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Reviewer: Mrs_Bellacullen (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Leader
I have to tell you- I started the first chapter and haven't been able to walk away! I can't wait to see what happens and how this all turns out! You are an amazing writer!!! I'm sitting on the edge of my seat, excited and waiting for the next chapter!
Reviewer: mestisa77 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Leader
I loved it!!! literally could not stop reading it, can't wait till the next chapter
Reviewer: jenwinnie (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Leader
more, more, more!!
Reviewer: kacey holden (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:46 AM · On: White Walls
You are an incredibly talented writer! I've skimmed a few of the stories on this sight but this is the first that not only held my attention but had me on the edge of my seat. It's beautifully written and the characters are true to themselves. Please continue to share your gift for writing.
Reviewer: adilsonnnn (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 02:36 PM · On: Leader
I LOVE THIS STORY!
I've actually been reading this story for awhile and was wondering if you had given up but I'm glad you havent. I enjoy the plot and understand that you must have a wicked complex imagination to come up with it. It also seems like you take your time in your writing and try and make it as best as you can-not just write it as you go and as a reader I appreciate that. I'm not a huge Jacob fan and I'm sure many of your readers aren't but I'm glad you gave him a reasoning for all of his actions at the beginning it was neat.
Bravo!
Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Leader
please write somemore..it was very awesome reading kept me at hte edge of my seat or bed actually! anyway i would love to read more..can't wait! :o)
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Leader
Thank you! I among the ranks that just started reading today and read the whole thing. I'm totally hooked! I guess you don't have to worry about the Twilight Fandom fading away now that BD is out ;-)
I can't wait to read the next chapter. You're keeping me on the edge of my seat. I love it! You do excellent work.
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Innuendo
I disagree -- I thought this chapter was great! :-)
Reviewer: Rhett (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Leader
well, it's officially 6:30 in the morning, and i'm going to bed. cause i apparently couldnt muster the good sense to get to sleep at a decent hour and instead was sucked into your alternate slightly british twilight world! and i now need updates cause i'm too wired to sleep!
Reviewer: Lead69 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Leader
I truly enjoyed JPOV. Looking forward to a shorter wait.
Reviewer: peacelovetwilight118 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Leader
I love your work. I'm slightly confused though. I thought the brady/bella thing happened years ago because bella thought about it several times during the story. Did I miss something?
Author's Response: The summer after Edward left, when Bella was 18, she was attacked by Victoria and another vampire. Brady tried to protect Bella and was driven to insanity by Victoria in the process. He's been on the psychiatric ward of the hospital ever since, something which has always made Bella feel incredibly guilty. Six years later (in the present) he has a heart attack which sends him into a coma.
Reviewer: Sendmeonmyway (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Leader
I really like Carole. She seems really sweet. Will we learn more about her? (Please say yes=])
I really hope Jacob doesn't overeact like he's famous for doing or he doesn't completely screw up any chance of the Cullens getting back into Bella's life. Especially Alice. I love Alice and Jacob better not screw thast up. Even though I know he has the best intentions....
Xoxo- Sendmeonmyway <3
Reviewer: New-moon-rising (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Leader
the whole story is brilliant.
Reviewer: theresurrected (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 12:51 PM · On: A Meeting
cant wait!!! when is the next chap coming??
Reviewer: katstrat (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Leader
Hey Rialle!
I just wanted to say thank you for your response to my review and your explanation! I think it's really nice that you are taking time for your readers. Besides, now I get it! Your explanation about Jacob and his point of view does absolutely make sense. Somehow I didn't get it that way before. So thanks again! Your story is great and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: ForbidenFruit (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Leader
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG PLZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY PLZ?!!!!!!!11 I KNOW U HAVE A LIFE BUT HELP THOES THAT DON'T lol sorry for they hyperness it's just i'm surprised i finished your fanfic in one day... it's that awesome dude i cried when bella told edward off before the accident.... sighhhhhhh so did jacob imprint on carol? just becuase u're soulmates doesn't mean imprinting.... anywhoooo gosh!!! plzzzzz update soon i love this story! ^^
FF
Reviewer: GataMoreninha (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Leader
I'm loving you story!!
Just started reading today and read it all in one sitting.
Hope you post more soon!!
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Leader
Good chapter. I look forward to the next. Thanks for updating.
Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Leader
WOW, i just recently started reading this story, and i love it. I really hope Jacob doesn't start something he'll regret, but then again his Jacob. Hopefully his patience has grown over the years. I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: rockincqh (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Siberia
i never write reviews, but your story is amazing. i have been crying harder than i did when read new moon. great work, i can't wait to read the rest.
Reviewer: jaimejo2929 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Leader
Love this story. So well written. The emotions are just heartbreaking and gut wrenching. Can't tell you how many tears I've shed over this on already. Please update soon!
Reviewer: ForbidenFruit (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:19 AM · On: A Meeting
holy apples and bananas!!!!!!!!!!! i love it!!!!!!! ^^ gasp!!!!
Reviewer: tnuccio (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Leader
yeah! good to have you back!
Reviewer: juliet233 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 12:02 PM · On: Leader
I love Jacob's POV! That was an awesome surprise :D And you did fantastically writing his POV, too. I can't wait to see what happens next when he actually gets to Rochester.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Leader
That was fantastic! Loved getting JPOV. cannot wait to see what happens when he shows up in Rochester!
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