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Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 07:38 PM · On: Revelations
WOW!! So now Bella knows their side of the story. Now we're cooking with gas!
Author's Response: Ah...but they still have to earn her forgiveness...
I'll send Aro to you directly.
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 05:52 PM · On: Velathri
New reader, don't remember if I've checked in yet. Love this chapter. You naughty thing!
Reviewer: Monik_79 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Revelations
Awwww I really really love your Aro, he is a real father to Bella and is always ready to protect her. For a moment I tought that he was going to tell Bella that Edward still loves her, but he didn't. Well I guess that´s Eddie´s job, but I must tell you I don´t know what can he do to make Bella forgive him, what he did to her was to much, even the fact that he didn´t look for her when he found out the truth is awful. She deserved an apology from all of then, even if he was afraid to see her with someone else, but I guess we will have to wait to see if in the end Edward deserves Bella's love and forgivenes or if she is way better with the yummy Demetri. Well I wish you a merry christmans, kisses
Author's Response: I think everyone but Bella knows that he still loves her, so we'll just have to see if he earns forgiveness.
I'll send you Aro directly.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 04:12 PM · On: White Christmas
that was the perfect gift and it did not even need a bow
Author's Response: Probably better than a bunch of the gifts I got! ;)
Aro sent to you directly
Reviewer: keola (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 04:10 PM · On: White Christmas
so sweet
Author's Response: Glad you liked! I have fun with it...a break from all the angst
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 03:17 PM · On: White Christmas
Sniff, sniff that was beautiful,,,,,,well crap, now I'm rooting for Edward, but after she has some fun with Demetri! lol
Merry Christmas to you! Dixie
Author's Response: HA! Dixie Team Demetward....
HA!
Aro sent to you directly
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 02:54 PM · On: Revelations
What a great chapter! I love Aro, he really does love Bella doesn't he! lol I'm thrilled Bella is having the surgery! And! We get another chapter!!!!!!!
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 10:11 PM · On: SOMP - Jacob Outtake
This is the Jake I wished was protrayed more often. No smart talking, friend with deep connections and is committed to his wife.
Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 10:15 AM · On: SOMP - Jacob Outtake
Beautiful! Its always nice to get into Jacobs mind since he was the one there for Bella and taking care of Carlie! Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 07:33 PM · On: SOMP - Jacob Outtake
Jake and Carlie have such a special relationship, the last line got me teary eyed, so sweet! I really like your jake he is a really good guy. I want more out-takes in his POV!
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: robsrub (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 06:54 PM · On: SOMP - Jacob Outtake
MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, I need MORE! Great chapter again, oh and I NEED MORE!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 04:47 PM · On: SOMP - Jacob Outtake
You have to hand it to Jacob for being honest with Carlie about his true feelings about Edward in the beginning. He is assuring her no matter what kind of relationship she develops with her biological father that he would always love her and be there for her. Jake's a pretty good guy. I'm glad he's being over protective of Demitri, I'm not voting for even a fake relationship with him. Especially not a release buddy. Not cool. I do feel for Carlie her whole world has been turned upside down. Learning all the facts of her father's betrayal of her mother. In fact the entire family on her father's side abandoned her mother once she got pregnant. I think it's really big of her to even give them a chance much less try to build a relationship with them.
Reviewer: Purple Passion (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 04:23 PM · On: SOMP - Jacob Outtake
Aaawwww.....so sweet. Jacob will always love his little Carlie ;-)
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 01:54 PM · On: SOMP - Jacob Outtake
It was fun to get a look into Jake's head although there is just one small problem- women have to "X" chromosomes, & men have the "Y" I'm guessing it was just a type-o.
Looking forward to Bella & Edward fixing things between them!
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 01:00 PM · On: SOMP - Jacob Outtake
Loved it! Carlie is a wonderful daughter to all!
Reviewer: dinnie (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 06:26 AM · On: Wrong
for a person who has never written human fanfic this story is briiliant and i could not stop reading please dont be long in releasing your next chapter cant wait
Denise
Reviewer: MelPuc (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 09:42 PM · On: Humbleness
I like grovelling Edward! Great read!
Reviewer: robsrub (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 04:15 PM · On: Humbleness
Bravo!
Reviewer: Tinnabon1 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 11:54 AM · On: Humbleness
Merry Christmas! Thank you for another great chapter : )
Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 10:11 PM · On: Humbleness
I know Bella went through alot but I hope she soon realizes that he is sorry about what he did to her...even if she doesn't forgive him. Because I know sorry or not I would make him go through hell for what he did to me...if for no other reason than what his actions had done to my daughter.
Have a Merry Christmas! And thank you for he wonderful stories that you give to us all year long. I have truly loved all of your stories and am always super excited to see an update in my email.
Reviewer: madiloca (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 07:51 PM · On: Humbleness
Wow. Great chapter.
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 05:15 PM · On: Humbleness
I hope she tells Edward to rot in hell. Team Demetri!
Reviewer: TwilightTucker (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 04:53 PM · On: Humbleness
Ite's easy to feel his remorse now, but everytime I think of what he did to her....but that is potentially forgivalbe, the two things that make it tougher to forgive are that he did it PUBLICLY and that he went that many YEARS even after he learned the truth. Adn the final thing that is almost too much is how he didn't do something awful to Tanya after he found out what she did. He did that horrible stuff to Bella but turned around and let Tanya off the hook with nothing..."understanding' her. That makes him more of and A hole than words can describe.
I have a lot of trouble believing the private investigator stuff, when she was in Forks all along? And he has all this money and power in his name, the investigator couldn't find her and she lived that close. There is something kinda not measuring up about that.
I think it helped Bella to be blind so she wouldn't have to see all the tabloid crap of Edwards escapades.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 08:40 AM · On: Humbleness
Loved the chapter!
Merry Christmas to you also. Thank you for giving us the gift of your time in writing this amazing story and then sharing it with us!
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 08:24 AM · On: Humbleness
Bella doesn't believe that Edward ever had feelings for her. She learned to hate him and his family for their abandonment. Now they are all in her life again. Carlie a little like both of them. Believes her father's explanation. Not happy with the way they all treated Bella, but has the back up story to some what understand. Bella cannot believe the story Edward has given the reporters to protect her and Carlie. She believes some of them to be lies, but in reality everything Edward is the truth. She can't understand why he is risking his career admitting to his drug addiction, etc... He has approached her for a chance to explain where he was mentally at the time, the lies he was told, his sorrow, wants to know what he can do to make amends to win her respect and regard again. If at all, but he truly wants to be a part of her and Carlie's life in whatever capacity Bella can handle. Edward has lost total control of meeting with Bella. It's all up to Bella to make the next move of reaching out to Edward.
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