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Reviews For Seducing Ms Swan
Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Control

I didn't know how you would get Jacob to let Bella decide.  You wrote a great Bella POV.  I look forward to your next chapter.  Much Love.

Reviewer: zpower21 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Control

YEAH!!!! THNX for the update... was starting to dread the thought that you might have abandonded ship here.

 

I like this chapter. I cannot stand when there is a peaceful easy resolution to so much pain so quickly. It never seems real. Like a person can really get over that much pain in the blink of an eye. I really like seeing you give Bella a big brass set! All of those years have really done her some good in the non-mousey department!

...walks away with a huge grin!!!!! Ahhhh an update!

~Z~

Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Control

All I felt was an acute pain for Edward. That's pretty much it. I get that Bella's in  her own head and all, but I feel bad for him and not her in this case. It wasn't fair of her to blame so much on him that wasn't his fault and then not even feel guilty about it. 

Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Control

You know, Jacob truly gets on my last nerve....he is so childish and beligerent - it's not even funny....GO home to your preggos wife

And this line: It was one thing for me to talk about Brady, where we both had common ground, but Carole was a totally different area. I had no right to speculate about their relationship; that was something which was private and precious to the two of them. Anyway, Jacob was already shaken up enough by what I had said.......but YET and still he is alllll up in her buisness with Edward - give me a break....

And Bella - she makes me sick some times - make up your damn mind....

Either you want Edward or you don't - I understand the hurt he has caused her, I truly do.....but she acts like a clueless, selfish child most of the time....if she can't get past their past , then move on and release that man for goodness sake

UGH!!

Reviewer: Gaia (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Control

You cannot imagine just how delighted I was to open my favourites box and see this update! I think you've done a great job. I love how you manage to tell your own story and yet remain true to the characters as drawn by SM. That was such a great scene between Bella nd Jake. You can really sense the depth and solidity of their friendship. Not to put pressure on you but I'm looking forward to the scene with Edward. :-)

Reviewer: crystal16 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Control

another fabulous addition :O)

Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Control

Thanks for the update!

I think you did a great job with keeping the guys in character, especially Jake worrying about Bella, how he doesn't like to be out of control and still saying funny stuff when he tries to talk about his feelings :)

Reviewer: D Pattinson (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Control

Good chapter!  I am really looking forward to the Edward one. Please don't make us wait so long!

Reviewer: blobby (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Control

cant wait for next chapter!

Reviewer: blue_eyes (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:25 PM · On: The Truth

i like this story

Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Control

Great chapter! i cant wait for the next one!

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Control

I'd just like to say that jacob is a prick.

Ok now that I've gotten my predjudice comment out of the way I will sontinue with the more logical thoughts buzzing around in my head.

Bella is taking Edward fro granted. He loves her, yes. She loves him, yup. Now why is she stringing him along? Bella in the books does this to jacob and I really hate her at times for it. In this story she tells him she's in love with him, still, and then runs. Ya..... what the fuck?

There comes a poit in time when being around the one you're in love with becomes to much to bear if you can't be with that person. If Bella keeps pushing Edward away like she is now, I think he should leave. He is in so much pain right now because of Bella. She's just like 'mehhhhhh you're here so who cares what I do'. She should be taking this time to either a) get some closure or b) accept him back, quickly.

Emotionaly, Edward and Bella are both wrecks. If this goes on longer one of them will cave and   leave. Eother Bella would go back to Forks or Edward would go..... somewhere that's not there. Bella isn't looking into herself for the answer. Her brain is telling her that Edward doesn't love her and that he'll just leave again. Her heart is telling her otherwise. Sometimes we just have to trust ourselves and our hearts in life. I'm sure of she did she'd see that Edward leaving or her being away from him again would put her in so much pain.

Now jacob..... QUIT BEIN SUCH A PUSSY!

Yuo I think I've covered everything.

~ B

Oh and WRITE FASTER!

Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Control

Wow, that chapter was well worth the wait! Great flow, great writing and character development. Not at all OOC and the emotions of the characters were captured beautifully.

I'm sorry you've had a rough go of things as of late and truly hope that things are back on track for you. Chin up (as my grandfather always said)

Reviewer: ladyb25 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Control

This chapter was really really great and I was super happy to see that you updated. You have no idea!! I really really really hope that you update soon because I honestly cannot wait for Bella and Edward's conversation so I really hope that the next chapter will be up soon. Thanks for another amazing chapter!!!

Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Control

i was ecstatic to see on my email that there's an update for this!! yey!! i've been waiting and really looking forward for it.. and the wait was worth it even if we didn't get to see much of edward. i really liked what bella and jacob talked about. i never would have thought that that was the real reason jacob went there. but it made sense. i'm sort of an escapist too when dealing with my problems. i just didn't think jacob would be to. it's impressive that bella could surmise that much and could think and talk like that given that she just woke up. i thought something like that would be too much for her given the injuries she suffered. well i guess it's just a testament to how strong she is. i think she should think for a couple of hourse before she have the discussion with edward. she had barely time to think and process the argument they had before the accident. i think she should just think about it for a while before she go ahead and talk to edward. so that she won't be all over the place. thanks SO SO MUCH for updating!! =)

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Control

I loved how Bella called out Jake on his real reason for coming to see her.  He needed to stay back in Forks, but at least she got him to deal with his feelings a bit.  I'm looking forward to the next chapter when Bella and Edward talk!

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Control

Please, please, do not take this next statement as my way of trying to make you feel guilty! - I almost danced around the room when I saw that you had updated - but I didn't - instead, I sat down and read the chapter. I love Bella's insights into Jacob; I swear sometimes I feel like the clueless wonder because of the amazing levels that these characters have, that I don't pick up on unless it's written out for me. As worried as I was that you had abandoned this story (one of the very first fanfics I ever read), I am more concerned about your well-being. I hope that things are going better, please take care of yourself.

Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Control

I loved it! I'll add you to my twitter account now. Thanks so much for updating!

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Control

I does love it :) And, of course, I'M SO FUCKING HAPPY THIS UPDATED!!!

Reviewer: squarepancake (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Control

Though never a Jake fan, I find myself quite liking the more grown up, mature character you've presented. Already eager for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Dave51481 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 05:16 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room

=( three months almost. Hope you haven't given up on this story. Just looking forward to the Jake/Eddie/Bella angst that's going to happen now that she's awake. Anyway hope to see an update soon. Pretty good story you got going on.

Reviewer: chloedog246 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Fear

Happy 16th Birthday! I'm so jealous you can drive. Thanks for writing this story! It's my favorite story on twilighted.                                                                            

Reviewer: charizzard (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 02:22 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room

brilliant, please carry on :) xx

Reviewer: Black Snowflake (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 10:50 AM · On: War in a Waiting Room

Poor Jacob, Edward deserves it and thanks for not leaving us on a total cliff with B still unconcious. Great Story!

Reviewer: KellansBBR (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 03:14 PM · On: War in a Waiting Room

Please please continue! I read the majority of this story in one day and couldn't stop until I had to. It is excellent and I would like to know more of what will happen

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