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Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 09:40 PM · On: SOMP Outtakes Chapters 9-13
I like hearing from Rose and Jasper because of their guilt-free position as outsiders...but I'm still not feeling sympathy for Edward. You did too good a job of making him a heartless bastard at the beginning. :p
Team Demeteri for the win!!!!!
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 09:28 PM · On: Green Eyed Monster
Ah, Demetri, I am rooting for you, though I fear it is hopeless. Doucheward seems destined to get your girl.
Author's Response: Doucheward! HA! Love it.
Rose sent to you!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 09:20 PM · On: SOMP Outtakes Chapters 9-13
Jaspers thoughts were very insightful, I really enjoyed getting in his head! Thank you!
Dixie
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 08:48 PM · On: Green Eyed Monster
Very interesting...Bella must have taken Demetri up on his offer...I hope she takes him up on all of it! lol
I loved Seth protecting Bella and giving Edward the stink eye! Like father, like son! lol
I want to hear more about Bella and Demetri and what they were up to all day! (I'm waggling my eyebrows)
I like your Rose, she doesn't hold back and tells it like it is. She talks to Carlie like an adult.
Update, Soon, send my Rose's thoughts and take care, Dixie
Author's Response: Dixie,
Hope you'll like the outtake! Next is Bella's POV. I'm just waiting on the beta to send it away!
Rose sent to you directly.
Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 08:46 PM · On: Green Eyed Monster
Well I can't wait to see what happens with Demetri. I'm thinking I'm going to like him a lot. Poor Carlie, I can't even imagine the tension that is surrounding her family and the news article that will probably be coming out now that she has been tied to the Cullen's. This will probably cause problems for Bella. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: HA - just wait to that newspaper scene...
Hope to have the next chapter up soon. For now, I'm sending Rose to you directly.
Reviewer: robsrub (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 08:09 PM · On: SOMP Outtakes Chapters 9-13
I love this story, unreal, such a good read. Strong characters, and I just love the Carlie charactor. CAN NOT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
Author's Response: SOOO glad you like it! ;) I hope the POVs continue to entertain you. They are my chance to give you a little insight! ;)
Rose outtake sent to you directly!
Reviewer: jab0063 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 07:20 PM · On: Green Eyed Monster
Nice chapter, but I was hoping for the Edward beatdown! He has absolutely not suffered enough.
Author's Response: Its coming! Its coming!
For now, I'm sending you Rose!
Reviewer: Morrisburger (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 06:12 PM · On: Green Eyed Monster
Beautifully written and very engaging
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I hope you continue to enjoy the story. We just have a few more chapters and things will begin to go quickly from there.
For now, I'm sending Rose to you.
Reviewer: deb33 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 06:07 PM · On: Green Eyed Monster
Move it along, lol! Great story, can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: I hope to have the next chapter up tonight or tomorrow! Just waiting on the beta. ;)
For now, I'm sending you Rose.
Reviewer: susolgi2004 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2011 01:05 PM · On: Welcome
I really love this story. Great idea!
Reviewer: hockeywife87 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 09:07 PM · On: Worth
There is so much I'm looking forward to reading! I can't wait to see if Bella's surgery works. I'm actually conflicted on whether or not I want her to 'end up' with Edward..
Reviewer: robsrub (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2011 06:47 PM · On: Worth
love this story, can't wait for the update
Reviewer: beffy1512 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2011 09:58 AM · On: Worth
i absolutely love this story, its the first fan-fic ive ever read and you have really drawn me in to the story, im almost disappointed i have to wait for updates of new chapters :(
Reviewer: bacall83 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2011 09:33 AM · On: Worth
Absolutely love the story.
Reviewer: mugglesmith (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2011 04:59 PM · On: Worth
Another good chapter. Appreciated Carlie's point of view. Edward was a little scattered, but I guess it's a lot for him to process. Almost thought he was having a sex dream about Bella while he was sleeping with his daughter by the pool. Relieved it was the next morning. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2011 12:35 PM · On: Carlie
Woah. Didn't expect that
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2011 08:32 PM · On: Worth
This chapter was awsome! I loved it. Carlie is so smart. It's a great idea to get to know Rose, Jasper and Emmett first while watching the others. I loved the proverb it's perfect for the situation she finds her self in.
I'm anxious to see what's going on with Bella, Jake, Seth, Leah and Demetry!
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: Piper2010 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2011 07:43 PM · On: Worth
great chapter...I can't wait for more. I hope u post sooon....;)
Reviewer: saneheart3 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 10:38 PM · On: Monster
he forgot to mention the fact that alice almost killed bella and carlie by pushing bella down a flight of stairs.
Reviewer: Monik_79 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 09:20 PM · On: Worth
You know that I love your history and also understand that every chapter is important to understand what the characters are felling. That been said, I must confess that I cant wait to see some action, I want to see Bella kicking ass and above all I just have to see Edward´s reaction when he finds out about B and Demetri. Please, don´t make me suffer too much. (sorry for the awful english)
Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 06:20 PM · On: Worth
I'm impressed with Carlie's maturity. Feeling bad for Edward even though this is all his doing. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 10:33 AM · On: Worth
I'm trying to feel bad for these assholes and I just don't have it in me. You are so good at writing villians that you should write comic books!
Reviewer: mara2345 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2011 08:58 AM · On: Worth
Great story!!! :)
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Worth
Good Chapter.....
Reviewer: momof2monkeys (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 07:54 PM · On: Worth
I honestly can't wait to see the reactions of everyone with Bella's "relationship" after the weekend. I also believe Carlie's thoughts of bonding with Jasper and Rosalie first since they weren't around when everything happened seems logical. The flashback/explanations of discussions between Edward and his parents are great. But I really would like a little more info on how Emmett tried to take care of Bella but didn't know she was pregnant.
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