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Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Lucky
please update, I love your story and can't wait to see Jake get there.
Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Innuendo
I'm reading it right now. Its always fun to read how things could have worked out.
Reviewer: TwilightFan2468 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Innuendo
oh dear.....trouble
hey there is a Seducing Ms Swan on fanfiction.net
is that the same as this????
Reviewer: TwilightFan2468 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Motorbikes
wouldnt jasper sense bella's love?
Reviewer: savehim (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Lucky
Please finish the story!!
Reviewer: Mab fan girl (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Innuendo
I liked it, and you should fininsh it.
Reviewer: XFireandIceX (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Lucky
I just read through the whole story and I must say that it is AWESOME! You are a great writer and I am anxiously what happens next.
Reviewer: simbi (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Lucky
This is better than the original!! My heart ACHED during the scene with Edward and Bella in the snow. Actually, my heart pretty much ached the entire time :) Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: katiesgotsass (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Lucky
oh my god!!!!!!!!! I love this story... please update soon!!!!11
Reviewer: Elizabella (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Race Against Time
I love your story... I wonder if you could take a look at mine... it is on Thetwilightsaga... I will paste the code at the end. I have only written a few chapters.. and my chapters seem so very small in comparison to yours.. I love your story and it is so much more than I imagine mine could ever be.. But I was hoping that you could give me some pointers....
http://www.thetwilightsaga.com/forum/topics/on-the-horizon-bpov-after?groupUrl=fanfiction&id=2570916%3ATopic%3A3109098&groupId=2570916%3AGroup%3A422&page=3#comments
the first I think 2 chapters are int he first like entry.. then 3-8 are on the pages.... there are only 3 pages... not too much...
Reviewer: Elizabella (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:43 PM · On: The Truth
OME.... what???
Reviewer: Elizabella (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:11 PM · On: WEREWOLVES?!
OH MAN!!! I freakin Love this story!!!!!
Reviewer: Elizabella (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Innuendo
uh oh
Reviewer: Elizabella (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Fear
Awe!!!
Reviewer: Elizabella (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Lullabies
I cant wait to see what happens
Reviewer: Elizabella (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Siberia
Still in love with this story
Reviewer: CatchyEnding99 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 07:29 AM · On: A Meeting
This is amazing. Please update soon, Jacob's going to be pissed!
Reviewer: Elizabella (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:41 AM · On: White Walls
wow this is really good. it is almost 4 in the morning.. I would stay up and keep reading all morning.. but if I dont go to sleep now... I will have a hard time with the baby when he wakes in the morning...
Reviewer: Elizabella (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Mrs Robinson
Still really good.. loving the story line so so much
Reviewer: Elizabella (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 12:45 AM · On: A Meeting
wow. it is really good.... I love the way you went totally out of the regular story line.. its great!!! cant wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: irishjo (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Lucky
I just discovered your story yesterday and I'm addicted!!! It's just getting better and better. The whole motorcycle accident scene and Edward saving Bella.....so exciting. The bad part of becoming addicted is now I need the next chapter to come out so i can get my fix. LOL. Thanks so much!!!!
Reviewer: missninacullen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Lucky
OOOOOOOOOOH MY GOD!
i so cant wait whats gonna happen with jake there! at first, i was sure it was gonna be charlie. but jake. whoa.
some trouble!
now im just dying for you to update! please, please hurry.
i hope things are okay in your life and i know you are really busy.
but i cant wait :)
Reviewer: missninacullen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Race Against Time
oh and by the way tell your friend i absolutely LOVE her art. shes really talented (as are you, but you already knew that hahah)
Reviewer: missninacullen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Race Against Time
wow, some action.
even though this chapter in itself was not funny, i couldnt help but laugh at the thought of alice driving the ambulance.. hahah. bella will be fine, right? she has to.
im mortified, i only have one more chapter left.
you should definitely update soon :)
Reviewer: missninacullen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:06 PM · On: The Truth
a crazy chapter, but good. finally edward told her about his feelings!
well.. i know you wont kill bella... will edward save her? i feel bad for brady, but i wish she didnt have to leave for forks now. that she could just stay and they could work everything out.
i know i know im a sucker for fluffy stuff like that :D
make bella and edward be happily together and tanya die? id love you forever! hhahah.
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