Awesome!

What an awesome chapter!  I loved a look into Bella and Carlie's life through the rez celebration.  I love Billie looking out for Charilies little girl.  Charlie would have done the same for Jake.   Seth and Carlie are so lucky to have the life they have.  I get a kick out of how everyone just acceptes these two being together forever!  I'm enjoying watching Bella and Edward reconnect.  It's a rare gift they have been given!

Update soon, Take care, Dixie

Love how Edward faced Billy, and let Billy know he is in it for the long haul! That he wouldn't hurt Bella or Carlie for anything, but he might mess up from time to time...like his Dad, but his parents are still together. Love it!!! How Bella told him she loves him at the end...so perfect! Can't wait for more!!! Xoxoxo

 I am so gald I found this story, its captivatng.

Awe...dr edward was so cute
Wall sex...so hot

Stupid Edward...

p.s. I'm hoping for a rebuilding relationship story with each of the cullens, all the while interspersed with Edward and Carlie building theirs as well as Edward building with Jake and Leah, all leading up to the biggest brightest Wedding our site here Twilighted has ever seen !!!! Now that'd make me happy over the next couple of months....lol....I know I'm very selfish of your time, but I love your writing and am addicted <--- and you did that all by yourself, you only have yourself to blame hahaha.... xoxo, again have a great week !

It's amazing how many people interfered with the couple. If Charlie has approached the Cullens all those years ago how different their lives would be now. Bella might not have written her books and become a successful author. So many what ifs scenarios of half steps had been completed to a new outcome. But again the saying "All things happen as they should." Edward did a little brown nosing with bar-b-queuing (manning the grill), at least he was able to have Seth stash enough of the ribs for them to eat while standing in line for the rest of the food.  Smart move - Jake taught him right.  Get it whIle it's there. Edward helped the tribe/elderst with Sarah. Putting her shoulder back in place and getting primarily exam before paramedics.  I wouldn't want to be Sarah's husband right now, I have a feeling the tribal men will be teaching him a sever lesson. If not they should be. I think Edward's answers to Billy's Q/A's was very satisfactory. A new level of respect or reserve to observe Edward in regards to his relationship towards both Bella and  Carlie. Hot loving against the wall, couldn't wait another second. Gotta love that hot, sexy, and gorgeous doctor Edward.

Really good, intense.

Love this chapter and love your story. So real and very moving. I usually prefer more waffy stories, but this one has captured my attention. I am glad that you have continued it and did not scrap this chapter in light of recent events. Thanks!

You know what....I am so tired of people reading other people's work and trashing it.  I am a reader, not a writer and I love this fan fiction so much.  I cannot for the life of me can believe that people get to read this wonderful work and "pardon my french" fuck with it.  It is your story to do with what you want not anyone elses.  I choose what I read...I am a HEA person and that is what I chose to read.  I know this is hard, but you must turn a deaf ear to those people who upset you because I am sure that the good reviews always out number the bad ones.  THANKS FOR ALL THE AWESOME READING.  sHER

In spite of the news of the actors of these wonderful characters' real life drama, doesn't reflect on your story. The journey between Bella and Edward is very different as Bella discovered today. Mistakes were made on both sides by them. Bella could have let them be aware of Carlie a lot earlier. Contacts could have or should have been made a long time ao, stopped by fears, anger, guilt, selfishness, etc. Since Edward almost died al those things are secondary to the truth, they both still love each other and want to be together. In regards to Edward feeling each woman he slept with was a betrayal to Bella and his love for her, then shouldn't it follow that Bella's physical relationships be the same betrayal since she has the same devotion deep within herself. Both would need to forgive the other for their betrayal of love on the other. Bella denying Edward the years  with his daughter.    That would have stopped many of those playboy years of Edward. Things would have changed a lot earlier and maybe a lot less pain, anger, eTc.... Bella is seeing all the things Edward has done within himself to attempt to right the wrongs he could within his world without Bella. Taking all the memories of her and doing them he utmost of honor and respect. Pleasure too with gazebo for long reading time, buying the house where they first made love, etc... All things within his control, Bella until recently wasn't something he knew where or how to resolve. Now she's his first an foremost goal to happiness along with his daughter, Carlie.                          

I feel so for you knowing this was here and then the events in the news must have felt almost providencial.

 

Still, it is realistic and genuine. I was contacted 23 yrs post divorce by my ex recently. He had been abusive, and later had come out as gay.

 

Everyone who loves me wantedd me to tell him to go to hell, but I wanted a chance to have some closure, to say somethings I had never spoken aloud.

 

We talked for 7 hours and for the first time he innumerrated exactly what he was sorry for. It made a difference to me. I felt better than I had in all the time we had not talked.

 

You are getting it right. Do not listen to anyone who says different.