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Reviewer: Purple Passion (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 01:50 PM · On: Foundation
Loved it ;-)
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 12:41 PM · On: Extra
Talk about poetic justice coming to life…Alice Cullen, the woman…the child…Tanya had duped, had killed her brother.
You lost me here
Reviewer: cravingMORE (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 12:07 PM · On: Foundation
Wonderful update!!! Thank you for leaving me with a smile on my face and cravingMORE! ;)
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 11:37 AM · On: Foundation
Yes I get what Elizabeth said about him with holding sex. The thing is dance around all of this but intimacy will need to take a course they BOTH decide on.
Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 10:52 AM · On: Broken Doll
It seems Samantha may start opening up. My heart goes out to her.
Reviewer: Suzanne02 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 10:27 AM · On: SOMP outtake - Elizabeth and Demetri
Oh shit!!! Too funny!!! These two need to be thrown in a closet for a game of "7 minutes in Heaven" and see who comes out alive!!!!!!
Reviewer: fanficfanVic (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 08:08 AM · On: SOMP outtake - Elizabeth and Demetri
these two are going to be red hot
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 06:59 AM · On: SOMP outtake - Elizabeth and Demetri
Wow, OK, that was intense, and extremely HOOTT! These two are so completely goneover one another, it's crazy!!! Both denying it at the top of their lungs, but they really need to talk about this!! Demetri can't just kiss her without telling her something about how he feels about her! She's a psychiatrist. She deals in emotions. I think he scares her, because she feels so much for him!!!! Damn good couple. Love it! the intensity of their emotions really comes through in the chapter! Job well done!! Especially the arm lock, hahaha. Xoxo
Reviewer: ddroth (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 05:43 AM · On: SOMP outtake - Elizabeth and Demetri
Awesome, awesome!
Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2012 02:17 AM · On: Cohesion
Love the family gathering, i wish i had a big enough family near by to do these kings of things with. Don't worry the story its still
awesome.
Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2012 02:08 AM · On: Cohesion
Love the family gathering, i wish i had a big enough family near by to do these kings of things with. Don't worry the story its still
awesome.
Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 08:13 PM · On: Memories
Looks like things are going to get a little rouger for our couple as they work through things. I loved Bella's walk down memory lane. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 02:06 PM · On: Memories
My heart goes out to Sam2. To be so young and so fearful of everything. With the Cullens loudness is to be expected. Lots of energy, passion, excitement leads to loud and crazy in both fun, passion, sorrow, and joy. Something Sam2 will just need to get used to when living with them. Hopefully the referral from Elizabeth will be able to weed out all her fears and insecurities. In order to help her learn that a raised voice doesn't mean a beating, brushes are used to brush/comb hair on your head, blood sometimes happens without violence, etc... Her father needs to be hung out to dry for his treatment of one so young and defenseless. I really do hope charges will be filed and he will be locked away for the rest of his life.
Bella and Edward separation will be hard on both of them. Bella does need to go over her emotions/feelings after her abandonment from Edward. She knows Edward has suffered and is repentent. She knows his dream is to woo her back and win in back through all the darkness over the 15 year gap. Only time will tell, at least Bella was able to go through her memory box without falling apart into thousands of pieces. She was able to look upon the items with a new outlook and remember them lovingly and longingly. Looking forward to the next chapter. It'll still be hard for both of them to sleep without the other for awhile, but both have items to resemble the other. Bella has t-shirt and Edward has the pillow each with the others scent to help them.
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Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 04:05 AM · On: Memories
Your writing is always so very beautiful and soulful. It is like you really know the characters so well. I find that amazing and so very wonderful. I enjoyed the bantering between Demetri and Elizabeth and that should be a VERY interesting read, but the way you describe Bell and Edward does really remind me of Cinderalla and Prince Charming......just so very beautiful and loving between them. Oh and the reminissing about their prom was certainly a wonderful look into their youth and "first love". There is simply nothing like it ever as I have experienced it. The light switch going on and offf made me laugh. Again, your writing makes me want to cry sometimes....but I am a softy. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING and look forward to more. Sher
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 08:40 PM · On: Memories
So so so amazing! My heart was so overjoyed to see Edward and Bella and Calie all together. Such an amazing family. Elizabeth and Demetri had me rolling, especially. So funny! Bella is so sad to leave and even Leah can see it! Bella is dying and after going through the memory box, my heart is breaking too! Can't wait to see more!! Xoxo
Reviewer: joytome234 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 04:01 PM · On: Memories
I love this story. This storyline is very exciting and just keeps building. I am not very good at reviewing, but love good writing about interesting people, and your story is all that & more. Thank you. Pamela
Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 02:36 PM · On: Receiving
so good, I was waiting for the bracelet to show up---you're doing a great job of writing
Reviewer: cravingMORE (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 09:46 AM · On: Memories
The separation.... ((sigh)).... I guess it has to happen. Loved the trip down memory lane and glad to see B has kept some special momentos. Deme/El looks like will be steamy! Thx for the update!
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 08:48 AM · On: Memories
So a great chapter...worth the wait! Hope that things are going well for you now and I look forward to the next chapter as always.
Xanath
Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2012 07:06 AM · On: Memories
I loved the flashback to the prom. How cute were they! Charlie flashing the light had me laughing out loud. This separation of Bella and Edward is a good thing. I look toward to everyone having a chance to really get things out in the open and rebuild.
P.S. Could you explain the ff.net boycott? Didn't know there was one.
Reviewer: cnehren (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 10:41 PM · On: Memories
seeing this made my day! thank you! I love this story! You are able to write so that the reader can feel all the emotions of the characters. Please keep writing!
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 08:30 PM · On: Memories
Very nice backstory of Prom!
Reviewer: kahllan (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 07:48 PM · On: Memories
What a beautiful chapter! Bella remembering what made her fall in love with a lonely teenaged Edward brought tears to my eyes. I drop everything to read this story when the updates come. I'm glad they are not rushing their relationship, but taking the time to rebuild it so that their future will have a sturdy foundation. Thank you for such a great read!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 07:46 PM · On: Memories
I love Bella's walk down memory lane. I wish I had some momentos to do that.
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2012 07:34 PM · On: Memories
Beautiful. I think most of us hold the momory of our first kiss in a box somewhere that we rarely open to gaze at, but still it warms the heart each time we lift the lid.
Well done.
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