Loved the idea of reincarnated lives entwined between them all. Bella and Edward each time trying to get together forever. Only to be manipulated by the monster to keep them apart. James abusive, possessive, and hypocrit throughout each life. Just wanting to possess Bella as his, but not keep his vows to her sacred either. Double standard if you ask me. It was okay for him to cheat on her, but she was to be locked in his four walls to be treated with disrespect, crudeness, and violence for his enjoyment. Granted for the time period it was the norm, but later he had no true claim on her. After all he was the one to kill her in the beginning. So only fitting Edward killed him to save her and him for all time current and their futures. Loved the ending of them starting again for a long happy life together in their new time.

Author's Response:

Thank you. I admit, I was a little worried how the end, (with Edward killing James) would read out. But it was the only way I could see it working out; for the exact reasons you pointed out. So thank you, it's a relief to see it did come across the way I saw it. :)

I loved it. It was a beautiful story. At times it was a bit confusing because of the flashbacks. I couldn't figure out who was talking at first but I reread the sentences a few times.

I would have loved to have seen the interaction between Bella and the Cullens more too. :(

A suggestion, use the line breaks to divide the changes.

 

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and for the feedback! It's always nice to hear an outside view. Sometimes I get too lost in my head. Lol

holy shit holy shit holy shit no no no this has to end they hav eto find tehir happy ending call 911 she can be saved...right??

Great ending!

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Thank you!

Oh so good! Thank you for sharing your story with us. I look forward to reading your next venture.

Foreverward

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Thank you

Great ending...Loved the story so much.  Have a good rest and then...

Thanks - Xanath

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Thank you

Oh no! Killer Edward.

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Thanks for reading. :)

i surf here regularly looking for finds such as this and here ive found a jewel

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I WANT HEA!!!! I demand it!!!! James has got to stop! He's like....scary! Why can he remember so clearly but Edward didn't? 

Author's Response:

I figure it's because he's seen and interacted with them in the past; like Bella. Edward didn't really in the last life, so it's harder for him to remember. :)

Ahhhh!  Loved the chapter.  Cannot wait for the next update!

 

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thank you

Holy shit holy shit holy shit no no no no  Post again soon they nee dto end this curse shes under please post again soon

So glad that Bella and Edward are finally on the same page. The flashbacks of Bella's previous lives still freak me out! Damn this woman has suffered. Got chills when Edward asked what happened to her when he dies, Gah!! How he asked her to promise not to do that again! Heart breaking!!! Reading on!!!