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Reviewer: lovelylucy (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 03:15 PM · On: White Walls
Hey there, i am new to this whole site and fan fiction in general but i LOVE your story! I just finished chapter 3 and am avoiding lots of homework to read more! Your a great writer and I really enjoy your story!
Reviewer: dolphindiver12 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2008 06:00 PM · On: Race Against Time
OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY! Have been reading it for ages but my account has only just started working so i appologise for that. I just want to say that my class are as obsessed with your story as we are with Twilight =] thought that might be interesting for you. Please keep writing!
Reviewer: ashtong21 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 11:10 PM · On: Race Against Time
omg...AMAZING!! please please please update soon!! and i love your chapter notes. lol Your friend's drawings are awesome btw.
Reviewer: citrine (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 10:00 AM · On: Race Against Time
oh my god THIS IS ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS! I WAS ADDICTED THE MOMENT I READ THE FIRST PARAGRAPH! keep writing, never stop- well, until you finish it!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks :)
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 09:29 PM · On: Race Against Time
You are an amazing author and I am addicted to Seducing Ms Swan. I will wait patiently for as long as it takes if you promise you will not abandon this magnificent story.
Author's Response: Most definitely not abandoning it, don't worry. I've written about a third of the next chapter.
Reviewer: Mora (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 01:01 PM · On: Siberia
Deliciously frustrating.
Reviewer: Foo (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 05:55 PM · On: A Meeting
Amazing. :) Don't stop writing! .. my only slight problem is that Edward seems a little too... impatient? Hasty? xD Even though he might feel that way, I thought he should've had a little more self-control. Apart from that, it's awesome. I love the part where Bella finally gets a little "backbone" and rides away on her motorcycle.
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 12:37 PM · On: Race Against Time
this story is breaking my heart and i think it need to keep going soon before i die of dissapointment!! PLEASE! you need to keep writing!
Author's Response: I've written about a third of chapter twelve so far.
Reviewer: broadwaystar29 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 03:53 PM · On: Race Against Time
gah! lovely story you've got here. please update soon!!!!
Reviewer: H83Wun (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 01:06 AM · On: Race Against Time
So I must sheepishly admit in the solice of my own bedroom-- I love to read dialogue outloud to myself. A little acting right? But reading out does take longer than the conventional route. So I tend to only recite either powerful or important dialogue. That said: I was extremely touched by the power behind your dialogue. I just read your entire story in a sitting and just sobbed as I fake screamed Bella's words. Now that I've explained just how crazy I am, you know how much I appreciate your dialogue. Bella's tear down of Edward was so poingant and perfect. I have no idea how you'll move from here, but I loved what you have. I do feel that some of the narrative is a little too verbose. Not my style, really. I tend to skim thick paragraphs. I know writers don't like to hear that, being one myself, but it's true. But you redeem yourself with your dialogue. I look forward to more. -h83wun
Author's Response: Well if you're crazy then so am I; I read dialogue out loud too. When I was drafting Bella's break down in chapter 10 I went for long walks across the cliffs near where my grandmother lives where I'd pretend to 'be' Bella by acting her out. It really helps make dialogue more realistic and plausible. Thanks for the review! So glad you're enjoying the story, hope you continue to do so. I know I am a bit too wordy sometimes, but I'm grateful that you're sticking with me anyway.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 03:34 PM · On: Race Against Time
More please!!!
Reviewer: Chelsea Volturi (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 09:02 AM · On: A Meeting
I love this story, it´s my favourite! Pleeeease update soon!
Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 12:44 AM · On: A Meeting
this is definetly my favorite so far!! Please keep writing!!!
Reviewer: wildflower2612 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2008 05:08 PM · On: Race Against Time
I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: cicada (Anonymous) · Date: November 22, 2008 10:29 AM · On: Race Against Time
I'll do your homework for you if you'll post another chapter. Your writing is so much fun--love it!
Author's Response: Lol okay, can you please write a re-creative piece entitled 'Othello on the couch' by Wednesday? When you've done that you can revise for my politics test on Democracy, rewrite my History essay and try to understand the Passe Compose in french. Thanks ;)
Reviewer: BellasEvilTwin (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2008 12:52 PM · On: Race Against Time
O.o What a cliffhanger! I need updates! Pleez?
Reviewer: Char (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2008 12:34 PM · On: Race Against Time
This is utter brilliance. Are you a professional author? For fuck's sake get on to right the next chapter! Summary Idea: Edward left Bella in the deepest agony for 6 years after he left. What happens when he suddenly appears at a student where Bella teaches? Will she have the heart to forgive him?
Author's Response: Ha no, not a professional author. I've written about a third of the next chapter, I'll finish it as soon as I can.
Reviewer: downfalll_ (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2008 05:19 AM · On: Race Against Time
ARGH!!! ur seriously killing me with this story please update it soon!!! i feel like im constantly stalking this page!!!!
Author's Response: I've written about a third of the next chapter! I'll post as soon as I can. Thanks for reading! <3
Reviewer: MoGanHannah (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 02:34 AM · On: Race Against Time
mmooorrreeee. I need mmoorreee!!!!
Reviewer: Annaleah (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 01:33 AM · On: Race Against Time
torturously good. holy smokes. And might I add, bella's confession and words are even better the second time around. I cannot even express how good this is, how good this chapter was, and how badly I need more. So, I'm sending all my muse powers, and all my organization skills (cause lets face it, you're way to busy for your own good, my dear), and let's all hope you can update soon. Thanks so much, for sharing your gift of writing with us. AL
Reviewer: Annaleah (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2008 05:45 PM · On: The Truth
This chapter was fabulous. Bella's shouting to Edward was so satisfying. Finally letting it all out and being able to scream at him....ugh, so good. Great job, I am loving this story so far. It is so well written, you are very talented. It is easy to see that you put a lot of effort into making this a quality piece of work, and I really think all your readers, especially me, appreciate that. I look forward to reading the next part. Great job! AL
Reviewer: alyshia (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 11:37 PM · On: A Meeting
i just want you to know that i have never read fanfic in my life and i was just bored and ignoring my homework. i came across this and i seriously just sat here and read every single word. it is so good. you are the reason i joined this site. i really like it! i hope you write more soon!
Reviewer: xfunkadelicx (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 05:20 PM · On: Race Against Time
Oh. My. Goodness. What a cliffhanger!
Please please please update soon, this is an amazing story!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 01:17 AM · On: Race Against Time
You really need to update soon. You just can't keep us dying in anticipation like this.
Author's Response: Um, just so you know, I honestly don't get a kick out of leaving readers hanging. I wish I could update too, but life is busy and I'm behind in homework as it is. I'm sorry it's taking so long, but you will get an update eventually :)
Reviewer: luckybella (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2008 09:17 PM · On: A Meeting
I think about this story a lot. So much that more than once, I dreamed about Edward playing the piano for her over the phone. The way she just stared at it but wouldn't pick it up; it totally pained my heart. Inside my head I was screaming, "Answer it, Answer it...You've tortured him enough!" It was so romantic of him and yet desperate and heart-wrenching at the same time. Sigh...I love your writing. Any closer to another chapter??Anxiously waiting for another awesome chapter!
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