Awesome twist!!!  I love where you are going with this :)

You did an awesome job of capturing Jacob's "voice"  - it was a good move!  I think you were absolutely right that these chapters needed to come from Jake.  Way to take a risk with your writing!

 ,why you not finishing the story it was going so well i'm getting hear broken here please ,please, please continue writing it

i absolutely love this story. i cant wait to read more. you are very talented. its almost the end of june/beginning of july right? haha (im)patiently waiting for the rest of the story i hope there is a lot more to read such a wonderful and dedicated author such as yourself im sure that we will have more to read soon :D  

omg... i can't say if i love u or hate u hahahah!!! i've been going through too many emotions in this story... most hate towards Bella, not that i don't understand her, but still, i can't deal with her right now.... hahaha really... how stupid of me.. but oh well....

i'm so shocked, poor Brady... is he really a goner?? omg omg!! poor Edward, all his guilt will come ten fold... i can't even begin to think what he's going through... i know i know, Bella bla bla bla, but i feel bad for Edward and not Bella **murmurs stupid Bella ** hahaha..

Gabs!!

i saw your latest author's response.. this will only have 3 chapters more?? sad... =( i really really enjoyed this story and was hoping that it would go a long way still. plus right now, it seems that bella and edward are nowhere near a reconcilliation of some sort. so if this were to have 3 more chapters only... well i hope they are looooong ones because i just can't imagine how they can be back together that soon after everything that's happened so far. i don't think immediate reconcilliation is possible... i was hoping it would be gradual and that edward had to earn it the hard way from bella (even if we all know he suffered too all those 6 years---well that was his fault anyway). so please... i hope this still goes longer than 3 chapters...

yay!!! i like that last line A LOOOT!!! i mean c'mon, "It was time to seduce Miss Swan"!!!!! omg!!! yay!!! hahahaha too good too good...

u almost got me to cry as i was reading Edwards feelings of total dispair and sadness and just the feeling of complete loss... i mean i guess that's the way we felt, in those few months in New Moon and u seem to really get them, and furthermore i feel much more pain for Edward's pain than Bella's, not because i hate her or anything, but because i feel Edward's pain and feelings are beyond anything Bella could ever understand in her human life, i dunno, i just feel like he has a stronger feeling (even if she does have, in a way, the same feeling) but the way SM portraited it, i just feel it that way.... again, dunno... mmm i wonder what u think... mmmm

well great story so far, i'm curious about Brady, and so not loving the fact that Jake still has such power and feelings (even if they're not romantic) towards Bella, and can't wait to see how this turns out...

Gabs!!

hello!!!

oh wow!! omg!!! wow!!! great great chapter, the small preview really got my attention, it is something very new and different from other things i've read... i really praise u for the writting!! great theme and all!!!

hope to keep loving the story!! i'll let u know any comment xD!!

Gabs!!

can't wait for the next chapter in this one......

Thanks for the reassurance Rialle.  I definitely look forward to your next chapter and now that I know you don't have a Bella/Jacob thing going on, I'll be brave enough to read it.  I love the AU of all you fan fic writers but I'm so in love with Edward that I hate to see him portrayed as a SOB (not that you did).  I just love the old-fashioned gentlemanliness (I think I just made that word up) of his character. 

So thanks again for giving us a great read and maybe you'll consider doing a one-shot short about the teacher/student storyline just for laughs.

 

 

 

I LOVE LOVE LOVE your story i think its great, I cant wait for you to write more, i think this is one of the best fan fictions i have read, you are a great writer, and you leave such dramatic ciff hangers it keeps me needing to read more :)

I am newly reading this as I am new to Twilighted and I am really enjoying the story.  I do hope that you continue writing it.  I am hooked and look forward to the next chapter. 

Don't be too hard on yourself - Not all of SM's chapters were perfect either.

The concept is great and I must admit that I cried thru the first few chapters - so carry on please!

 This is a fabulous fanfic! I recently joined twilighted and I haven't reviewed any other story yet, but I just had to review this one. I've spent the last couple of hours reading the whole thing straight through, and I love the turn this fic has taken- it's well thought out, and meaningful. Not that I don't love my light hearted fluff, but the last several chapters were so emotion ridden and just plain JUICY. It's deliciously dramatic. I'm dying for more, haha. I especially enjoyed the last two chapters. Jacob's pov was very refreshing, and really enhanced the emotional depth of the story.

I guess I want to encourage you to strive for your vision. I like this fic because it's raw, and bella and edward are actually going through some shit... It's real to me.  I'm just curious as to how they are going to reconstruct their relationship.

Your talent is an inspiration! No pressure, but.......... update soon, lol!  Keep it up!