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Reviews For Sins of my Past
Reviewer: Elleg (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 09:18 PM · On: Orders

Damn it! I'm trying to be patient, I really am, but there constant misunderstanding, and lack of communicating is making me want to smack them both! Can't wait for the recital, hopefully a little progress???
P.S. I didn't get the teaser from last week.

Reviewer: no reservations (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 09:15 PM · On: Orders

I loved it. I thought it was perfect. I loved how Edward came to accept the consequences of his actions. I felt terrible for Bella when Edward told her he loved her. She must be so confused. His past history certainly wouldn't lead her to believe that.

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 08:51 PM · On: Orders

Bella screwed up royally in more ways than one.  I cannot wait to see what happens at the festival.  I'm sure it'll be one big cluster fuck.  Ha!

Reviewer: Shelindrea (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 08:46 PM · On: Orders

you have found such a rich tone to this, it is engrossing beyond imagination. I cannot tell you how nious I am for each new installment. It is truly engaging and palpable.

 

Wonderful work!

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 08:13 PM · On: Orders

I think that Bella was not prepared for his touch. She is guarded in her demeanor. Why, after what anyone with the last name Cullen did to her. I do not blame her. She has to SUCK IT UP for her daughter.  That is just what it is. If she relaxes and decides to give dumbward a chance then I think she should talk it over with Carlie first. Carlie not Jacob or Leah.  Jacob and Leah will have a hard time turning loose of the past, because it hurt her so much.

 

Sigh, drama

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 08:06 PM · On: Orders

Poor Edward! Will he EVER catch a break?

Reviewer: ihdrab (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 07:41 PM · On: Orders

that was great please next chapter be posted this week im dying here...

Reviewer: mjwc77 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 07:02 PM · On: Orders

Loved it!!!  And I did get the outtakes..thank you!!!!  I'm hoping that Demetri now has enough respect for Edward that he'll back off of Bella.  Looking forward to Carlie's recital, to see how Bella reacts to Edward this time.  Thank you for the long chapter! 

Reviewer: gadberry1 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 06:39 PM · On: Orders

I still love it. Well done. Thanks.

Reviewer: Khrystyne (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 06:34 PM · On: Orders

What a crazy chapter! Poor Edward, I can't wait to see what Demetri is going to pull, I know he has to have some sort of plan. Edward is definitely not going to get any rest once he shows up at the festival. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 06:29 PM · On: Orders

Keep going...how about two or three updates a week??  Of course, I'm sure you have NOTHING else going on in your life ;} hahaha...loving this story, now IZ'm hanging on the edge of my seat waiting.....

Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 06:13 PM · On: Orders

that went nothing like I thought...but we clearly see over reactions on Edward's part...but understandable given the whole story and how everything is just one bumbling mess after another...people thinking each others thought and feelings and actions....just a bumbling  mess...so I will patiently wait for more..... love the story...

Reviewer: no reservations (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 09:27 PM · On: Green Eyes

Just read Edwards POV. Loved it!

Reviewer: monkeyluver (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 05:26 PM · On: Hole in the Heart

Wowwww, I'm in tears poor Edward he's in so much pain. Cant wait for the next chapter. luv it.

Reviewer: Avabell (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2012 11:19 AM · On: Hole in the Heart

:)

Author's Response:

Glad you liked!   I'll send Edward to you directly!

Reviewer: mjwc77 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2012 07:06 PM · On: Hole in the Heart

woo hoo!!!  i'm so glad she went to talk with him!  i hate that she calls him anthony, and i wish he would have said something.  i want so badly for her to forgive him, and i can't wait to read what that next chapter brings!  thank you!!!



Author's Response:

I actually have to write the next chapter!  That is how far behind I am! sigh...

Glad you are enjoying.

Sending Edward to you directly!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 10:00 PM · On: Hole in the Heart

Definitely a lot of reasons to celebrate for Bella and the extended family.  She can see up close, but not clearly.  With glasses gives her great eye sight.  When she's home alone looking at the pictures in Carlie's room.  Especially the ones of Edward (Anthony) of the past with her and the current with their daughter.  Bella has admitted to herself that she has not stopped loving Edward.  She goes to his new apartment to talk with Edward.  Bella doesn't want to go over the past.  She has heard it all through Aro.  She wants to start from now and move forward for the sake of Carlie.  Edward keeps bashing himself in front of her.  Edward hasn't been made aware of the eye surgery so has no idea that Bella can actual see him and his expressions as he tells her his emotions with his apologies and devastations.  Edward is trying to explain why and Bella is attempting to understand.  Edward just declared that he loved her back then, during the separation, and still today.  Bella loves him also.  Looking forward to Bella's reaction to Edward's declaration of love.  Will Bella admit her feelings towards Edward? Next chapter should be full of new and exciting revelations.  Carlie and Seth are ready for Bella and Edward to get back together.  When Bella calls Edward "Anthony" it really hurts him.  He would rather her call him Edward. 



Author's Response:

I love to read how you synopsis everything!  Hope you continue to like!

Edward sent to you directly!

Reviewer: gabella2423 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 07:33 PM · On: Hole in the Heart

Fantastic chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Hope you continue to enjoy!  I have to actually start writing!

Edward sent to you directly.

Reviewer: DeliciousMess (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 05:20 PM · On: Hole in the Heart

Great chapter!  Great story, period.  I like reading about B&E as adults.



Author's Response:

Glad you are liking!  I am having such fun with this story!

Edward sent to you directly.

Reviewer: karin9166 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 02:28 PM · On: Hole in the Heart

OK, here's your review:  I LOVE IT!!  But, I wish it was already 90 chapters long...so I could just keep reading :}   Please don't leave us hanging for very long!! ???  Thank you for sharing your gift!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoy my little attempt at writing!  This is my stress reduction!

Edward sent directly to you!

 

Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 08:32 AM · On: Hole in the Heart

Also, there's such a thing as TOO moral. When Bella feels guilty about hiding her vision, after all this scumbag put her through...I really want to bitchslap her.



Author's Response:

DON'T worry...  

Trust me that I won't let him off easy!

Edward sent to you directly.

Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 08:29 AM · On: Hole in the Heart

That was a monolith of a chapter yet you always leave us wanting more! I guess you're just that good. ;)

Reviewer: koolchick262003 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 08:27 AM · On: Hole in the Heart

Love  it!! Can't wait till next update.



Author's Response:

I have to actually start writing it!  AARGH!

I'll send you Edward...hopefully you'll enjoy that!

Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2012 08:12 AM · On: Seth Outtake

Seth is level-headed and well-spoken, though I don't agree with a word he said! If there was nothing to be gained from the past, there would be no such thing as history. Doomed to repeat it, and all that. I wonder how he would react if he knew all the dirty details of what Edward had done.

Reviewer: no reservations (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 07:09 PM · On: Green Eyes

I love the pace of the last chapter. I could really feel how hard just being alone with each other is for them. When Edward's hands were shaking so badly he was spilling water on the floor and Edward had to tell Bella to breath my heart went out to them. It had to be heartbreaking for Edward to have Bella confirm that he has brought nothing positive to get life and to have her keep calling him Anthony.

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