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Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 10:06 PM · On: SOMP Demetri Outtake
Demetri has got it bad already for Elizabeth. The poor boy thinks he actually has a choice. Right!!! He's showing the signs now where he is obsessing about her. Plus she is the granddaughter of his mentor at the FBI. Heard stories about her and now he's met her. Elizabeth isn't too impressed or is acting like she isn't right now. Demetri is being a typical guy checking her out and having his thoughts run amok towards the gutter.
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 09:42 PM · On: SOMP Demetri Outtake
I bet that won't be the last we'll hear of these two? LOL!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 07:14 PM · On: SOMP Demetri Outtake
my god there are so many twists and turns going down this road you shold offer dramine for the trip ....his character just keeps getting deeper and deeper
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 06:35 PM · On: SOMP Demetri Outtake
OOOOh... I want to read this story too.
Reviewer: no reservations (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 05:52 PM · On: SOMP Demetri Outtake
Loved it 😉
Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2012 04:13 AM · On: Thawing
Bella did a great job explaining her hurt to Edward and I loved his response.
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 08:37 PM · On: Thawing
Love the relationship between Bells and Jake. Nice one!
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 06:19 PM · On: Thawing
Awesome as usual! I loved how u handled the begining of their "talk" looking fwd to reading the continuence! xo
Reviewer: G licious (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 03:35 PM · On: Thawing
LOVE THIS STORY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 08:34 AM · On: Thawing
Bella is finally opening up her wound. She is letting out the pain and telling Edward how she felt over the lapse of time away. All that pain has just been festering inside Bella all this time, it's about time she's getting it out of her system. She's calmly telling him how she felt when he left and with his playboy days. Even finally telling Jake how she feels about Edward and how he needs to get used to him around. He needs to be nice to him at least. Edward knowing "sorry" isn't enough for Bella, he needs to earn her trust and then hope to ask for her forgiveness for them to move on together. Glad they are starting to talk things out, opening up the wound, getting the festering pain out, discussing them, and starting the healing process between them.
Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 02:37 AM · On: Green Eyes
Thanks for the Tanya and Aro chapter. It was great to read. Closes that part of the story.
Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 02:35 AM · On: Thawing
That was great. Nice for bella to get out. Can't wait to see them explore more of their relationship. Thanks for the update
Reviewer: Avabell (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2012 01:52 AM · On: Thawing
I'm so glad they are opening up and telling each other everything
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 09:07 PM · On: Thawing
Baby steps are good. They're right, Bella does need to take care of herself.
Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 07:59 PM · On: Thawing
The thawing of Bella's heart has begun!! I'm so glad they are being open and honest, and that Edward is being smart by listening. I'm in love with this story!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 07:38 PM · On: Thawing
i read your last out take and i was amazed by it even if it chilled me to the bone ...Tanya's evilness know no bounds ...I think we will find D will have met his match in elizabeth .......and if jake is willing to be nice well i would say Edward is golden
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 07:35 PM · On: Thawing
Very nice. Can't wait to see the next installment!
Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 02:52 PM · On: Thawing
wow!!! Great chapter!!!!!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 01:26 PM · On: Thawing
I am really envious of Bella and Jake's friendship! They are closer than most brother's and sister's! I really enjoyed the Bella Jake time, very funny, you made me laugh!
It's nice to see Edward and Bella starting to heal. And hell yes I want to see what's going on with Demetri and Elizabeth!
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: drasticdee (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 12:43 PM · On: Thawing
great, love how bella and jacob interact
Reviewer: momof2monkeys (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 12:33 PM · On: Thawing
Oh, I can't believe things will be that easily forgiven between Jake and Edward. The conversation about Tanya is definitely something that will be hard on Bella.
Reviewer: Luna89m (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 10:04 AM · On: Thawing
Yes, the first of many talks are out of the way. They need to talk about Tayna. They need to talk about how no one really stop her too, I mean someone had to know what she was doing. Jake and Edward need to talk too. Good way for them to start.
Reviewer: Monik_79 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 09:21 AM · On: Thawing
How you can come back from that? I know I couldn´t do it. Good luck triying to take this two in that trip.
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 08:11 AM · On: Thawing
omg!
great chapter!! :D
can't wait for the next one!!!:):)
Reviewer: edward loves country (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2012 08:05 AM · On: Thawing
Now that's a good friend I'm sure Jake and Edward are gonna have a nice long chat soon.Edward needs to beg and beg everyday for forgivness even though she forgives him.
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