So...I don't usually leave big comments, but after that authors note I felt I should say that it's appauling to me that someone woud attack an author regardless of their opinion about a story. I don't write, would love to but just don't have time. I relax after a stressful day reading. At times I dont get too far into the story because it just doesn't grab me or I don't care for the style. When that happens you just move on to another. If you can't be constructive and do it with kindness then just shut up and write your own story. It's very easy to sit back and criticize someone elses hard work, but as readers we benefit from the hours these authors put in, so perhaps a little appreciation is in order. So....Thanks! I for one really appreciate the story, and I think the message is valid and entertaining.

I figured she still had that necklace....now time to ask Edward to put it back on her.....

THANK YOU SOOooo much for your efforts!  I love this sweet story--even MORE now that they are officially together :)  Can't wait to see what happens next!  Thanks for sharing!  Karin :}

I love these two kids!  I have to ask, I know you can see it coming.....When this story is over can you write a spin off of Seth and Carlie?  I would be so much fun to watch these two grow in their love and drive their fathers crasy when it started to get physical!  lol  Can you imagine Jake and Edward plotting together to keep the kids inocent as long as possible and Leah and Bella having to reighn the guys in!  It would be a hoot! lol

Take care, Dixie

Beautiful!!!

Absolutely beautiful.....  and OMG, all my favorite stories are coming to an end....but I'm so thankful I found this one and have enjoyed every moment with you.  I know I've said it before, but let me say it again, you are a very talented writer and I'm so grateful that you share your work with all of us.  Have a wonderful week. 

And your efforts have been worth it!  I loved the Seth Carlie chapter and this one os just soooo good.  I don't know how you do this as I wish that I could.  It is so detailed like you ar just reporting what you see them do, and how they feel.

Thank You for this story - Xanath

You go girl !

Awww....just made me smile. Your Carlie and Seth rock! She is so damn cute. So much like both of her parents. So sweet and so wise. She can see that Edward deserves another chance. The way she is dancing around when she saw them kissing, had me grinning from ear to ear. Seth and Carlie are both excited and she seems quite comfortable that her parents were alone...and she knows what was happening and wants a sibling. She wants her dad and mom to get busy....lol...get it....get busy...making her a sibling. Seeing that mistakes can be fixed in the world, especially such a stupid mistake as their breakup....wow.....makes me think that maybe Robsten can be fixed too! Stupid young kids, can make stupid mistakes, lol. Loved it!!! xoxoxo

That's the worst...a nightmare within a nightmare. You think you have woken up and then what transpires next seems all the more terrifyng. I hope Alice is in therapy......

Favorite chapter so far

Enjoyment of that chapter was high. However....he needed...??? Was he missing a key piece of protection?