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Reviews For Sins of my Past
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2012 03:58 AM · On: The Spoils of War

Love, love, loved it, absolutely perfect !!

Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 01:51 PM · On: The Spoils of War

FINALLY!

Reviewer: penstop (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 10:47 AM · On: The Spoils of War

THIS HAS BEEN AN AMAZING STORY. YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER. KEEP US IN  TOUCH WITH HOW IT FEELS TO LOVE, HATE, EXCITE, CLIMAX, AND JUST BE WITH ALL THE CHARACTERS.

Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 10:00 AM · On: The Spoils of War

<3

 

Reviewer: cullensbabe (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 03:18 PM · On: SOMP outtake - Elizabeth and Demetri

Damn I hope they get to together

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 07:33 PM · On: First Kiss

I loved it!  Pandora's box indeed!  Feel free to continue their story, I'm sorry I have to keep asking!

Dixie

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 05:58 PM · On: Unafraid

This story has certainly touched my heart. It is one of your best, and thats saying alot!  You are so gifted and I want to thank you so much for sharing these wonderful characters with me.  Thank you!  Dixie

Reviewer: Maddy Masen (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 08:41 AM · On: First Kiss

Loved everything about this story.  Is it a mean thing that I hope you are plagued by plot bunnies and that you continue to treat us with more, more, more wonderful fics?!

Reviewer: so into it (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 07:22 AM · On: First Kiss

this was awesome!!! :) just what i was expecting... again i loved everyminute of this story thanks for writing it!

Reviewer: SammiCat15 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2012 03:31 AM · On: First Kiss

Thought I'd potter over here and leave you a second review lol

Again, another wonderful chapter, so delicately and sensitively written.

I've voted for you in that competition. Good luck, sweetie xx

Meanwhile, I hope you are keeping well,

hugs from Sammi xx

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 08:28 PM · On: First Kiss

Cute outtake. Great story! 

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 06:14 PM · On: First Kiss

Such a cute chapter!!! Felt the chill in the air as these two made their way to the beach! Seth's gift blew me away. So creative, so special. Their kiss....delicious. So great!! Perfect timing! Loved the end f the chapter when Seth says it was worth it, and to remember me fondly.....hahaha! Adored it!!! Xoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: metoo (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 03:38 PM · On: Unafraid

It was truly an honor to be allowed to share this journey with you.I have laughed, cried, gotten angry and enjoyed the hell out of this story.  Once you are complete, the fandm will miss you, but I hope you keep writing, for you have a gift.

Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 03:09 PM · On: First Kiss

This was adorable! How cute are those two?!?! Thank you for this little slice, it was a lovely treat!

Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2012 03:02 PM · On: First Kiss

Content1, thank you so MUCH... I got so excited when I say Sins at the top of my list indicating you'd updated something.  What a great surprise.  Perfect first kiss for our Carlie and Seth... best wishes to you as we head into this holiday season....Happiest of Thanksgivings to you and yours.   Would love to pop in on Bella and Edward and all the Cullens for Chirstmas and New Years, fingers crossed !

Reviewer: robsara (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2012 04:16 PM · On: Unafraid

What a wonderfully addictive story, I haven't been able to put it down. Thank you for sharing this with us, I loved how each emotion was so eloquently written, my absolute favourite was the proposal poem! How brilliant that was! I'm so glad to have read this, it will stay with me, Thank you again x

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2012 11:47 AM · On: Unafraid

Wonderful story! Well thought out and I appreciate the time and work you put into this well done story. Great character development and originality! Congrats on a job well done! 

Reviewer: britojhb (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 07:16 AM · On: Unafraid

I can honestly say, nothing should be changed EVER!!  I have never cried, laughed out loud, giggled or needed a cold shower with any other story!  Your writing is beautiful, thank you for this story!

Reviewer: lizkrohn (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 03:17 AM · On: Cohesion

Too busy reading the story to send messages. Cant put it down (even on my lap top).

Reviewer: MizFit0262011 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2012 12:31 AM · On: Unafraid

amazing!!!

Reviewer: evr4ah (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2012 12:10 PM · On: Unafraid

This is by far the most beautiful thing I have ever read. You created magic. In alll honesty, this has changed how I want to live my life and fix the mistakes I've made. Thank you

Reviewer: JStone78 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2012 10:19 PM · On: Unafraid

really a great story, thank you for the great read.

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 01:07 PM · On: Unafraid

hello content1 - thank you so much for sharing your amazing imagination with us!

Love - every word of it! *.*

Hate - that it is over

Favorite - the scenes where bella described what she should "see/feel" before she had her sight back

xoxo

Reviewer: Edwards_Meteor (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 04:06 PM · On: Unafraid

This story is amazing. I have loved waiting for the next chapter each week and seeing the development of the characters. I would not change a thing about this story and am very happy with how you have ended it. It will forever be one of my favourite fanfictions and you should be very proud of what you have written.

Reviewer: KTBit (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2012 08:44 AM · On: Unafraid

Wow.  What an amazing story!!  With few changes, this could almost be a stand alone book.  You truly have a gift.  

I loved the storyline you used, how it was believable.  Yes it was long, I was not a fan of all the outtakes, but I like that you thought about how each character would react for each situation.  Carly seemed a little old for her age, but having never been in a similar situation I don't know if I would be the same.  I really liked how you made the Cullen's work for Bella's forgiveness, that Jasper and Rosalie were the first to bridge the gap.  You made it real.  

Truly, this was a beautiful story.  You have a real gift with words.  Thank you. 

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