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Reviewer: lia516 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 11:55 AM · On: Bloody Hands
AHHH!! WHAT THE HELL!? That was not a nice place to stop. Now I suppose we have to wait until after you get back from New York to get more? Well OK, but I'm not happy about it. You go and have fun, don't worry about me. I'll find some way to survive...HURRY, HURRY, HURRY.
Author's Response: ahahaha! I'm sorrrry, I have an addiction to cliff-hangers. What can I say? I need professional help. xD SO glad you liked it, I hope you can hold on until I get back from America. (OMG I AM SO EXCITED!!!!!) I will have fun, but I'll also write some of chapter ten during the 12 hours I'll be spending flying there and back. If you're looking for something good to read in the meantime, read 'The Book Theif' by Markus Zusak- it's the best book I've ever read :)
Reviewer: invisiblevampire (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 11:50 AM · On: Bloody Hands
What happened between Brady and Bella? This was really good-I wonder how Edward will react to seeing Bella fall apart.
Author's Response: Reread the paragraph where Bella is remembering very carefully, maybe you'll get a clue. If not then don't worry, all will be revealed in due course! Thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: intoxicatinglydazzled (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 11:27 AM · On: Bloody Hands
Update soon plez plez plez!!!! cant wait to see where you wake this!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: silly bj (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 11:01 AM · On: Bloody Hands
Once again love your choice of music. Favorite line/discription . . . making the snow sparkle like a vampire’s skin. (perfect visual) I'm so glad that you're characters are always in CHARACTER. Please continue writing even after you finish this story. Your talent is mind-blowing. BD was a great disappointment, I'm glad you're here to help flush that poison form my brain. Enjoy New York!
Author's Response: Once again, your review is amazing :) Writing my characters IC has always been a huge priority of mine; I'm glad you think I've succeeded. One of my biggest issues with BD was that all the characters had suddenly changed a lot with no real explanation as to why. Wow, thank you. I'm not sure if I'll keep writing Twilight fanfic after this. If I do then I'll probably finish the 'Seven Deadly Sins' series I started on this website. Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Nightmare and Dream (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 08:47 AM · On: Bloody Hands
Great chapter! It's good to know what happened six years ago. Question: How does Rosalie feel? They are in Rochester where she was born and changed...
Author's Response: ................... Oh my Gosh, I didn't even make that connection! Now I feel really stupid :( I totally didn't remember that Rosalie was from Rochester. That just goes to show that you're way more observant than I am. Thank you for you review, I'm sorry I haven't been great at replying recently. I've been so busy- I almost didn't get this chapter finished in time for my holiday tomorrow.
Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 08:31 AM · On: Bloody Hands
An excellent chapter! I can't wait to read more. Hope that you have an awesome time in NYC :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: sillysun (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 08:19 AM · On: Bloody Hands
All the effort you put into those last paragraphs shows - they were powerful enough to nearly make me forget about everything else that happened in this chapter! And *a lot* happened. Poor Bella - walking in on Edward and Tanya. It was innocent, but it's going to be hard for her to believe that, given the circumstances. Gah. Enjoy your trip! I'll be anxious awaiting the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked the last paragraphs :) Eee I can't wait to go on holiday!
Reviewer: mindfreakchick (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 04:48 AM · On: Bloody Hands
wow! Really good! I do hope that you elaborate on what happened with Brady... and of course I hope that nothing happens to Bella with her bleeding hand, while crying outside a house full of vampires :S Anyways... great job, and can't wait for the next chapter! 0:)
Author's Response: The Brady storyline will be fully revealed over the next few chapters. Thank you very much for the review :)
Reviewer: Debussy_This (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 04:37 AM · On: Bloody Hands
Oh, Bella. Poor, poor Bella. Its one thing on top of another for her. She needs a hug. I hope you keep this up post BD, I kind of love it!
Author's Response: Ha. Yes, Bella does need a hug. But will I give it to here? NOT BLOODY LIKELY, I ENJOY MY ANGST TOO MUCH.... ..... There will be a happy ending though :D
Reviewer: Reiko Katsura (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 02:40 AM · On: Bloody Hands
Oh...wow....sers...! Huh.... wow. Ok... well....the detailed elaboration on how Bella walked in on Edward was great! Now that thats all cleared up...LOL! And Emmett is sooo cute!! <3 I love him <3 And then the end... was just wow. It's picking at my curiosity...LOL!! I was so happy until I got to that whole Brady part... and all of a sudden... I just felt seriously nervous and panicky...LOL! (Which, in other words, means that you are a great writer! <3) I cant wait for the next chapter! I wonder what really happened between her and this Brady... =o
Author's Response: :D I'm glad I managed to clear that up a bit. I love Emmett too! He's awesome! The end is my favourite part, I enjoyed writing all the drama. Thank you very much for the compliment :)
Reviewer: miraculoustragedy (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 02:38 AM · On: Innuendo
I will totally and without a doubt read the story. If anything I know I won't have any more Twilight to look forward to.
Reviewer: jaywood (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 02:19 AM · On: Bloody Hands
This is a great story and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: foreveryoung (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 01:59 AM · On: Innuendo
Please keep writing! It is really funny and good!
Reviewer: Mystic_Ice24 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 12:18 AM · On: Bloody Hands
KEEP WRITING!!! I've already finished BD and this is all I get of Edward and Bella now...sides, I'm hooked! I have to know how you end this....it's riviting! You're in my favorites....so here's a vote for continuing!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad that you're enjoying reading this as much as I am writing it. <33
Reviewer: sparkleme (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 12:08 AM · On: Bloody Hands
Holy wow. That's intense. Are you planning on getting to the whole Brady story next chapter or later? And how is the bleeding thing going to work out when she is just outside a house full of vamps. Stupid Tanya I hope she dies!
Author's Response: The Brady stuff is going to be revealed over the next couple of chapters. There are only about 3-4 chps left for this story.
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 12:07 AM · On: Bloody Hands
OMG! That whole chapter was like wow. Total shocker from the moment she made it to the Cullen's house. Both Bella and Edward are totally frustrating me. Neither one will get the courage to actually talk to the other and it is drivng me nuts. I wanted to slap Tanya. I was freaking out over the whole Brady issue. I can't wait for next update.
Author's Response: Haha I know, Edward and Bella suck at telling the truth. Thank you so much for you review, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: bringmeback (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 12:03 AM · On: Bloody Hands
Wow, I was not expecting that! Excellent chapter as usual, and I hope you have fun in NYC!
Author's Response: Thank you on both counts! :D
Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 11:47 PM · On: Bloody Hands
dang... wow. um.. maybe you could elaborate on what exactly happened. like i said, I love this fic. keep writing please!
Author's Response: Will do in later chapters :) thanks!
Reviewer: twinut (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 11:39 PM · On: Bloody Hands
This story is so good, I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 10:53 PM · On: Bloody Hands
WONDERFUL!! WONDERFUL!! WONDERFUL!! Have a great vacation!
Author's Response: Thanks! Eeee, I'm so excited!!! ♥
Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 10:48 PM · On: Bloody Hands
Woah. ::breathes:: Woah. Not what I expected. The end of that chapter was STUNNING! Absolutely stunning! I know you're busy so I won't ask you to "update soon" because I know you're going as fast as you can. Thank you for this update and I am eager for the next.
Author's Response: :D :D :D THANKS! This is a lovely review :) & thanks also for realising that it takes me FOREVER to write each chapter and that I am trying as hard as I can to update it in a reasonable amount of time. Thank you for all the support :) ♥
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 10:37 PM · On: Bloody Hands
Hmm, Brady? I'm interested in hearing more about him.
Author's Response: All will be revealed in the next few chapters.
Reviewer: VAMPIREEElover (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 04:55 PM · On: Innuendo
OH PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE THIS! its soooooo good! id be really sad to see an extremely good fanfiction go to waste and not be finished! PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE!
Reviewer: vasilisa (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 10:57 AM · On: A Meeting
You should deffinately keep going. It's a very intriguing idea. Honestly I think this story fits Edward and Bella more than Breaking Dawn, although don't get me wrong it was an awesome book.
Reviewer: michelle62092 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2008 05:09 AM · On: Innuendo
YES!! I will certainly still read this story after Breaking Dawn is out (because it already is :P ) its a very good story so far :)
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