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Reviews For Sins of my Past
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 06:11 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate

How romantic! I don't think in 19 years together that my husband has ever done anything remotely close to being romantic. 

Reviewer: wickedvampires (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2012 06:09 PM · On: Vixen

ohh I think it is a good idea for Bella to take it a little slow but the chemistry is so strong between the two of them. Don't know if that is going to work out. Hmm. Love your last chapter. You keep it slow burning but with promises for the future. Their love for each other is undeniable. Keep up the great work!! :)

Reviewer: bluebubbles (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2012 07:01 AM · On: Vixen

i really love your story the emotion and the description is wonderful

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2012 08:42 AM · On: Vixen

I just love all this damn progress. I am a happy little Mimi.

I hope something wonderful works out for little Sam's living arrangements. I'm not sure if I want her to go home with Edward, but she seems to be winning everyone over, so it'd be nice to keep her in the family.

 

Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 08:31 PM · On: Vixen

Great chapter. Loved the teasing.

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 02:37 PM · On: Vixen

B and Carlie seem too damn understanding to be real.

Reviewer: Luna89m (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 01:18 PM · On: Vixen

So her ex is coming to town. Will Edward have a run in with him. When will they hear about Tanya, will there an outtake or something with her parents. I can not see them not not know and not doing something. What will happen when they go home. Little Sam(2) will get her, I don't thnk that Edward should because he has to much still to do, but Alice would be good for her + little Sam will still have Edward. Any one in the Cullen family she still will have Edward. We need some thing from Elizabeth about Deme. Love this one very much, because of this story may me want to write review.

Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 12:28 AM · On: Vixen

Great chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Will she move in with him???? They are definitely building something between them.

Reviewer: Monik_79 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 08:08 AM · On: Vixen

Well, glad to know Bella had a live when Edward wasn´t with her... so the ex is comming soon, is going to be interesting to see

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 06:58 AM · On: Vixen

Can't wait for the next chapter!  Love the stroy!

Reviewer: anasus (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 05:31 AM · On: Vixen

He'sbeen in the hospital for so long.  pls bring them home.

 

Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 10:05 PM · On: Vixen

Lovely!

Reviewer: edward loves country (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 09:48 PM · On: Vixen

I hope Edward adopts that girl and i hope Bella and him survive him going home

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 09:46 PM · On: Vixen

Ah, delicious torture!

Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 09:07 PM · On: Vixen

LOVED it!!  As usual😍. Can't wait for some lemony goodness for them😜

Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 08:29 PM · On: Vixen

Perfect as always. Carlie meeting Samantha was adorable. I love the teasing Bella does to Edward. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: gabella2423 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 08:14 PM · On: Vixen

Great chapter anxiously awaiting the next chapter

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 08:14 PM · On: Vixen

I can understand why Carlie would resent Samantha wanting to go home with Edward.  Edward was her father and she was just getting to know him herself.  But to see how badly she was treated by her stepdad when her mom just left her, she just included her with the rest of her family.  Even telling her because already have a Samantha would be called Sam 1 and Sam 2.  Took the time to visit with her in her room before seeing her dad, Edward. Leah worried about Bella not getting enough rest and maybe moving too fast with Edward.  She knows about following your heart and told Bella that's why she never committed to any of the other guys she dated over the years.  Bella teasing Edward.  Bella doesn't want Edward to leave hospital because he will return to his parents' home for additional recovery and she'll have to return to her home.  She won't be close to him.  She'll miss him.  Carlie is amazed about the depth of feelings her mom has for her dad.  Carlie has to talk with Dad Jake to determine how to refer to each dad.  I think Daddy Jake and Daddy Edward might work for a while.  Or one is Dad and the other can be Daddy.  Or even like she told Samantha she can call them Daddy #1 and Daddy #2.  Will be interesting to see what she and Jake come up with.  Also when Bella gets another check up regarding her eyes if she'll be yelled at for not getting enough rest herself and not following proper steps per post op instructions.

Reviewer: TwilightTucker (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 07:49 PM · On: Vixen

I think I'm so glad we are finally to this point in the story.  It is now a joy to read rather than emended heart wrenching pain.

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 07:21 PM · On: Vixen

I loved it.  I see no reason why Carlie can't call both Jake and Edward dad.  I called my father inlaw dad as well as my own father.  It was always a fun time when they were in the room together and I'd say "hey dad?" and they both would ask what!  Then I'd playfully say I meant dad 1 (my dad) and dad 2 was my father inlaw.  They were both dad and they were both ok with it.

Can you do an out take on Jake and Leah's adventure?  that sounds like a great read! lol

It looks like, if Carlie has anything to say about it, that Sam will be going home with them.  But in all honesty I think Esme or Alice will be a better choice.  Especially Alice, I think she would be able to help her the most.

Take care, Dixie (Thanks for the quick update!)

Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 07:13 PM · On: Vixen

Thought you were on vacation just could not leaveit alone could you.

 

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 06:25 PM · On: Vixen

awhhhhh, poor Sammy..... Carlie is a sweet soul.... Edward truly loves his family, ALL of them...TY for this chapter.

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 05:40 PM · On: Vixen

Very nice.  I love how Carlie reacted to Samantha.  Who is this Robert?

Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 05:33 PM · On: Vixen

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what is going to happen with little Samantha and Carlie's talk with Jake. Also what other shennanigans Bella and Edward will find themselves in. Great job, can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: karemay (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 11:19 AM · On: Karma

I don't like jacob, I just hope Edward and Bella will forgive one another. I'm very team Edward, Jacob is nothing but a winer in the movies and stories...I'm sorry to put it like that but man jacob is always in the way...

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