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Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 12:05 PM · On: Chase
Intense chapter. I don't know if I could have gone through what Seth had to go through. He is definitely very brave. Plus I love a little Demetri, so anytime he sneaks into a chapter I'm happy. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 10:42 AM · On: Chase
Wow excellent chapter, Seth is something else, quite the outstanding young man...., I hope Child welfare doesn't take Sam away.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 07:17 AM · On: Chase
Glad Sam Seth are ok. You made the right decision in not dragging this out
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 06:32 AM · On: Chase
TTHAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST CHASE AND RESCUE SCENES I HAi STILL WANT VE EVER READ ....I KNOW ITS TO SOON BUT I HOPE THERE IS A BABY BROTHER OR SISTER FOR CARLIE.....SO CHILDBIRTH WILL BE A JOY FOR THEM BOTH THIS TIME ......
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2012 01:08 PM · On: Nirvana
Sigh! I love me some Esme!
Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2012 12:45 PM · On: Bringing down the lights
Awesome! the blind meal experience is actually a lot of fun. It was a charming chapter.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2012 06:52 PM · On: Nirvana
It was great to get an Esme POV. As she was watching her children, their spouse/significant others, grandchildren, etc interact over the masked dinner. Just watching the faces of her own children and seeing their inner glow coming through finally after all those years of being missing. Seeing them truly happy and peaceful. It was beautiful from her eyes. She was probably the only one besides Bella who didn't have food all over her front and over the napkin bib draped there.
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 11:14 PM · On: Nirvana
Loved it !!! Always have loved Esme !!
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 09:22 PM · On: Nirvana
That was sweet.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 07:49 PM · On: Nirvana
Oh my goodness! You get into the heads of your characters so well! As Esme's eyes traveled to each of her family I could picture each and everyone and what they where doing as Esme had her internal dialogue.....that is just really impressive writing missy and thank you for letting us come along for the ride!
I loved her description of Jacob, pretty high praise concidering she's married to Carlisle!
Dixie :)
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 07:11 PM · On: Nirvana
but where is sam ...who took her ...when are you gonna let us in on what happened
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 07:09 PM · On: Nirvana
This is one of by favorite fis ever !
Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 06:43 PM · On: Nirvana
So sweet!
Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 06:34 PM · On: Nirvana
This was a rich, warm, deep cup of hot cocoa on a cold, bitter day. Your story has been a balm to a wickedly terrible week. Thank you for sharing your talents...and Esmes perspective
Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2012 06:11 PM · On: Nirvana
I JUST LOVE ESME!!!!!! She is always just so cool. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING and your story ROCKS!!!!!! sHER
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2012 04:19 PM · On: Bringing down the lights
Wow!!! God help Sam's father they will take him apart, would you balme them.
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2012 09:46 PM · On: Forgiveness
Very poignant and well done.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2012 07:51 PM · On: Bringing down the lights
Noooooo! I kind of feel sorry for who ever took her when the men catch him! Was it Sam 2's dad? But isn't he in prison? OMG I hope she's ok as well as Seth I hope he doesn't get hurt!
Please update soon! I need to know everyone is ok!
Dixie
Reviewer: stressmaster (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 08:10 PM · On: Bringing down the lights
really good cant wait for more. on the edge of my seat.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 06:38 PM · On: Bringing down the lights
Interesting dining experience. Did Sam2's "father" get her?
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 01:46 PM · On: Bringing down the lights
Edward taking them all out to dinner and having them all experience it with blindfolds. Just the idea of it to honor his Bella and her time of being blind was just the sweetest thing. I can't blame her for wanting to repay him by having him blindfolded while she pays homage to his body. It was such a gracious thing to do I want to do it too. Great chapter.
Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2012 10:51 AM · On: Bringing down the lights
OMG! Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 09:59 PM · On: Bringing down the lights
Wow, why to nail us with the cliffie......I'm guessing this was her douchbag father/or mammas boyfriend?
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 08:40 PM · On: Bringing down the lights
As much as I love music or the sound of my children's voices, I'd rather be deaf or lose a limb than be blind. I don't think I'd have the will to carry on if I couldn't look into the faces of those I love.
Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2012 07:18 PM · On: Bringing down the lights
OMG!!! Please don't keep us waiting long! We've got to get Sam2 back!! Thanks for sharing;);)
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