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Reviewer: Lethaltxhunny (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2013 08:02 AM · On: Velathri
I am so enjoying reading this story. You have taken them on a whole new twist.
I do hope the negative reviews don't get u down too much tho. Ignore the ignorance that people want to share.
Reviewer: Lethaltxhunny (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2013 09:42 PM · On: Green Eyes
wow!!! reading this for a first time since i have read a couple of your other stories and this is a great first chapter!
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2013 11:40 PM · On: SOMP Outtakes 37-42
Tanya's outtake made this whole story for me. Some people truly are rotten to the core and there's no fixing them.
There is a significant amount of repetition in the outtakes. At least three of them are posted in identical form in multiple chapters.
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2013 06:35 PM · On: SOMP Outtakes - Chapters 15 through 22
I keep coming back to this story, and it's really for the secondary characters. I love the idea of the Volturi brothers as a Soprano-ish family business. You've made them elusively sinister without turning them into caricatures, and it's delightful.
Oh, how I wish they would have completely destroyed Tanya. Maybe it's the Sicilian in me.
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 02:03 PM · On: Forgiveness
I am glad you gave Aro and Cia a little more time here with the family. I really think you did everyone justice here! I loved the story. Thank you!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 01:52 PM · On: Merry Christmas
This was fan-tastic! Whew!
I need a smoke after that!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 04:22 AM · On: First Kiss
So sweet, young love! Did I mention how much I heart Seth?
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 04:07 AM · On: Unafraid
I absolutely adore what you've created here. As I lay here in bed reading, with tears in my eyes, I cannot help but feel blessed to have come across your work here on Twilghted. Specifically this story! I am so happy for the family! Thanks to your words here, I can vividly picture the entire story. Edward has come so far, and he has blown me away with who he has become! My favorite part of the story was the barbeque, Edward risking his life to protect the family, the wedding, Edward and Carlie playing piano together, this chapter, the opportunity to hear the character POVs, Aro, Deme, too many to list. What I liked least? I guess how quickly they became preggers... Was looking for some more hotness lol! Seriously, no complaints at all from me! Thank you so very much for allowing us to partake of your art! It is awesome!
chyla
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2013 03:26 AM · On: Gifts
Yeah, I guess I knew it was coming, I just wish they would've had the time together to enjoy Carlie and matrimony for a bit... I'm sure the tabloids will love this!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 06:16 PM · On: With this Ring
I enjoyed thoroughly! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 04:46 PM · On: Under the Old Oak Tree
Beautiful!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 03:53 PM · On: Sunrise and Twin Furies
Oh I am sitting here crying! So happy! What a wonderful way to ask for forever ....
10000 stars! *********************************************************
Chyla
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 10:15 AM · On: Declaration of War
Expectation. Met!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 09:56 AM · On: Protector
So beautiful at the end! I am very happy that Carlie and Edward can share their love of music and give the family peace at the same time! I like how the story is progressing and cannot wait for the walls to crash down around Elizabeth and Deme. I heart Deme!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 03:25 AM · On: Chase
Wow, such suspense! I am happy the perp,was caught and that Seth and Sam 2 are ok. I wonder who the kidnapper is though..
Very well written!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 03:00 AM · On: Nirvana
I heart Esme!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 02:33 AM · On: Bless Your Heart
I'm picturing Jasper looking like the Jesus character in the Godspell now... Lol
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 10:54 AM · On: Everything
You're doing a great job with this story! I was a little unsure of how this was going to play out, given the main premise of the story. I think that you've handled the transition to forgiveness and family very well! Bravo to you for that. I cannot wait to read on!
Thank you for sharing your work with us. I can't even imagine how difficult this is for you.
Chyla
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 10:07 AM · On: Seth and Carlie
Lovely!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 10:01 AM · On: Assessment
Can you please end all of the chapters this way??? Pretty please???
Seriously, I enjoyed the chapter immensely. I feel that Edward needed to make amends to Bella's family, including her Quileute ones, as he made strides here. I am glad Billy got to witness Edward the healer first hand.
I hope these two get their forever!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 09:59 PM · On: Souls
That was some powerful shit! I need a shower and a cigar after reading! Well done, content, well done!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2013 08:32 PM · On: Foundation
Loved it,
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 08:51 PM · On: Broken Doll
Sam2 has had such a horrible life.. It pains me to read it...breaks my heart :-(
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 08:47 PM · On: Cohesion
Really enjoying the story. Your description of the barbeque is so vivid..I feel like I'm right there! Well moving on to the next chapter now... Will check in later
Chyla
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2013 03:24 PM · On: Line in the Sand
Whew! I think we all needed that. Give In Edward! Get out of your head...Just. Feel.
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