will have repercussions in Bella's job since it was so public, and I fear for her emotional state.

Reviewer: Nightmare and Dream (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2008 06:51 AM · On: Lullabies

This chapter  was so sad... it's currently the best chapter I think. I love it! ♥

Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2008 06:51 AM · On: Lullabies

Agh!  Bella is driving me crazy.  LOL.  Didn't expect her to come around that quickly though.  Isn't it time for Alice's intervening?  LOL.

Reviewer: mshaz (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2008 05:22 AM · On: Lullabies

BELLA! ARGH! When is this going to end? when when when? uh-uh-uuuuuh ... *start to make unintelligent noises*

 i feel like crying, you write too good.

the lullaby moment, that was so beautifully written. oh god. everything in this story is beautifully written.

 

i love the way you can make me imagine the whole thing in front of me. haha, and make me want to scream.

 you are incredible. write a book in the future please ;)

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