Yeah !! I want more now from our Edward !!

loving it so far.

Holy Hell........well worth the wait!

Dixie :)

I just had to read it again.... and my guess is I'll read it several more times before your next update,.... I just had to comment, I loved what he did with her stretch marks....being a small person by nature, when I personally became pregnant, I learned quickly I was having twins.... I know I'm well blessed but Oh my goodness what they did to my body.... I ended up needing a section because the one that was first was actually positioned feet first and the other laying across me horizontally.... needless to say between the c=section scar and the stretchies.... it's nice that a man would worship "what he caused" !!!  Nice touch !

Y U MMMMMMM Y...... I love the line from one of your reviewers below...."where's the line to get an Edward".... <--  I want one too!  Seriously, so worth the wait, and the title , "Souls", so perfect.  I too, can't wait to hear this from his point of view....but I want to "hear" him when he finally comes... ha, ha, ha.  bless you bless you.... great chapter.  Have a great week

Finally! It was great to see them reconnect and slowly crest that hill they have been climbing. I'll be excited to read Edward's thoughts. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Where's the line to get an Edward?  Amazing.  When Edward finally decided to get physical in expressing his love, he doesn't mess around. He takes Bella to the highest points of heaven.  Not once, but he's planning on doing it over and over again.  Being tender, loving, and passionate.  Lucky lady.  Having a work of art make love to her.  Spanning the space of time to reunite them together at last.  Awesome chapter.  Bella is beyond words.  Looking forward to hearing Edward's thoughts and emotions.

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I know Edward need to face them at Forks, to have Bella beside him is to right a little of the wrong he did to her. The issuse about his old room Bella was right, they need to make it into something speical but they both can not be in that room again.

I love it all!  Don't rush this story to make others happy.  I think it's wonderful that you are sharing this with others, period.  It is your creation and should unfold as you feel it needs to.  I have the utmost respect for your gift and hope you don't compromise your need to tell this story in it's own time.

Thank you again!

It was beautiful. Great job!

OK....you can honestly make me cry girl! First of all, the little trip to Forks to let the town know that they are together, and have a daughter...damn impressed with our Edward. He is so nervous, and it's so damn cute!!! So cute! He's in love!!!! When they go to the grocery store, and Edward shows the picture of Carlie and Bella, awwwww! Meeting with Mrs. Cope, hahahaha, so priceless! Loved it. Now Edward buying his old house, made me squeeee! That he couldn't touch his old room....made me honestly cry!!! How he broke down like that...damn girl! Massive kudos on bringing the emotions!!! They needed to talk. he needed to explain how broken he felt, without her! Gah.....love this damn story!!!! love the love! True soul mates!!!! Can't wait for more! Eh, 10,000 +.....I would take it unedited, hehehe. Xoxoxoxoxo

This story is so beautiful!  Their emotions are so real....I just love it when I get an update!!!  More!  More!! More!!!