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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Deceit
Jake was spot on with his assumption of Carlie. I think she wants to see if her dad can make it up to Bella for all the things he did. Jake is so funny, he's such a good friend to Bella. I would love to hear Leah's thoughts on Jake and Bella's relationship...
Send me Jakes thoughts, I can't wait! Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: mugglesmith (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 05:23 PM · On: Wrong
Too good! What will come of this? Can't wait to see where you take it. I lvoe every chapter. Keep them coming...
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 05:16 PM · On: Wrong
Carlisle has some serious balls. I have a feeling Bella is about to remove them.
Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 05:09 PM · On: Wrong
the story just gets better and better - alittle surprised that Bella looks ready to forgive Emmett so easily but can't wait for that can of "whoop ass" to be opened on Carlisle! thanks for the quick update!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2011 05:47 AM · On: Deceit
I know Bella deserves to be angry and believe me she does! But her and Edward were young when this all happened and now she is acting like a spoiled brat and instead of trying to make this easier on Carlie she is going after Demetri who you know damn well she is only doing this to keep Edward away or better yet kind of like a "screw you"! The fact that she won't even listen to the Cullens side of the story right now about what happened 15 years ago is making her even worse than them because she know exactly how it feels.
Reviewer: robsrub (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 07:53 PM · On: Deceit
Wow again! Love this story. I truly like this Bella.
Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 06:17 PM · On: Deceit
I love your story; BUT, I REALLY want Edward and Bella TOGETHER!! Please put me out of my misery....SOON! :):)
Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 01:28 PM · On: Green Eyes
Can't wait for the teaser! Happy weekend!
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 12:12 PM · On: Deceit
Still reading. Still enjoying this rollercoaster ride.
To be honest I am still on the fence about the whole E/B HEA. To me there's just so much hurt, rejection, dishonesty, miscommunication and misunderstand that it's going to take a miracle to get everyone on the same page.
I suppose for my wish is that the whole bunch of them from Cullen's, The Black's to Bella and Carlie and hell even Tanya for that matter be put in a room with some sort of metiator so this whole mess from the past can get put on the table. Perhaps if they went from A to B to C and ended up with Z but unfortunately everyone is still hurting from the past. I guess they need to have an intervention because 15 years of pain and anger isn't being dealt with. I guess I see the truth will set you free to a degree but there is still of ground to cover.
Sometimes it feels like they take two steps forward then get pushed back 3 steps.
Oh well I am here for the duration to see how Content brings all of this mess together. Even if it isn't tied up in a pretty bow.i look forward to reading how it all plays out.
One more thing I have seen a few make comments about Bella having the eye surgury. I for one do not blame her for not having it yet regardless of her money situation. I'm not blind but I do wear glasses. I would love to be able to not wear them. I have have looked into getting the laser eye surgury but I know of a few who have had it done and some are happy but a few others are not. So I guess I can see Bella holding off till the technollogy is better because yes she's blind but if it doesn't work?? Then what? I look at it as only having 2 eyes if the surgury screws up I do not believe they make new balls to replace the old ones. For me sure I could have to surgury and maybe it will work and will have no need for glasses..yea for me but what if it doesn't and well I am back to square one. I think I will pick the lesser or two evils. My 2 cents sorry.
Anyways can't wait to see what happens next.
= )
Reviewer: ecandme (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 10:56 AM · On: Deceit
I'm hanging with it... interested to see where it goes... but I gotta say, I don't really buy the 'blind but won't fix it' issue, Especially when she has the resources to get it fixed. I don't know anyone who would want to waste their life away walking around blind, if they had the resources and the money to get it corrected.
Love the story, but I just don't get her mindset in not doing something about getting her eye surgery. It's almost like you can't feel sorry for someone who won't help theirself.
Can't wait for more :)
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2011 08:55 AM · On: Deceit
Sounds like everyone is against the Demetri boyfriend plan. They all know it's a ploy since "Edward" Cullen and the Cullens have returned into her life now. It's to avoid direct contact with Edward. Even Leah who hates him can tell he's a changed man. Even with his playboying/man-whoring ways he hasn't done a real relationship since Bella. He has never stopped loving Bella. Now she has heard this from both her daughter and her best friend. Bella doesn't want to believe that everything Edward told Carlie was the truth. In her mind Edward was lying to Carlie. Why would Edward paint himself in such a negative light if he was going to lie to Carlie about himself? Doesn't make sense, if you want to be in a better light you cut out all the bad behavior/treatment/implications of things said and done towards Bella. Edward didn't do any fluff when he told Carlie he was straight forward and to the point. Only Bella's heart, pride, self esteem, etc... can't believe or conceive that Edward could still have feelings for her after all these years. She is still under the assumption that the Cullens were aware of her pregnacy with Carlie and just ignored her. Of course, they were not ever made aware due to Tanya taking the letter and removing the evidence provided at the time. this is all new to all of them. Edward would encourage her to go through with the surgery in order to restore herself as much back to the norm as possible. Regain as much of her sight as possible prior to the birth. Bella needs to rethink her heart and feelings and if Edward is making an effort to be nice then Bella needs to attempt the same thing with Jasper. Waiting next chapter to see how Jake approved of Demetri.
Reviewer: bacall83 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 05:35 PM · On: Deceit
Good as always. :)
Reviewer: Monik_79 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 04:51 PM · On: Deceit
Great chapter! can´t wait to the next one
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 02:04 PM · On: Deceit
Go get some, Bella! Edward can go **** himself! Team Demetri!
Reviewer: madiloca (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 01:59 PM · On: Deceit
Poor Carlie.
Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 11:32 AM · On: Cold Hard Facts
Well holy shit, what a story! I like it...nice original concept. I like Carlie already!
Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 07:19 AM · On: Deceit
Did she not even hear Carlie tell her Edward said what he did to her was the biggest mistake of his life. Come on Bella be an adult and talk to him or at least listen to what Carlie tells you. Update soon please!
Reviewer: MelPuc (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 06:52 AM · On: Deceit
Love it!!!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 08:09 PM · On: Deceit
I think Bella is right to worry that this whole situation is gonna come back & bite her in the ass.
I WAS surprised that Leah stuck up for Edward despite her hatred of him.
I'm anxious for Bella to forgive Edward & give him a chance.I'm a very forgiving person & don't hold grudges. I forgave an old bf for standing me up for my senior prom when he contacted me 20 years later. Now we have a relationship, albeit complicated & I'm grateful to have him back in my life.
Reviewer: mugglesmith (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 07:26 PM · On: Deceit
Bella has so much anger, so much resentment. She clearly has not dealt with her feelings for the Cullens. I am as always interested to see how this plays out. Still quite wary how this whole Demetri thing will pan out. I like how Carlie reacted to that quite a bit. Leah is interesting. Jake is as expected. I like that they challenge Bella. Great writing!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 06:55 PM · On: Deceit
I really like this story. Great job. I want to see Edward jealous but I don't want her to sleep with Demitri. But a little Edward suffering would be a good thing.
A+++
Reviewer: meyerfan (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 06:36 PM · On: Deceit
Im so enjoying this - can't wait for the next chapter. Will it continue at this pace or will it speed up a bit ( i am anxious for more bella/cullens interation!!!)
keep up the good writing!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 05:26 PM · On: Deceit
why is it every other person involved her can see and hear how much he still loves her i think even Carlie know that its the real deal ....but that is one bull headed female and its gonna take a ton of bricks falling on her head for her to get a clue ....this game she is playing with the new man in her life is not sitting well with anyone is it ?
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 05:13 PM · On: Deceit
I would like to see Edward kneel at Bellas' feet, and pour out this heart. Cry real tears, sob, beg Bella to forgive him and ..maybe to beg her to love him again?
Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 05:02 PM · On: Deceit
Poor Bella can't catch a break. One minute she thinks things are finally working out and the next everything is falling to shambles again. I was wondering how Carlie was going to take Demetri coming into the picture, obviously not as well as hoped. Can I say that recital is going to be crazy.
I also loved Rose's point of view. I can see her becoming good friends with Bella and in turn Emmett getting back in her good graces easier than the other's. I can't wait to see what you have planned next.
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