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Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 10:39 AM · On: Five Reasons
OMG, you could not write Carlie anymore charming than see is.... I just love that girl....."tick toc", she doesn't mince words now does she, cuts right to the chase that one...hahaha love it. I'm so sad that this is ending, I cannot tell you enough how I look forward to Sundays simply because I know that when I log into Twilighted that your update will be here. I love that they are planning to be with Alice, and I love the seed that has been planted with Bella's dream, doing the happy dance here....being the real life mom of twins, I can certainly see these two as being the parents of many sets of multiples... yep you best get writing :-) What a beautiful dream, and what blessings they will be, even if you pull a twist on us and her dream turns out to be that they are Carlie's twins, the bottom line is that they will have their happily ever after surrounded by their new found memories and their blessed family. I have loved this story ever since I have found it, whatever you decide, however you continue to write it I am confident you will deliver because you always do... as I always say, thanks for sharing your talent with us each week, have a wonderful week, and we'll see ya on Sunday ! xoxo Ang !
Reviewer: ferret (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 10:11 AM · On: Five Reasons
Please keep going with this story. I don't give feedback often but I do read every chapter written.
I love this one simply because Bella hasn't forgiven Edward immediately - he's had to work for it!
Looking forward to the remainder of this tale.
Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 10:11 AM · On: Five Reasons
I'm sad to see that you are being pushed to finish this story, but as long as you are happy with how it is going to end then that is all that matters. I'll be sad to see this story finished but it is exciting that you are going to be starting an original fic. Can't wait to see where you take this next! :)
Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 10:08 AM · On: Five Reasons
Another great chapter. Loved Carlie's talk with the parents, priceless :) Looking forward to everything you've put in your outline, I've enjoyed the slow burn.
Reviewer: gadberry1 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 09:27 AM · On: Five Reasons
it's been a lovely ride. thank you. I look forward to the last few chapters.
Reviewer: Baandfam69 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2012 09:13 AM · On: Five Reasons
i am definitely not one of those people whose interest has waned. your updates are one of the highlights of my weekend and never ever disappoint. there is so much i would love to see and read. please do not feel rushed or pressured to finish. your story is worth the wait. if i can help in any way please let me know.
Reviewer: MomLovesEdward (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2012 05:23 PM · On: Everything
Yeah I am happy to have caught up I was so busy the last few weeks ! I love that they are finally together and would love to see them end in a huge white wedding !
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2012 02:52 PM · On: Everything
There at last...thought they would never make it, love the story.
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2012 03:54 PM · On: Seth and Carlie
May I echo Seths thoughts....some of the loveliest and wonderful children I know were "mistakes" so called but mother earth wanted them here so here they are and they bring such joy to their parents and all those around them. Really enjoyed this chapter.
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2012 07:18 AM · On: Everything
awesome chap! Yhea they are gonna be one happy family! And lots of lemonaide to be made hehehe! xo
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2012 01:17 PM · On: Everything
What a great chapter. Carlie is a pistol! I love how she gives her parents such a hard time teasing them. I'm so glad she was able to get her feelings off her chest, even if she didn't know she had them. Now they can truly move forward toward forever.
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2012 01:17 PM · On: Everything
What a great chapter. Carlie is a pistol! I love how she gives her parents such a hard time teasing them. I'm so glad she was able to get her feelings off her chest, even if she didn't know she had them. Now they can truly move forward toward forever.
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2012 12:24 PM · On: Everything
Still loving it! I know how RL gets in the way sometimes...thanks for sharing your talent!
Reviewer: vampiregirl1001 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 01:03 PM · On: Everything
Aww, Edward finally gets his Second chance w/ Bella & Carlie, I am so happy 4 them all.
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 12:20 PM · On: Everything
ok so I know I already reviewed and told you how much I LOVED IT.... but I forgot one thing... I absolutely love your attention to the little details... Leah casually "toeing the bit of ripped lace" under the bed so no one saw it... priceless !!! YOU ROCK THE DETAILS !!!!... loved that little tidbit ! xoxo Ang
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 11:10 AM · On: Everything
Yippee!!!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 10:45 AM · On: Everything
Carlie's initial reaction was pretty heartbreaking imagining her mother and herself pounding on the glass watching the family inside without them. Life passing them by alone. Edward's soft spoken words of telling her he regrets the missed time with her as well comforted her and told her the house was hers too and the new memories to make in the house. Great words. Bellal's reaction from inside as well. With the tour of the house very snarky comments from Carlie to her parents. Embarrassing in fact to them and then to equate the playing field she embarrassed Jacob with mention of the Rabbit. Big surprise when they arrived at the Cullen Compound and Carlie requested how long it would take for additional new clothing to come home with them. Flabbergasted Edward. Overjoyed inside as well as confused, unsure of what Bella was thinking. Totally out of left field for him, but after talking to Bella it's a dream come true. So glad since it is really what Carlie has wanted all along since walking into that family meeting in the first chapter. To meet her dad and his family and to bring the family together. Make her mother completely happy again and to be a family with her dad. I sure do love a happy ending. Wonder how she'll want the third floor revamped and decorated for her at the house in Forks.
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 10:06 AM · On: Everything
I hove thouroughly enjoyed this story, one of my fav's and I don't generally care for the AH types. Loved this, can't wait for the next update...but we all know you have a life outside our little worlds, enjoy it! Thanks for all the work you have put into this, I wish I had time to create....but for now I will just get my fix off the hard work of others. Again, thanks.
Reviewer: cmg1218 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 09:31 AM · On: Everything
Yes they r going home as a family....yippie!
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 09:26 AM · On: Everything
and I'm hoping everything means "multiple siblings for carlie and we get to read about them".... hahaha. First BLESS YOU for doing this for us... I can't imagine how you squeak in the time, but I'm thankful every Sunday. I love this story and have been with you from the beginning. I'm so glad Edward and Carlie had the talk on the porch and she got to tell him of her hurt that he missed out on her childhood...but he's got the right idea, it's never too late to start to day to make life long memories. Re Jake... I love that he is being true to his words to Bella from so many chapters ago, and giving the "red head" a fair shake. I think it was huge for Jake to chime in and say you coming red head or not... lol, so cool. I love your Edward, never assumes, seems humble wants so not to screw this up. Will Samantha move in with them too or is that yet to come and I should just shut up about it. Have a wonderful week, and thank you as always for the bright spot in Sunday that is SOMP, muah xoxo !! Ang
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 08:30 AM · On: Everything
I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS CHAPTER FOREVER ...THE REGRET DRIPPING FROM THIS GIRLS HEART ..SHE NEEDED TO GET IT OUT ...TO LET HIM KNOW HOW ANGRY SHE WAS THAT HE SHOVED HER MOTHER OUT OF HIS LIFE ...AND NOW THEY ARE REALLY READY TO BE A FAMILY ...THIS WAS WONDERFUL
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 07:07 AM · On: Everything
I think I would pass clean out if one of my kids asked where they were conceived!Thankfully my oldest is too busy worrying about her own love life to ask about mine
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 06:48 AM · On: Everything
Thank You for not letting us hang waiting for a chapter!!! I know that real life can get in the way and I appriciate you commitment to us also.
Hugs - Xanath
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 06:42 AM · On: Everything
so glad for the journey. I am amaized we all made it.
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2012 05:41 AM · On: Refuge
Okay, I am spoiled. I found this story when you about 60+ chapters in so I have been able to read right through it...until now. Well, I can be patient....I guess tomorrow I will actually need to do something constructive with my day off.....unless of course you update. Maybe in the next chapter you can give us some recs to tide us over while we wait....patiently. Loving it by the way.
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