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Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 59
Awwww, so sweet, Carlie Swan taking her cue from grandpa Charlie Swan, light switching has a personal private meaning to me, so I love this part....thanks for the outtake... and wow way to get Edward out of the house fast... hahaha...
Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 59
I loved the conversation between Seth and Edward about calling Emmett, Mr. Cullen is was just perfect. Also Carlie watching her parents out the window and turning on the porch lights. Hysterical.
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 59
The simple moments that you capture, are perfect. When Carlie is giggling or teasing her parents. When Carlie is talking music with her dad. When Seth is sweating bullets, and wondering where moms learn to give "those" looks...hahaha. Love it! The stolen glances between Bella and Edward are seen by all. The gentle kisses to the forehead of Carlie, or tugging of her hair...so sweet. Little Carlie Swan (hopefully Cullen soon) is quite a little devil. Flicking the lights on her parents, hahaha. Seth seems more than eager to have some kissing time with Carlie, lol. Love the story!!! Xoxoxo
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 59
I love Seth
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2012 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 59
Charming. I love the playfulness.
Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2012 12:50 AM · On: Foundation
Great chapter, can't wait for more
Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 11:58 PM · On: SOMP outtake - Elizabeth and Demetri
Omg! Awesome outtake! Their attraction and UST is soo funny to read. I am so in love with this story.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 03:51 PM · On: SOMP outtake - Elizabeth and Demetri
Oh NO YOU DIDN'T! You can not leave it there!!!!!!!
How hot are those two! lol Dixie
Reviewer: kelymic (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 02:52 PM · On: Foundation
Finish!!! I'm horribly impatient, but loving it!!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 02:18 PM · On: Foundation
Loved the outtake - Demetri can't contain himself. Elizabeth thou protest too much.
Edward letting Bella run their physical relationship oh the fireworks they are a coming. Bella those know her man. He is an extreme sexual being. Their bantering back and forth. To end the afternoon with a battling of the minds with a chess match. Bella inviting Edward to have dinner with the family. Discussing the trip to LA for Carlie and Seth with Jake and Leah. Should be very interesting meal and discussion. Especially since the using of Aro's home for the children to be staying.
Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 12:22 PM · On: Foundation
more please
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 11:22 AM · On: Foundation
I'd love to hear Carlie's reaction to the Chess game
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 11:06 AM · On: SOMP outtake - Elizabeth and Demetri
Off to hot start
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 07:06 AM · On: SOMP outtake - Elizabeth and Demetri
Wow, OK, that was intense, and extremely HOOTT! These two are so completely goneover one another, it's crazy!!! Both denying it at the top of their lungs, but they really need to talk about this!! Demetri can't just kiss her without telling her something about how he feels about her! She's a psychiatrist. She deals in emotions. I think he scares her, because she feels so much for him!!!! Damn good couple. Love it! the intensity of their emotions really comes through in the chapter! Job well done!! Especially the arm lock, hahaha. Xoxo
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 06:43 AM · On: Foundation
They did not talk about Carlie going to LA with the school group. Is that next? I hope that Edward takes to fatheringt as well as he should and goes to Jake foe assistance when he is confused. I hope that he does not just go along with things to keep on Carlie's good side and trys to do what he thinks is right. I am sure that he can give a different pointy of view to Bell's consideration on things Carlie wants to do. I do like that you have made Carlie a strong and smart girl though, and hope that Edward gets a chance to really see that for himself. We have not seen much interaction between Carlie and Edward of late and I am sure that they still have some things to work out.
Thanks for this story - Xanath
Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 01:41 AM · On: SOMP outtake - Elizabeth and Demetri
Omg! Awesome outtake! Their attraction and UST is soo funny to read. I am so in love with this story.
Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2012 01:32 AM · On: Memories
Another great chapter. I love that Bella kept all the keepsakes and your description of their first kiss was , right down to Charlie flicking the lights, lol.
Reviewer: Elizabethany (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 09:12 PM · On: Foundation
I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great writing!
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 06:50 PM · On: Foundation
This was perfect. They're taking steps for success and honesty. Awesome!
Reviewer: vampiregirl1001 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 06:13 PM · On: Foundation
I love the sexual power they have over each other. Lol! Great chapter.
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 06:08 PM · On: Foundation
Since we know I’m clueless as to how to navigate the landmines I laid down in the last fifteen years, I’m coming to you as my other half to help me. I promise not to go puritanical on you when you decide what you want. But I also need you to understand why I’m letting you…or at least asking you…to make the calls on that. I guess what I’m really saying is that I trust you and your decisions.” <--- awwww. I want one just like him !!!! , Great update, and I prefer to think you gave it to us "one day early".... keep them coming, and stay cool !
Reviewer: LaBellamora (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 05:56 PM · On: Foundation
Hi,
This is still an awesome story. I love the multi story lines; the emotions depth and variety of types. I also Love the build up of tension on relationship (Sam2 and the Cullens, Bella and SexEd, Carlie and her new family, Carlie & Seth ... jeez i could go on for a paragraph). You still have me hooked.
:) Thanks!
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 05:12 PM · On: SOMP outtake - Elizabeth and Demetri
Awesome
more... more...more...please
Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 05:11 PM · On: Foundation
Things are progressing along nicely. And all that sexual tension between Edward and Bella is fun to watch. I wonder how long until they finally snap.
Reviewer: wsharp30 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 02:03 PM · On: Foundation
Definitely still love SoMP. I get so happy when I'm notified there's a new chapter! Love how E and B are taking it slow, but still so crazy for each other.
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