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Reviewer: pogo (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 03:37 AM · On: Nessie - guests

Loved the suspense

Author's Response:

Thanks for the nice reviews, glad you liked the suspense!  Mad :)

Reviewer: pogo (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 03:29 AM · On: Nessie - supervision

AWww loved this start cant wait to read more

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2011 07:48 PM · On: Nessie - secrets

I feel so bad for Leo...

Is this going to be a desiding factor in Ness wanting to get to know Leo better? 

I have a feeling Jake will need to keep is enemies close...

Take care, Dxiie

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for another really nice review.  It's great to hear from you.  I think that the deciding factor in Nessie getting to know Leo is the fact that she genuinely likes him, though this history might make her a little more sympathetic.  Have a good week, Mad :)

Reviewer: Ciroseras (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2011 04:51 AM · On: Nessie - gossip

This is really good i cant wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review, I'll try to get another chapter submitted this week. I hope you enjoy it! Mad :)

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 05:36 PM · On: Nessie - gossip

Leo must have lost his wife and child?  I can't wait to find out!  Update soon!

Take care, Dixie

Author's Response:

Hi there, thank you sooo much for the lovely reviews (and stars *hooray*).  And I really liked your guess... you'll find out the answer when Edward 'helpfully' shares the contents of Leo's thoughts with the whole family!  I'll try to update again soon, have a great week, Mad :)

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 04:50 PM · On: Nessie - brothers

Another wonderful chapter.  Rose is such a snit sometimes! lol  I love Hal and Leo's explanation on why they don't drink human blood!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 05:47 PM · On: Nessie - chalk and cheese

I can't wait to see what the deal is on these two!  Ness seems put off by them, well Leo.  I think I like Hal and Leo but could chang my mind.  I like that they are vegetarians......I wonder what Jake will think?

Author's Response:

Hi there, thank you for another really nice review (and rating!) I really appreciate it :)  I will post again very soon, and more of the brothers' history will be revealed.  Have a lovely week, Mad :)

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 09:31 PM · On: Leo - how the other half live

Ahhhh!  A huge cliffy!  Damn you! lol Please update soon, I'm really enjoying your story!

Take care, Dixie

Author's Response:

Hi Dixie, thanks for all the reviews :)  You're one of those elusive dream reviewers, you reviews are really nice and you write lots of them *yay*.  In all the places this story has been posted, I've had a number of good Monopoly guesses including thimble, paintpot, wheelbarrow and hammer, but you are the very first to get it RIGHT...!!! *cue triumphant fanfare*. 

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 09:21 PM · On: Nessie - guests

Was Esme's momopoly piece the iron?  These two are in for a rude awakening! lol

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 09:11 PM · On: Nessie - supervision

Poor Ness and Jake.  I see the family is treating them like kids...Rose seems kid of bitchy.  I find it funny that Emmett is such a party pooper and the watchdog of the group!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 08:57 PM · On: What is she?

Who the hell are Hal and Leo?   I love the start!

Reviewer: Sarsacia (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 02:10 AM · On: Nessie - guests

Can't wait for the next chapter.  I wonder who will be the one to call Jake first...Edward or Rosalie?

As for Esme's Monopoly piece, I am guessing the wheelbarrow.

Author's Response:

Hi there, thanks for the lovely review :)  That was a really good guess... but unfortunately it wasn't the wheelbarrow (hee hee!)  I will post the answer with the next chapter, have a great week.

Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2011 01:08 AM · On: What is she?

Interesting. Wondering what Nessie is up to?

Author's Response:

Hi there, thanks for the review, it is greatly appreciated :)

Reviewer: willowbae (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2011 09:22 PM · On: What is she?

Hal and Leo seem are quite the interesting pair!  Is it possible we just met the first distracted vampire?  Leo is very funny, I do believe being stuck in an airport during the holidays is one definition of hell...

Adult Nessie is of course, gorgeous and would of course attract lots of attention.


: )

Author's Response:

Hey willowbae.  Thanks for the review :)  It seems that being an immortal doesn't mean that you get to avoid the the nightmare of holiday travel.  I suppose technically they would get more of it, because they live for longer, heh heh ;)

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