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Reviewer: iamafan10 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 04:34 PM · On: Observer
i love this story cant wait until e&b face to face alone
Author's Response: :) Its coming...its coming!
Reviewer: 321go (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 01:19 PM · On: Kisses of Acid
Love this chapter. Edward is so humble it's now sexy :-) Carlie seems like she's almost on the E&B bandwagon. Great job!
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 10:08 AM · On: Kisses of Acid
I can't wait for the after party!! Edward, Demetri & Bella all together that should be interesting! :)
Reviewer: tushka (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 05:52 AM · On: Kisses of Acid
As always a wonderful chapter that leaves me wanting MORE - thanks in advance for the quick update that's coming!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2012 12:11 AM · On: Welcome
"She's going to make me work for it..."? Ya' think, you douchebag? :/
I suddenly can't decide who's worse: Edward or Demetri.
Oh, poor dear Esme. I nearly cried with her, and when reading the scene where they opened the envelope with Bella's pictures inside it.
Rosalie had it right. I love your Rosalie, she's so perfect. And that's exactly what this story feels like! I can't believe this family would do that either.
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 11:41 PM · On: Love Surrendered
Wow, Demetri is a cad, isn't he? I'm surprised Bella is giving him the time of day! Is it because at least he's honest about his faults? Is it because he told her he knows she's not a money-grubber, which is the opposite of the Cullen's previous opinion of her?
I don't know what to think about this. I feel like Bella is a little fish who's going to get eaten up!
The scenes between Bella, Edward and Carlie on the phone were so good. Lots of great honesty from Carlie and tension when Edward got on the phone.
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 10:14 PM · On: Velathri
WHAT? I'm so glad I'm reading this after the next chapter has posted, because I would be soupsetifIhadtofigureitoutbutI'mintoomuchofahurrytogettothenextchaptersobye!
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 10:03 PM · On: Kisses of Acid
Poor Edward... Wanting to despise Demetri, but he's too darned likeable. And very clever of him to use Aro to an advantage.
Reviewer: mugglesmith (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 02:30 PM · On: Kisses of Acid
Quite lovely. I will admit that it irritates me when characters are so over the top talented, but I guess as long as Carlie isn't blessed with extreme talent in everything... This dinner should be interesting. I'm quite looking forward to it. Demetri is pleasant. How much harder it is when the wanted villain refuses to be a villain. Edward is so clearly frustrated. But he handled himself well, and I hope he continues to maintain control of his frayed emotions. Such a great story. Thank you,
Reviewer: LaBellamora (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 12:59 PM · On: Kisses of Acid
Gosh you pull me in more with each chapter. You write beautifully. I am always wanting more before I am finished reading the second paragraph. I love to read and it is such a great pleasure to have Fan fic authors who write so well and with such detail that I want more of their stories. i just read the Christmas outtake and today's chapter! what a bounty!
thank you! :) Happy New year
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 12:28 PM · On: Kisses of Acid
Still reading and thanks for the last 3 chapters. Your quite the task master. I hope your fingers aren't to tired from all your writing. ; )
All I can say is I am glad Bella knows all of the story of behind the Cullen's behaviour towards her 15 years ago. Your Bella is quite the little trouper even with her being blind. She has risen from the ashes of her past and made a name for herself all without the help of the Cullen's. She overcame despite all of the tragedy and unhappiness in her life.
Then we get a little peak into E/B's relationship at Xmas. They were so happy and in love. To think of the storm that's about to be unleased on them via Tanya and her poison. Gee, made me think--Tanya, with friends like these who needs enemies. She really pulled the wool over the Cullen's eyes. To me it would have been wise to have questioned everyones motives despite being friends of the family. If the Cullen's had done this maybe Edward wouldn't have gone down that path of darkness. I shake my head because I can't fathom being "friends" with someone who helped get their son hooked on drugs etc to the point Edward could have OD! That in itself makes me question the Cullens intelligence to see them still befriend Tanya even when they learned of her lies. She's such a peach of a person. LOL-not.
Loved the nervous Edward. Yes in his internal musings, his family should back off. Bella doesn't need the added presure. I like that he realises he has a daughter and that relationship should be the one nurtured because of all the time he missed. Carlie isn't going to be young and at home before she goes off to College etc. Time never stops or slows down it seems it keeps on trucking.
Um the dinner celebration, to be a fly on the wall to that occasion. I to am glad Bella decided to get the surgury. I look forward to seeing how the rest of this story plays out. To many wrongs have happened to many of these characters and it would be nice to have a few moments of peace.
Happy New Year, content1.
Even with the sad and tragic pasts of the Cullens and Bella and even the Blacks something good can come out of all of this. Although everyone wishes their pasts mistakes could be erased and all of them get a do over. One has to remember that their present and even their futures are wide open. So perhaps they can make better choices in every aspect of their lives so thier decisions not only benefit themselves, but others around them and beyond.
Later,
=)
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 09:44 AM · On: Monster
Ok, wow. I can't imagine how someone comes back from any of this. Firstly, your writing is beautiful. I don't even notice how lovely it is now, I'm just sucked in, but that proves how great it is. I'm not even concentrating on it now, but what happens. Yeah, that makes more sense in my head. XD
This is absolutely heartbreaking, on all sides. I adore these characters, but I'm in an odd place with the Cullens. Esme and Carslisle are absolutely obsoled - still love them. Edward and Alice, not so much. Even if they hated Bella, their reactions are so over-the-top. I guess maybe I can see how they would be so violent and volitale with her, but... I think I'm seeing this more on the Bella/Carlie/Jacob side. They were flat out wrong and really cruel!
I think this is the first time I've been unsure about Bella and Edward together. I love that Bella is such a strong, independant character in this story. Please tell me she, or Jacob (or Carlie - ha!) is going to kick his ass. PLEASE! I need vindication!
Sincerely,
HOOKED ON THIS STORY!
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 07:59 AM · On: Kisses of Acid
Loving this story! Don't let haters get you down. I love any story that's written well no matter the pairing or outcome. It's the writing that counts. Continue on!
Reviewer: MomLovesEdward (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 06:49 AM · On: Kisses of Acid
I do hope that Edward does get to talking to Bella about the misunderstanding that broke them up before she makes a mistake with someone other then Edward ... I am just a sucker for happy endings I guess ..
Reviewer: petersoll (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 05:40 AM · On: Kisses of Acid
Love it, but when will we finally see the apology?
Reviewer: Avabell (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 05:12 AM · On: Kisses of Acid
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: hbgo (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2012 04:25 AM · On: Kisses of Acid
Enjoying this story and looking forward to seeing how it plays out!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 09:54 PM · On: Kisses of Acid
I loved it! What is the story behind the charm that Jake gives her for her performances? Edwards playing a smart game. He's being humble and contrite to the people closet to Bella. Why do I have a feeling Jake will end up helping Edward win Bella back? lol
I hope you have a wonderful 2012! Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 09:37 PM · On: Kisses of Acid
awesome job! cant wait for the rest of Aro's POV! Happy new year.
Reviewer: vicki1969 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 08:43 PM · On: Green Eyes
I can't get enough! Love Edward saving Carlie by sending in Aro. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 08:32 PM · On: Karma
So emotional and heartbreaking. Poor Cullens. I don't blame Bella.
Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 06:21 PM · On: Kisses of Acid
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm sure dinner is going to be an interesting affair. I also can't wait to see Aro's confrontation with Tanya. I can't wait to see some confrontations between Edward and Demetri.
Reviewer: TwilightTucker (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 04:32 PM · On: Kisses of Acid
This is agony
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 04:24 PM · On: Kisses of Acid
Edward was really overwhelmed about going to his daughter's first piano recital. Concerned about what to wear to it. What a thoughtful thing to call Jake about the flowers so he didn't step on Jake's toes regarding any established traditions between Jake (dad) and Carlie (daughter). That was really nice. Surprising though, it's like he's really trying to fit into Carlie's life without causing too many waves. He wants a relationship with his daughter that he just learned existed. Pale pink roses how lovely and sweet. Bella attending the recital with Aro and his family with Demetri as her escort. Wonderful, Carlie didn't appear to like it very much by her reaction to Edward. Demetri constantly calling Edward Anthony was annoying. Including him in conversation Edward thought was polite I thought was rubbing Edward's nose in the fact that he was Bella's date for the evening. Just including Edward in their conversation because Edward was biological father as courtesy, but he held original conversation with Bella. Edward's nieces were cute each wanting to be Edward's date for the evening. Aro taking control over the after celebration for Carlie's performance not allowing her grandparents or father to step up and treat for the evening. At least it appears Marcus was inviting the Cullens to join them for the evening meal and victory celebrating get together. Give time for Edward and Carlie to spend time discussing how moved he was by her execution of her piece. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Monik_79 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2012 03:45 PM · On: Kisses of Acid
Okey, I get that Edward wants to respect bella´s wishes and for her to be the one who says when she is ready to talk to him, but please, all he is going to do until then is watch Bella and Demetri from the sides, moping around and nothing else. Yes I understand that he deserves to see Bella with someone else after the lifestyle he choose to live all of this years, but comme on, if he doesn´t start to do something and soon, he is going to lose Bella and for good this time, because I thing there is a serious chance for her to fell in love with Demetri. There is also something else that is bothering me, this is the third time someone mentions his concerns for Edward if Bella doesn´t give him and opportunity. Why? Perhaps something happened to him in the past that makes everyone (including him) worried about his reaction if things don´t go well between him and B. Well I guess I just have to be patient and wait to see what happens, see you next week and happy new year.
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