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Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 09:36 AM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
HOT!! I can't wait till they can finally consummate their relationship!! Hopefully the wait won't be too long, cause I'm sweating for them. I know Edward has to heal, but there are things that can be done until then...just saying!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 09:35 AM · On: Whiplash
Well Aro was certainly thorough. Sounds like Tanya's death was for the best for everyone.
I can imagine Edward would be feeling a bit saddend at the thought of not having Bella by side each night.
Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 09:32 AM · On: Whiplash
Well it would seem that Tonya got her comeuppance. What a sweet guy Robert is! It takes a good friend to be able to see the truth, and he gets Bella and just wants her to be happy. I look forward to Edward going home.
Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2012 07:54 AM · On: Whiplash
Hmmm I wonder if Bella is ever going to suspect that Aro may have been responsible, it should be interesting. It's good to see that Edward and Carlie are finally having these serious conversations that need to be talked about. I can't wait for Edward to make it home, because I have a feeling that him being home is not going to stop Bella from doing all she can to make sure he is alright. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: dollydimple (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2012 06:48 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you your great!
Reviewer: mauge (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2012 06:37 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
Amazing. I always want to hear Eddie's PoV. It would be wonderful to know what was going on his head when Bella told him about Robert :D
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2012 01:55 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
I could not stop reading...I got up at 4:00AM because I had to knowwhat came next! I did not even realize that You were the author of wone of my otherfavoriet stories"Dark Moon Rising". What a nice surprise that was.
Xanath
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 11:43 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
Have to say when the Cullens want to pour on the romance, boy so they know how to do it. Even in the hospital, Edward has help from his parents and sister to surprise Bella with a homecooked romantic dinner. Mom cooks it, Dad brings in all the components to set up in his room, Alice distracts Bella away from his room with a good excuse (Samantha.) Bella has no idea until she walks into Edward's hospital room and sees the table with actual (linen tablecloth and napkins) with candles burning on the table, lights dimmed, and Edward holding out her chair to the table for her. Based on Bella's behavior it won't be long before Bella pushes the envelope to move them up to the next physical level. Edward was physically exhausted by all the activities in setting up the dinner and their after dinner make out session. I bet that boy slept late the next morning after that work out. Good thing he has a strong heart, to pump all that blood of his throughout his body especially southward. Exactly where both Bella and Edward want it to go. It's just Edward is still too weak to be able to fulfill that endeavor.
Reviewer: mugglesmith (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 06:26 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 01:35 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
Beautifully sweet.
Reviewer: linda (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 11:37 AM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
YUM!!!!!! keep going. thanx, Linda
Reviewer: Luna89m (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 11:04 AM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
Edward did the right thing with the dinner, it nice to see him thinking something like this. Bella was being a bad girl with that kiss. It good that they talk and are opening up to each other. Tanya got away with so much, I like to know about her parents. They were friends with Cullen yet not on thing is said about them talking or do something. I would also like to hear from Carlie about meeting Sam (2) to about Tanya.
Reviewer: jing (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 10:19 AM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
Please write Carlile POV.Thanks
Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 08:56 AM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
thanks again for the great ride - it's so nice to read something different and original and WELL-WRITTEN!!! I look forward to each update!
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 01:07 AM · On: Vixen
Keep writing!!!! :)
Reviewer: Purple Passion (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2012 12:32 AM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
Sound's like Bella and Edward are getting along nicely. Even Jake and Leah feelings seem to be changing for the better toward Edward.
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 10:56 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
Well, well. This was naughty.
I wanna hear from Leah or Rosalie!
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 10:42 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
Nice chapter. I will vote Christine.
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 10:22 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
Doesn't B have enough going on her shoulders? Why is E adding all his own guilty feelings into the mix? It seems like B's not only dealing with the past but now E's past "relationships" and now his moodiness.
What about her health?
I'd love to get a peek into Tanya's fucked up mind.
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 09:31 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
Which ever you choose I am happy with. well after he slept with all those women I am sure his past will be coming back to bite him. Well except for Tanya.. she bit the dust.
Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 09:03 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
Just finished my date with the Easter Bunny for tonight and was so excited to see you updated. It was definitely a Happy Easter when I heard you had updates for all 3 stories. I want to hear what Carlie is thinking about her parents reuniting. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 08:23 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
That dinner was such a cute idea. I can't wait to see what happens with this meeting Bella is going to have, and poor Edward is going to become the horrible patient because he will be so worried and angsty because Bella is gone. I also can't wait for Edward to make it home. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 07:44 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
woohoo! that was one hot piece of Death by AuChocolate!!!! yummy... **gigglrs and chuckles**
I am pleased with the progression that Edward and Bella are making here...I think its vital to them to show trust in each other, yes Bella is going to have insecurities; however I think we also see that Edward is probably even more insecure in most situations just because of his guilt....I'm looking forward to him finding out that Bella was the Author of the story he read that Day.....
Ah, Tanya's passing is going to be revealed, well no tears will be shed here....sad woman....till next time....Kathy
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 07:38 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
Nice dinner. I'm proud of the way Edward handled the lunch date with Robert
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2012 07:32 PM · On: Seduced by Chocolate
What a thoughtful gift. The dinner sounded wonderful and that cake! sinful!
I would like to hear Jake's POV!
Dixie
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