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Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 10:11 AM · On: War in a Waiting Room
Ooooh. Just read all this story in one go and I love it! Please update, I need more. =] And you get a ten on the rating from me!
Love your writing.
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Reviewer: cammcv (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:39 AM · On: War in a Waiting Room
very good plz update soon
Reviewer: hetzel4 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 02:56 AM · On: War in a Waiting Room
I just started reading this story a few days ago. Can't wait for next update! Great job. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: MeLovesCookies (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 11:29 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room
I just started reading this story yesterday and I'm hooked!!! Hope you keep writing I can't wait to see how this all pans out! By far one of my top 10 favorite fan fics already! You ROCK!!!
Reviewer: cocoalvin (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:28 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room
I have enjoyed this story so much. I read it from start to finish last night and this morning. I notice you haven't posted since May. It would be a real shame to not see this story through. You have a real talent for bringing the characters to life and even though I've read SM's 4 books numerous times I was still able to lose myself in your story and believe it. I look forward to more. SOON PLEASE!!
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:17 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room
I am enjoying reading this story. I thought this chapter was good although it was a bit slow in terms of the pace of the story. I'm watching for more chapters about the reunion of my favorite star-crossed lovers! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: lambinlove (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 01:10 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room
oohh please continuee the story is amaziing! i couldn't stop readings it even thought if its sad i just really like it, its like another option of what could had happen if edward hadn't returned to bellas life and i find it really good the way you just build up the story, its really amazing, good job and keep it going, plz never stop writing the story :)
Reviewer: galaxy69uk (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 02:18 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room
OMG this is sooooooooooo good! I read it from start to finish I couldn't stop! I NEED more LOL!
Reviewer: Bella19011918 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Race Against Time
AHHH! I hope she is ok!!
plus i hope she forgives Edward once she wakes up and realizes that he probly never left the hospital. which im guessing he doesnt
Reviewer: mereroxx (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 08:49 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room
i really like this story please update soon!
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:59 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room
Ok so, I like this chapter but I also understand why you don't. Wow heartbreaking. But I do believe the things said are the things that Edward should hear. I hope the bitterness doesn't last though at least not around. It's not too good for Bella, she is a mess already.
Can't wait to see your next chapter.
Don't keep us waiting too long.
Reviewer: Penelope Marie (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:28 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room
Sweeie i think this is one of the best chapters out there u actually made me feel sorry for Jacob.. great chapter please please update sooner lol
Reviewer: Aly110 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Race Against Time
Hey Rialle:
Just wanted to tell you that the first author's note was hilarious. And I really do hope you enjoyed your vacations. Now right back to bussines. Normally when I read fan fics I leave advices for the writters, but I have had some mild arguments with most of them, because they don't like their work being 'reviewed.' But after all this IS as review so here's my advice. I don't think you are doing anything wrong. I have spent most of my summer vacation reading Twilight fan fictions, and yet I have found yours to be one of the bests. The only one that can actually stand in your league is JOY's 'Midnight Dreams' and still I believe yours is better. There's only one thing that is seriously bugging me, and it is the fact that there really aren't any completely visualized descriptions on most chapters, which is a shame, becuase I most defenatly look forward to see through your eyes, everything as you pictured it at first. How exactly is Bella's appartment, how is the atmosphere she lives in at school. You like to describe feelings, I suppose. But I would love descrpitions from the surroundings as well. Remember, there is no such thing as too much details. It helps the readers to get inside your head and picture exactly what you imagined the first time you wrote this. I really hope you don't get mad at me for leaving this advice, being an advice as it is, your not obligated to follow it. But you just seemed like the kind of girl that would be enough open minded to listen to her readers pleads. Any way, now that my advice have been voiced, I beg you to tell me if it was some how offending or useless and so I will stop writting this kind of comment, I'm very truly sorry if it was.
Hopefully forgiven:
Aly
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Reviewer: Aly110 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Innuendo
Hey Raille:
I just have one little question for you. Are you CRAZY?! This chapter was very, very good. I have to admit that compared to number six and seven, it lacks a little romance. But STILL it was fantastic. And of course you shuold keep writting after breaking dawn comes out. You should know that we like and appreciate you stories for what they are. And we expect to keep reading them. NOT only because they are good but because, sometimes I even think that they are better than the real thing. Which is very distictively bizarre for me to say. I've been a writter for almost a decade now, and I can assure you I have read a great variety of books, novels, and stories. And for being so young, your talent is very much unique. Keep on writting.
Sincearly (writter's honor):
Aly:
xoxoxoxxoxoxoxoxoxo
Reviewer: Aly110 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Fear
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Rialle, I thought we had this straighted out. We wouldn't mind waiting for the chapters, AS LONG as you didn't leave us on a cliff hanger. You owe us a couple additional chapters for that one. Just joking. But really, DON'T do that. It's very frustraiting.
The best of lucks:
Aly
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Reviewer: Bella19011918 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Lullabies
She is making huge mistakes lol
but it makes for a jucier story =)
Reviewer: Bella19011918 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:54 PM · On: White Walls
I cant wait to see how Bella responds to Edward. I want her to take him back but only after she slaps him and does a lot of yelling cuz he deserves it lol
but i hope she isnt mad at the others. its not their fault the family left
Reviewer: Aly110 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Siberia
HEY RIALLE:
I read your chapter end note, and I just wanted to tell you that I encourage you to take your time writting the chapters. After all it IS YOUR story. And at the end the results are based in quality and not on quantity, so don't rush yourself. Take all the time that you need, just PLEASE don't leave us in cliff hangers and everything will be okay.
Sincearly:
Aly
xoxoxoxoxxo
Reviewer: Aly110 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:51 AM · On: White Walls
Hello Rialle:
I just wrote to tell you that I officially HATE YOU! I didn't cry when I read the original Twilight novels, I didn't cry when I finished THE HOST I didn't even cry the first time I watched Titanic for crying out loud! But I sobbed like a baby reading this chapter. God, I was just getting over my obssesion over reading the saga and then you publish this incredible piece of work. Sheesh, what is wrong with you?! What happened to the mercy in this world?!
Just kidding, but seriously, I love your writting technique. I think your escence is very fresh and dinamic, and of course, keep writting, you are very good at it.
With love and Respect:
Aly
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Reviewer: Bella19011918 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:00 PM · On: A Meeting
oh wow! thats great!
Reviewer: panda-marnie-um (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:54 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room
im not usually a fan of Jake but i loved his POV! you captured his spirit so well in these chapters! i cant wait for the next update!
Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:30 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room
hey so i just started reading you story yesterday and let me tell you... it was alot of first's for me...
it was the first au fanfic i've ever read.
it was the first time i truely felt a loss for a non-exisitent pressence of the cullens- even when i read new moon i didn't feel this way
it was the first time i ever wanted to smack edward across the face
it was the first time i wanted bella to get over him
it was the first time that i truely appriciated carlisle and esme
it was the first time i ever thought what if
it was the first time i've cried in... months, if not almost a year..
it was the first time i thought about...
anyway this story.... this imagination of yours has.. in the most cliched words ever- irrovacably changed the way i look at life and how much i truely hate/love fate and all of the roads that life and love and hardship puts us through.
thank you.. you really have no idea how much you've helped me.
i look forward to the next update to see what bella's choice will be.. i know what mine is..
-jazzylover314
Reviewer: devina28 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 02:31 AM · On: A Meeting
Wow. You write so well, you have me here freaking out wondering whats going to happen next. I don't think i'm going to be able to sleep!! :0
Reviewer: Frzr71186 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:06 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room
OMG, if you do not update soon I'm going to scream. I just spent 2 hours reading all the chapters and am unbelievably hooked. I want more, more, more!
Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 11:27 AM · On: War in a Waiting Room
i love your story, i hope there will be an update soon, i can't wait, xx
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