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Reviews For Sins of my Past
Reviewer: newtwilightmom (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 06:12 PM · On: Light

I love your story and am sorry I never reviewed before. I can't wait to see what happens when she sees Edward again. Great story!

Reviewer: angelhallic (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 04:31 PM · On: Light

When is 700 reviews a failure? I absolutely adore this story, even if this is my first review. It is one of my favs. I cant wait for Anthony's reaction to the surgery and not being informed when it happened.

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 04:09 PM · On: Light

Happy, happy that Bella could see Carlie!  By the way, ignore the negative stuff.  I, for one, enjoy this story.  I'd say >600 reviews ain't too shabby either!  It's your story to tell.  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: psymplemind (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 03:37 PM · On: Light

Well, I started it and i couldn't put it down. Excellent to say the least. When i read your comments of what others have done or said I want to whip somebody's ass(es)

 Why do some people just want to be mean or negative?  The idea is to help the writer.  Or am I too naive/optimistic? My day-job is to help young people realize their strength's academically and develop their potentials...what kind of mentor (or friend) criticizes in negative terms...btw I truly think you are a terrific storyteller...this storyline is wonderful (to me). Im thinking Edward is going to be damaged/maimed by either the girl's angry father or the rapist...somebody is going to damage him or kill him (I'm praying for the damage and no killing!!!lolol). After awake in the infinite cold I don't think I'll ever recover from either of them getting killed!!!!!!  They've both paid a terrible priceours ouch penance already. Demetrius is charming and wonderful...but NO!!!!!

your writing is filled with incredible wisdom and strength of character for every person in the story.  I'm thinking you are or were a psych major...you know too much or you are uncannily gifted in counseling/psychotherapy.  So you go girl and keep on writing your heart out,,,,you're doing a great job (and thanks for sharing your story with all of us)

Reviewer: ehayter (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 11:50 AM · On: Green Eyes

Wow, I really love this story.  I love how Bella stands up to everyone but she really does miss Edward, I hope she will give him a chance to explain.  I could n ot stop crying during the chapter.  Thank you for a great story I now always look forward to Sundays as I get my next chapter.

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 06:17 AM · On: Light

Dont listen to the haters! This is a great story! Love it... 

I feel bad for Edward but I completely understand where Bella is coming from. Not sure how I like Felix or Demetri! I mean I like them, but I am team Edward all the way! lol. 

So glad Bella is beginning to see now. Even if it is not a full thing. It's nice for her to be able to see her daughter and her family and friends. 

Thank you for a wonderful story! 

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 09:02 PM · On: Light

The day of the eye surgery has finally arrived. Carlie so anxious to know how her mom is doing.  she is waiting with Seth, her dad Jake, Aunt Leah, Grandfather Carlisle (Poppa), Felix for the surgeon to come in with the updates of the surgery.  Livingston came in said surgery was successful.  More scarring than expected might need additional surgery in another year and possibly need glasses once bandages were removed.  Bella was still in recovery until vitals were stable before returned to her room.  Carlie was so excited her mom finally decided to have the surgery she called her grandmother Esme and told her all about it including grandfather was mom's doctor.  Thank goodness Bella when told that Carlie had told Esme about surgery she called to get Carlisle off the chopping block.  I can only imagine the lamblasting Carlisle got when he got home after Esme found out and he didn't tell her about the upcoming surgery. Bella smoothed things over for him.  Took pity on Carlisle especially since he kept his word and didn't tell any of the Cullen family of pending surgery.  the exciting part of this chapter was when Livingston removed the shield and bandages -- Bella was able to see light/shapes.  When lights dimmed and she opened her eyes, her first glance of the world was the face of her daughter.  The most beautiful sight in the world to her.  The one she has been wanting to see all these years.  Seeing that Carlie is her duplicate with Edward's eyes.  While still under she was dreaming of Edward and him leaving.  She called his name out loud.  All the family there, Felix, and Aro heard her call his name.  That's when Carlie let her mom know she was there.  Bella has been thinking a lot about Edward lately. My favorite part was Bella's reaction on seeing Carlie for the first time.  It was wonderful.  It brought tears to my eyes.  Have been wondering what Edward's reaction will be when he learns Bella has had the surgery and he wasn't made aware of it.  Probably be hurt and angry.  Maybe even regret that he couldn't be there for support and share the moment when the shield and bandages removed.  Sharing the moment of her seeing their daughter.

 

Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 08:12 PM · On: Light

LOVED IT!  Oh my goodness, that was beautiful!  Who cares if it's not exactly true to a real life surgery?  I anxiously await the next chapters!

Reviewer: 1ljreader (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 08:06 PM · On: Light

Yay! So glad Carlie is this first face she saw! What a sight to behold. Update soon. :)

Reviewer: Alice1206 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 01:41 PM · On: Light

I thought this might be of use.

http://yourlife.usatoday.com/health/story/2012-01-23/Study-Stem-cells-may-aid-vision-in-blind-people/52757218/1

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 01:33 PM · On: Light

Yeah!!! Please let her & Edward start to work on their crappy past!!!  :)

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 11:03 AM · On: Light

Thanks for letting her open her eyes and not making us wait

Reviewer: Create3333 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 10:49 AM · On: Light

This is one of my favorite stories! Very much not a failure! Keep the updates coming!!!

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 10:39 AM · On: Light

Powerful buildup during this chapter. Glad to see that there are positive things to come following the surgery.

I don't like reviewing every single chapter of a story because that's just not my thing. Rest assured that I, for one, am keeping up with the updates and throroughly enjoying this "dismal failure" of a story!

Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 10:24 AM · On: Light

Wow!  What a great chap...btw..where did Edward go?  Why was he not present?  I must of missed a chap?  Cant wait til the next chap..hope it will be soon, sitting here with a big smile on my face..so happy the surgery worked and can't wait till she sees Edward for the 1st time.thanks for sharing your story!  xo

Reviewer: britojhb (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 09:51 AM · On: Light

I love this story! And I write this reveiw with tears streaming down my cheeks!!  How wonderful for Bella!!  As a Mom, I cannot imagine what a moment that was for her.....

BTW where is Edward?

Nor can I believe someone told you this story is a dismal failure?!?!? 

I can't wait for the next update!!

Keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 09:34 AM · On: Light

Yay, it worked!!!! What an amazing procedure. I can only imagine what it must be like to see your child for the first time. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: susolgi2004 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 05:08 AM · On: Light

Thanx, TwiLoverSue and of course, you!!!

That was wonderful, as usual!

Reviewer: Crazy-Curly (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 04:58 AM · On: Light

I really enjoyed that chapter, and congradulation for having the courage to writhe from bella's perspective when they take the bandages of, I would have been terefide to do so since I'v never experienced that kind of experience myself.

this latest chapter was really good, over all the story is amazing, I'm juste a little frustrated that bella and Edward havent even talked since it's starde, is it gonna happen at all or should i just expect them not to get togther at all in this story?

Reviewer: LaBellamora (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 03:51 AM · On: Light

okay had to stop crying before I could write.  amazing Chapter!!  I am sorry more people do not know about your awesome story, but YOU ARE NOT a failure.  thei story is not an epuc fail- screw whomever said that.  you just need to advertise or get the word out about theo fab story!  people cannot read what they do not know about.  if they kneww they would read becasue we all lOVE Great writing and this is GREAT writring.  you have depth of hcaracter and you entice us each chapter to come back for more.  start a blog thread and invite everyone.  go on to the boards on here and talk about your process.  engage others.  put your story link in your email signature, twitter about it I promise if more know about it, they will come.

I loved thsi chapter and I am so excited she had the sugery.  thank you for sharing.  :) 

Reviewer: s3xyr0s (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 01:07 AM · On: Light

Great story! Do not listen to those who says it is a failure. Only good writers get those comments because of jealousy! =]

Reviewer: stormy315 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 12:08 AM · On: Light

great chapter...i am really glad surgery went well and bella has regained her vision....how will edward react to this news? can´t wait for read more....

Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2012 09:39 PM · On: Light

I love this story i look forward to reading it the second my smart phone says it is in my email box. This was a cute chapter. I am so impatient though and this story is working out so slowly. I really do enjoy every chapter, I just always wish the next one was right there. You have a truly addicting plot line. Don't let anyone tell you that this isn't a successful stories, that comes from someone bitter and jealous of your determination. 

Reviewer: katlyn_eliz (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2012 08:36 PM · On: Light

Ahh such an emotional ending to the chapter for Bella to finally be able to see her daughter for the first time. That was truly beautiful to read. I'm glad the surgery went well, and I hope as time goes on, she'll be able to see more clearly. This was a great chapter, and I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2012 08:33 PM · On: Light

What a rude thing to say and soooo not true!  You have to go by how many people are reading it but more importantly how the reviewers that you have are enjoying it!

OMG you captured the emotions of everyone really well!  I was so nervous for Bella to get her bandages off and then she saw Carlie for the first time it brought tears to my eye's!

Take care, Dixie

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